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It is worth reading carefully. The writing style is elegant and plain, and the wording is concise and beautiful. It will not be boring to read [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] A rare and thoughtful work, worthy of five-star recommendation [already planted] [already planted] [already planted] [bookshelf plus one] [bookshelf plus one] [bookshelf plus one]

The writing is okay. But are you sure you are writing about rebirth?

The writing is good, the protagonist's IQ is good at layout, and the pace is fast and not draggy.

Overall not bad

Since it is rebirth, does your family know the most basic spells? Was your previous life in vain?

It's well written, but too little. I hope it will be a single heroine or no heroine, not a harem story!

Soothing language and rich plot

Why is the pig owner so selfish?

Vivid writing and delicate plot

The content of the book is very good, but there are some errors. Sometimes Hong and Yong are indistinguishable. There was one time in the early Yuan Dynasty when the head of the family was of a different generation, and the realm was written out of order, but it did not affect the reading experience.

The system and plot of this book are very similar to Sui Qiu's Immortal Road Supreme, but there are some changes in the plot content. I hope the author can come up with new ideas.

Come on, it looks okay

Well written [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's the Xianlu system that I applied. It seems like I've changed a few things.

Every day is a chapter, and I am obviously stuck.