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After reading the first dozen chapters, I couldn't help but want to write some reviews (my personality dictates that I like to write something while reading). Let me talk about the conclusion first. It felt very comfortable to read, so comfortable that I didn't realize it was in the first person at first (it may also be related to my indifference. The first person is not something worth paying attention to for me, but as far as I know, this writing method is not easy to write, and has many limitations compared to the third person) For me, the pace of this book is very good. It is a typical Western fantasy novel. It is comfortable to read at the beginning and not too jumpy, which is a plus for me. The only problem with the writing method is that I can't figure out how big the lucky doll is. It feels like it is sometimes big and sometimes small sitting on the shoulders. I don't understand this point. I actually don't think anything about the male protagonist taking in the boss. At the beginning, he said that he was a poor and good person in his previous life. It might be better and more reasonable to expand it further, or write the protagonist more casually, just to let the boss take him in and train him in the future. Looking forward to the follow-up. If you have any thoughts later, I will write them down later. The more I read the book, the more generic it became. I felt it deviated from the title. It was marked as redemption. To be honest, I felt that the redemption flavor was very weak. There was too little interaction between the maids. The first-person perspective was still a bit of a drama. Some other characters were inserted in the middle. I felt like I wanted to write a group portrait. But to be honest, I didn't click on this book to read this. I'll wait and see later.

So far, the writing in the early stage is really good, with rich and delicate emotions. Although it is cliche, it is not boring at all. If you like watching western fantasy, I highly recommend it. As for what I can't understand at the moment, it is the permanent residence of the summoned Yuhua. If everyone in the future is permanent, it will feel too noisy. I've seen the latest episode. Let's put it this way, this slow-burn Western fantasy novel is definitely unique among its peers. What's more, it can be read for free on Tomato. It is coherent and foreshadowing. It is perfect. Whenever you feel that your daily life is boring, you will suddenly find that it is not useless. That kind of instant goosebumps feeling I think that is the most enjoyable time to read a novel. As for the flaws, it is probably the description of daily life. Many gorgeous and powerful descriptions will make readers feel less relaxed afterward, but it is already very good. After all, every author is not a god and cannot cover everything. It is already great.

Ah😳? Yunduo☁️😆, da↘da↗da↘da↗da↘, I really want to play Genshin Impact🥺, Yunduo☁Genshin Impact🥺, dang dang dang dang 😊, watch the excitement👍🎇😆 , Yun☁Genshin Impact😊, Woooooooooo, I really want to play Genshin Impact😭😭😭Yun☁Genshin Impact, my friends are here😊😀😆, let's play Genshin Impact together, Yun☁Genshin Impact! Ah ah ah ah 🥺, I really want to play Genshin Impact 🥺 Cloud ☁ Genshin Impact, hahahahahaha 🤣🤣, play Genshin Impact together, cloud ☁ Genshin Impact, I really think about it, 🥳 I want to play Genshin Impact 🥰 web cloud, low power consumption and no distortion 😊, WiFi network cable 🥰, all can be 60 frames 😍, come, come, come 👏, enter cloud ☁ Genshin Impact This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by the 108 monkeys in the mountain: "You are so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! When Zihan fought with Ye Fan in order to win the spot for the West Meridian, Li Kui went to persuade him to make peace. However, he was tempted by foreign persimmons on the way and strayed into the depths of the lotus root. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnu in Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma. So Sato Kazuma got angry and went to another world to conquer the Delta Map with Doraemon. In the end, it became the plot of the Flame Emperor. The road to Shu is difficult and dangerous 🥺 How to transport grain and grass 🤔 The Northern Expedition is a waste of national power 😔 It is better to imitate Soochow 😆 There is only one person left among the Five Tigers 😭 Who dares to be the pioneer of the Northern Expedition 🤔 Why not? 😡 Since we have inherited the legacy of the late emperor 😔 How can we be trapped and stagnant 😡 Uh-huh~ Ha! ! 😡😡Me! ! 😡Wei Yan😡Only advance, never retreat! ! ! 😡😡If the Wei invaders annihilate one hundred thousand Yan Yan as the Lord, 😡✊ let Cao Cao's thieves invade the whole world✊✊✊😡 Yan can also refuse to retreat with all his strength and defeat the enemy for the Lord✊ 😡: Your Majesty! 🤓✋😡😡: Why did you break the Ultra Key? 🤓: It doesn't matter if the key is broken, do you think it's still an Astra? 🤓👍 ⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡😳😳→😈 😡: Your Majesty, why did you turn Astra into a Babar planet? The old duel field is difficult and dangerous, how can ANBU advance? It is better to imitate youth than to waste gold coins with clever tricks. There is only one person left in Da Yin, who dares to be a mad dog and bite him? Why not! Since we have inherited Xian Nai's legacy, how can we be trapped and stagnant? I, Ma Ban, can only advance but not retreat! ! ! If 3000 defeat the three Yin people in a round, Madara will be the one to wipe them all out for the Lord. Even if the underworld brings the Black Zetsu to attack, Madara can also fight with all his strength to refuse to retreat for the Lord to defeat the enemy. Like a fish drinking from water, Komama Madara is here! How dare you!

