EVA Corrects This Outrageous World

Although I don't know much about World of Warcraft, I can combine EVA with it just right, and the characters and plot are EVA-y enough. There are even exciting original plots (the commander is treated as a Japanese, Shinji who is one and two minds, and the strange church). I hope the author will continue his efforts and complete the New Century Gospel Correction Plan!

Seeing it now, the writing is very good [laughs] Some of the magic settings are easy to understand even if you don't know about them or haven't read them. But most of the combat descriptions and magic aspects are superficial. I mainly read the literary dramas, and the author has something. I've also been taking EVA supplements recently, and some people find it really hard to stretch themselves. Apart from Shinji's personality, which is a bit unpleasant, there's really nothing to say [Like] Misato counts as half, Kaoru counts as one, Makiha counts as one (mainly because I like her too), and the rest are just individuals [face covering] Of course I understand their psychology, but I can't accept it

This is the first EVA fanfic that completely fascinated me. It integrates the original settings and foreign settings very well, without any sudden and forced feeling, and does not break the original rhythm of the story. It allows people to truly understand that the author has thoroughly read the entire world view of EVA. As someone who has read the old and new times several times, I understand more details and the opposite characters. The analysis of the color made me immersed in it. The protagonist's handling of the relationship with Rei Ayanami and Asuka is how I hope Shinji can grow. I just hope that I can write more, continue the story completely, and see a different happy ending for everyone [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss]. The interaction with Rei Ayanami is so loving. Woohoo, Reitan cried to death.

It's a rare EVA fan with good writing, and the character's personality is well grasped. Although it's not completely divorced from the script of Dead Sea Documents, it doesn't completely follow the original plot, and has its own understanding and ideas. The writing is also good, overall it scores above 9 points.

I recently rewatched the entire theatrical version of the novel by the author, and it was a very special feeling. I was less than six years old when I first watched EVA around 2000~2002. Liaoyi translated it as Sky Eagle Warrior. Although I couldn't understand it, it was really shocking. Especially when Unit 2 appeared, and Unit 1 was controlled by the puppet system to tear Unit 3 apart, I was deeply impressed. Later, I re-read it in the order in middle school! I couldn't understand it even more, but I still had a special feeling, similar to the feeling of mental pollution, which was very uncomfortable. Later, I went to college to learn more and read it for the third time to expand and expand it. Now that I have read this book, I have made up for many regrets and got rid of the uncomfortable and awkward feeling.

In the past, when I looked at it as an animation, I felt something was wrong. It was twisted, perverted, and irrelevant. But now, when I look at it from Lao A's perspective, I can understand part of the core. EVA was created during the most prosperous period in the United States. The Japanese were very accurate about Western culture, religion, and politics. The Western religion, political correctness, extreme elitism, and personal heroism throughout the anime also highlighted the weak culture of the Western story background. The EVA written by the author seems to be looking down on metaphors, and there is no very straightforward criticism. Are you afraid of attracting those who criticize you? When the protagonist's power level reaches the showdown, he already occupies an absolute weight on one end of the scale. He can already do whatever he wants and still wants to use his mouth to escape and return to the plot trajectory. In the final analysis, EVA's plot is too thin, and it will be broken by just two casual pokes.

As you read along the way, the author has his own thoughts, rather than other running accounts that follow the plot. In comparison, the characters are more delicate. There are no EVA themes in Persimmon itself, and even fewer are willing to write about them well. If you like EVA, feel free to watch it🥳

This book is great, although I have very few fans of EVA (because there aren't many), and even if they do, they either push it all the way, or it is still covered in clouds, or in Zhu Tianwen, after more than ten chapters, the apostle takes the girl away and ends the matter hastily. (The Ultra Soldier looked back feeling embarrassed) At least this book explains clearly a lot of things that I didn't understand before. I am a human being in three generations, and many events are handled with humor, and the intensity is just right, neither too strong nor too weak. As for the shortcomings, at least I don't feel any shortcomings so far. Don't get hung up on girls, the two heroines are still junior high school students and underage. If you want the author to get in, just be louder. [Laughing and crying]

The writing in 🍅 should be top-notch, the writing style is novel, and the protagonist does have the demeanor of four lives and three deaths. He did not exclude Shinji (original) from his psychological problems, but still took him through the plot.

