From the Fetus************

Let me give the author a five-point rating first. I feel pretty good after reading the first five chapters. I hope that the author will write about the male protagonist's adulthood as soon as possible and not write about the childhood plot that runs through most of the novel. Don't write childish plots later. Why would you prevent the birth of your younger sister and younger brother for the sake of Chang's health? This is an abnormal mentality. The Chang family is a descendant of military generals. She practiced martial arts since she was a child, and she still aspires to join the army. She is in good physical condition, and in real history, she also gave birth to four children (I hope you won't write about the unofficial history of the Monk Temple. And don't write about the unofficial history that Zhu Di is not the biological child of Empress Ma). The author is very encouraged.

This is the most historically accurate gear in a novel I have ever read. If Zhu Xiongying and Chang were still alive, Zhu Yunxi would be the carefree child described by the author. Rather than being written in some other articles when Zhu Xiongying and Chang were still alive, Zhu Yunxi was still cowardly and bullied. I think the most favorite part of this novel is the treatment of Zhu Yunwen. After the Lu family was deposed, although Zhu Yunwen was raised under the name of the Chang family, Zhu Yunwen has not been written about in the entire text since then. It should be the Chang family and Zhu Biao who handed over Zhu Yunwen. He was taken care of and raised by a nanny and servants, but did not receive the same treatment environment as the heroic Yunxi. This is a normal manifestation. In other novels, it is disgusting that Zhu Yunwen can grow up happily with the heroic Yunxi after the Lu family was killed.

I'll help myself! Everyone is welcome to comment. I will read every comment. If you have any comments or suggestions, you can comment. Any imperfect details or ideas are fine. As long as it is reasonable, the author mainly provides advice [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] Let me reply in a unified way. Some readers said that the protagonist was a graduate student before time travel, and the previous chapters were a bit too childish. Let me explain a little, and there are several considerations. First: the protagonist was an orphan in his previous life. In this life, Tianhu starts with everything. Let's re-experience the childhood that was missing in the previous life. Second, and most importantly, everyone knows that as a time traveler, the most important thing at first is to save life, and then to change. Especially when facing Zhu Yuanzhang, the founding emperor with such a suspicious character, he must first prove his worth and gain trust. Before that, acting in a way that a child should be is undoubtedly the best disguise and choice! Of course, the setting of this novel is that Zhu Yuanzhang can hear his grandson's voice, but the protagonist does not know it. I hope these explanations satisfy everyone! Thank you 🙏

Overall, it's good. I just feel that there's some psychology in the middle where the protagonist is really written as a three-year-old child. Maybe it's because he was portrayed as a graduate student at the beginning, and then suddenly became cute(?) Later.

Very nice! Very sharply written.

It's beautiful, please give it a thumbs up to the author.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

7-Star review. There were no horseshoes in the Ming Dynasty. Zhu Yuanzhang came up with it based on the protagonist's voice. It's awesome. [Chigua] This author mainly listens to advice and changes the problem. The writing style is quite good so far.

Although it is a time-travel drama, the content is logical

I hope this hidden danger of Lu's can be dealt with as soon as possible

The writing makes people want to read on

This is the most interesting of the Ming Dynasty novels I have read.

Good-looking [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] The pace is tight and not procrastinating

It's okay, it's good in the early stage, but it doesn't feel engaging in the later stage. Lao Zhu and Zhu Biao are just like NPCs, they just ask the protagonist if they need anything.

The writing is okay, but I don't have much understanding of the time of historical figures. Zhu Biao also had two daughters there.