A typical Western fantasy novel, the writing is good, the plot is a bit humorous, you can read it to pass the time while reading, please cheers for the author [Blow a kiss] Tsk, I'll start using AI to polish it later, but it's okay so far, but I won't give it five stars.

Awesome brothers, although the score of this book is low, you can't deny that Western fantasy is not a big category for you, so there is nothing wrong with it. Talking about the book itself, the plot of this book is not slow, the wits are also online, the protagonist is an abstract mudslide, and he can make a few abstract remarks from time to time (this is even more popular after having Miss Porcelain Doll [laughter] After all, Miss Porcelain Doll is the great Miss Disaster Meow) In short, the author is a humorous author, and the protagonist group is abstract, how can the plot be bad [laughter] Also, the author has some clever ideas in choosing the name. The male protagonist's surname is Wilhelm, which is transliterated to mean Wilhelm. He became William (it seems he has the appearance of an emperor), and the male protagonist's father is also named Theodore (Roosevelt) [laughing]

Just so-so. Can the protagonist reveal more information, briefly talk about the background of the world, etc., Such as information about the organization where Love Crazy is located. Otherwise, it feels like the protagonist is very powerful and knows a lot, and everything is expected, but it's just a pure information gap. But it may be that the author wrote it this way on purpose. Let's wait and see for now. I hope to have more interactions with Isabella. I'm looking forward to it [eating melon]

As usual, let me talk about my progress first. I have read Chapter 37 in one go, and the overall impression is very good. This is an interesting first-person novel worth spending time reading. The last time I was so immersed in reading a first-person novel was when I first came across online literature in 15 years. Although it's a bit disrespectful, I still want to know whether this book is run using a language model. If not, then the author's writing skills are enough to be considered extremely strong. The reason why I say this is mainly because I was disgusted by the irresponsible author of the previous book who was reluctant to use good models. The most ironic thing is that the results are much better than this one. After checking it out, the gifts, data, and ratings are much better. Haha, what should I say about this environment? Back to the topic, this book is narrated from a first-person perspective that is currently niche. The writing is powerful and not procrastinating. The plot advancement and arrangement can be said to be at an upper-middle level, and the character creation is also unique. Of course, there are many areas that can be improved. For example, I personally feel that the plot about the clever capture of the living book lacks polish. Moreover, in addition to the main characters, some less important characters who are not just passers-by can only be said to be above the pass line, and the look and feel are a little dull, but it is also very impressive to be able to achieve this effect with a few words. Finally, if I were to give this book a score, on a 100-point scale, I would give it at least 85 points. Come on, author. I've finished reading Chapter 1.5, And I think it's okay so far. After all, the first half of the first chapter gave me a very good impression, but I felt a bit unmotivated when I saw Chapter 1.5. I was just about to catch up with the main force, so I went to read other books for a change, and then came back after a while. [Laugh]

