Outer God************

The soul of the protagonist, a time traveler, was probably eaten by the local natives. It was affected by the memory and became less like a time traveler and more like a native. After all, it was the time traveler who really regarded himself as a local. But the writing is very good, but there are still many small flaws. Players are players. If you are not a warrior, you cannot always be in the game. After all, the outside body is still alive. The author just skipped these small details.

So far, I feel good, and the setting is quite attractive to me, but I personally feel that some of the plots are not vivid and natural enough, and the language description is a bit mechanical. It is like listing the plots required for each point of 1234, and then filling in text after each point to modify the plot. Then, there were too many reactions, sometimes just "respect", and the top management was shocked and a little tired. Anyway, come on

Not like a player, not like a time traveler

Players from the fourth natural disaster world. There are quite a lot of this kind of themes on Tomato. But the plot explosion that this book should have is quite good in terms of narrative rhythm. At least I still have the desire to read on. It is better than most books of the same type and is worth reading. Choosing to use indigenous people to guard instead of waiting for the fourth natural disaster to wait for players is a finishing touch. This book is worth reading. I hope the author can update it soon, thank you!

It's not bad, it's okay, the protagonist has assimilated into the locals, but it's true that the fourth natural disaster mentioned in the comments is not that obvious, except for the standard fear of death. I can occasionally write a chapter or two about the daily life of the world of the Fourth Disaster, about the spread of the game and the daily life of players after they go offline.

One of the few good books. One thing is that the protagonist thinks a bit like a local after time travel, but it doesn't hurt. However, the protagonist of the fourth natural disaster also has a player identity and can participate. It is no longer a single behind-the-scenes story. This is something other fourth natural disaster books do not have. Good reviews. The only shortcoming is that there are too few chapters. I read them all in a while. When will the author update?

It looks good, but there are a bit few people, and the protagonist should also have some ability to fight enemies.

The plot is exciting, ups and downs, and unconventional. It's different from the novels I've read before, and it's very fresh. The story is very exciting, I look forward to the follow-up development [Sending my heart]

The writing is very good. There are some flaws but they don't affect the reading. It would be much better to treat the protagonist as a fusion of two personalities. The macro narrative and the small stories one by one are really good. This book is really interesting. On a macro level, humans beat evil gods until they screamed, one by one; on a micro level, every battle is full of blood and tears in details.

There is no genetic medicine in this world😅 And this system is too low-level, it feels useless (´--`;)

It's pretty good, come on

Looking good so far

Very creative and impressive

Good-looking, love to watch, watch more

It's pretty good-looking, there's nothing wrong with it. Good luck, author💪

Well written, the details of the battle could be more detailed. Can be more touching

It looks good so far, keep it up

I think this book is excellent

Nice, novel and good-looking

So far it looks pretty good

It's okay, I don't see any big poisonous spots.

Nice! ! Ahhhhhhhhh ? Why is the rating so low? Except for a few poisonous spots, I think it looks good?

A book worth recommending

My wild boar has also eaten fine chaff. I haven't read it for a long time without skipping chapters. I must support it with five stars. Please support the author for updates. Brothers, please give more five-star reviews. Only when the ratings come out can the book get better and the author earn more. Five chapters will be updated every day - the author himself promised [sneaky laugh]

Good book, feels like watching a science fiction movie

It looks good. I can't say anything else, but it looks good.

I actually started drooling from the corners of my eyes while reading the book. It was such a tragic and grand scene at the beginning, I really hope it can keep going on!

It feels pretty good. I recommend it. The plot is okay and the game is okay, but there is too little.

Not bad, looking forward to the development of the plot later

It's a more traditional player article, interesting and readable, but I don't know that the follow-up will not be until the end of the game before the open beta of the game. I hope that this setting can be arranged in the future.