Western fantasy novel with good plot and time travel prophet The male protagonist, there are many girls in the friendly camp (harem?), The story is quite natural, and the fighting power is not broken. The overall logic and text are passable, and the author has put some thought into it. The Tomato Pass online novel is quite immersive. If you have read too many low-quality novels, you can read this one. I highly recommend it (I have read 50 chapters so far). I have written many short stories, which are very touching. I am also good at verbal description. In addition, the main character is nine years old [Thoughts]

I admire the author's perseverance. As a new book by a new author, this book is "immature". The description of the characters and plot is quite superficial at the beginning, but the author did write what he wanted to tell me. And as the story develops, you can slowly see the growth of the author, which is good, so I want to express my "joy" to those who work hard [like] Also, I would like to ask the author when the "yandere" will be served. After reading more than 140 chapters, I can only barely make out a few clues. When will our "main course" be served? If the main course is still being prepared, where are the "appetizers" [please update]

Leave a review for yourself. If you have any questions, you can leave a message here. I will definitely read it! [Blowing kiss]

The early stage may be plot preparation, and the description of some things is too lengthy. Anyway, I didn't want to read these things. But the characterization is pretty good and hits the mark. Let's take another look. I hope there will be less unnecessary descriptions of the environment.

The writing is okay. After all, it is a new book. It is worth reading. At least it is considered a good book in Tomato. The Barton section is okay, a little stiff. I look forward to the subsequent plot.

The first person, the narrative is mixed with complaints, the writing is very good, and there is humor. Beautiful, looking forward to the continuation

2026.2.26 Catch up on the latest and send a personal review The plot is great and the fighting is okay. The previous series of events were triggered too frequently, and later I remembered that the protagonist is not even ten years old yet, so the time span could be a little longer. There are some things that we shouldn't delve too deeply into, such as why the powerful knights coming from behind didn't happen in the same way. Personally, I wish there were more daily routines. Although it is really fun to follow the main plot, I still want to see the interaction with my family. The protagonist should also be strengthened a little. It would be too tiring to always have to plan. It would be nice to have a big brick fly once in a while. The summoning chanting in each part is my favorite part, so increase the intensity! Ps: The protagonist took over [Disaster Star] and summoned Izem. It couldn't be without negative buffs. How come it wasn't mentioned after the event was over?

There are some places where the author is a little literate and is verbose and repetitive (for example, the description of a certain disqualified knight, only those two sentences are repeated over and over again), but overall, the flaws are not hidden, and it is still a fascinating and good book. The average quality of each copy is quite high, and the transition is a bit stiff (but the protagonist is in the soul-traveling game world after all, and was a strategy leader in his previous life, so that can be explained). The author uses a lot of pen and ink to depict some vivid supporting characters, and sometimes the protagonist saves the day at the last moment but has less scenes. The following contains slight spoilers The male protagonist is in the Invincible style, his father is a peerless magic genius, his mother is a saint, his grandparents are big boss demon hunters, his grandfather is the pope, and he is a soul-piercing boss. There seems to be quite a lot written about the invincible flow of the soul-traveling game world so far, but I am quite interested in following this one. Now it seems that the structure is one heroine in one chapter, and one heroine has several related copies. Most of them are introductions, there is only one copy of the Eagle's Nest City, and it was released to the Holy See at other times; the little girl ghost only has one copy of the castle, and currently does not have many roles, but there are some copies of Dot Flowers; the little doll is the protagonist of the current chapter, and there are several copies. The three knights have been written (should be the one of the fox man, the one of the thorn bird, and the one of the abyss), and it should be almost over. According to the introduction, there is only one chapter missing about a little goddess.

Supermodel, the poetry that conjures up surprises me every time We are not protagonists, we are not prophets, we are just bystanders. Except for the author, even the readers are kept in the dark about the protagonist's layout, and they don't say "Holy shit" until the end. This is the mountain of Western Fantasy

It's remarkable. The early writing was actually pretty good. But after reading it, I felt that the rhythm was not very well controlled, such as the connection between events and the time span. But the new author is already very good. The author writes in the first person, but it is actually a third-person omniscient perspective. The first-person writing may be influenced by many Japanese people, right? For example, reincarnation without a job? You can learn how to write and control "Jobless Reincarnation". This Japanese novel is still very powerful and dominated the rankings in Japan back then. The first person really wants to highlight and flesh out the other characters. The opening chapter should still be written in the first person but change the perspective. This is actually more fleshed out than the third person, but the writing power is too high. The author should try the third person writing method next time he opens a new book. My personal opinion, I just want to give the author some advice.

It took me three or four days to read more than 400 chapters. Overall, I feel that the atmosphere of this book is funny and joyful with a heavy twist. The characters' emotions are relatively delicate and there are many foreshadowings of twists and turns. However, what attracts me the most is the lyrics of the Transcendent Summoning Chant [laughing] It's pretty, but there are relatively few people. The rating is not high.

Very nice day breeze. A small suggestion is to state in Chapter 0 that this is the preface. Very few people in Tomato have 0 chapters. I read it for a long time and found it baffling. I thought the article was just good, so I quit. I have read dozens of chapters and feel that the later chapters are very good.

Very good, the writing is very delicate, but some plots should not be divided into chapters, otherwise the reading will be a bit inconsistent. Then some details of the characters and emotional descriptions are not detailed and emotionally dedicated to the story of Princess under the Moon. I read it as a detailed description, but other emotional descriptions are all abbreviations. Don't just use skill names to transition the battle scenes, um, and then I asked the author a question alone, when did the introduction of the yandere begin? [Sinister smile]

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking. The summoning words are thrilling to watch, and the plot of Barton is also very well written. The scene when the Archduke dungeon opens is immersive, the writing is also humorous, and Hanyu is also very cute. Why is no one watching? ! ! Low ratings are confusing! Come on, author! ! !

It's so good. Why isn't it popular? To be honest, except for the love story (I like to watch this as a goblin), there is too little, the introduction is a bit underwhelming, and there is basically no Shura field, but it is really good to watch. The Shura field has slowly emerged later, and what I want to see is this mouth! Let's make the Shura field more intense!

So far, it's okay. It feels a bit like a light novel. Although it's in the first person, it feels like a group portrait. Everyone has their own characteristics. The atmosphere is quite relaxed, and there's nothing particularly high-pressure or life-and-death love-hate relationship. Although the protagonist himself does not have a golden finger, every event is basically under the control of the protagonist. It feels like a Western fantasy version of Jia Baoyu who has come to the human world to experience life.

It's worth watching, with a rating of at least 8.7, Highly recommended. The plot speed is very well controlled, and the plot is also very interesting. It is not cliche and very interesting. If possible, I suggest you give more comments to support it. Could the main character grow up a little? He's too young and feels a bit like a eunuch. Also, the use of first person is really not suitable for the narrative of this kind of novel. Don't use it indiscriminately, it will lose points.

Does the protagonist have a daughter and a magical beeping father who cosplays Roland's Spider Nest Index Finger🤔🤔🤔

It's hard to hold back when you think that the protagonist is only 9 years old [Chigua]

The strangest thing about this book is that it is in the first person. The main characteristic of the first person is that it is not omniscient. But to be honest, there is no problem in changing this book to the third person.

Except that the AI ​​flavor is a bit strong. It's also a pretty good book. [Eat melon]

So far, except for the first person, which is not used to me, everything else is quite to my liking. The plot is well written, and the way each summoned object appears is very interesting. It is suitable for book lovers who like Western fantasy➕Summoner➕a little bit of middle-school fantasy.

It is a rare first-person narrative, which may be a bit awkward when reading, but the content and description of the story itself are very delicate, and I also like the worldview very much. I hope the author can write better and better [Love]