Give yourself a score and praise me for finally starting to write (typing on the keyboard).

Although there are a lot of dense settings written above, it feels like reading a collection of settings, not like reading a novel, but as long as you keep listening to the book, you will find that the latter part is still very interesting.

The writing style is good, it is rare to see such delicate writing in male videos, and the sense of nerdiness is just right, making the viewing experience very interesting. This Asuka is written in a way that makes people dislike her. The male protagonist can completely tolerate her temper, but as a reader, I only have six points to say... The overall level is very good, and the plot is also very interesting. The author explains the various complicated and awkward settings in the original work clearly and clearly. Those who have never seen EVA can also jump into the game vertically.

A rare EVA fan, and also a rare EVA fan with good writing. The protagonist introduces the power of Warcraft to cut off the fateful reincarnation in the EVA world. The IQs of the characters are all online, and the story has not conflicted with the setting of the original work so far. The only thing that I am not very satisfied with at the moment is that the protagonist has not tried to develop the local characteristic power of AT stance, but this is not a black point. Overall, this book is considered to be in the middle and upper reaches of Tomato.

The writing is obviously very good, why is no one here? I have to say that the writing style of the novel that can make people understand how Warcraft and EVA can be together is really amazing. Nice looking, love watching￣￣)σ

Looking at the serialization up to now, the author has put in a lot of effort to get through the difficult comics and the TV and OVA versions. There are still many things that are difficult to understand. After all, there are many things that are difficult to understand. The original work has too many mythical people-like settings that are too brain-burning. Writing fan fiction is also a brain-dead job [laughing] [laughing]

The introduction is poisonous. If it weren't for the recent book shortage, I would never have clicked in to read it. I didn't expect that the author handled the problem of traveling through multiple worlds surprisingly well, and the characters' emotions were also described very delicately. It is a rare masterpiece.

Very good Reading this novel gradually brought back the memories and feelings I had when I read EVA. But actually what I'm most concerned about right now is Can the original Ikari awaken? Can we truly stop escaping and truly become an adult?

It's a top-quality Tomato fan, and people who like EVA and World of Warcraft should be able to get it. It doesn't have any brainless tricks like the system panel. The more you watch it, the more you feel that you have more to learn. Although I have watched both the TV version and the new version, I don't really like EVA, a superrobot with a lot of settings. For super types, I still like Geta or Poludis V.

An extremely wonderful eva fan. The author writes fluently, has profound skills, and has a deep understanding of the various elements incorporated in his book.

It looks good, I love watching it, give out more candy, and knock all those dirty guys away!

A light and interesting book. You can read it even if you don't know much about the plot of EVA. The book is interspersed with briefly summarized original plot settings, which is easy to relate to. The stitched martial arts/Warcraft worldview is also very harmonious and not obtrusive. The characters are basically in line with the original design, and the protagonist's setting of two souls in one body also implies the determination to never be OOC. It can be regarded as a very novel time-travel setting. The combat power value is also relatively reasonable at present, the story line is following the original plot, the butterfly effect has also been written, and some extended private settings have been introduced? Perhaps? (I have not watched the original anime, and I speculate that some plots are private settings. No spoilers. You can watch it for yourself) There are currently more than 100 chapters, and the information density is relatively high. There is no hydrology, so you can consume it with peace of mind.

It looks good so far, but I just want to ask if it will have a single heroine, multiple heroines, or no heroine?

There is not much real content in one chapter, not to mention the notes at the end, but the explanatory part at the front, which makes people want to skip it. It's quite new for the second creation to join the magic. I want to see the future development.

So far, I feel good about it. I give it 4 stars. After all, apart from Shinji's identity, nothing else is a mage knight to me. . . It's very strange, I can't understand it, I just know it can do magic [laughing evilly]

Since you sincerely asked for a rating, I can take it easy😎 To be honest, the beginning of the first chapter felt a bit confusing. After all, the author tried to show us a lot of content, but the last sentence was so cool and the finishing touch. The more I read later, the more interesting it becomes, and I feel like there really is such a world. The writing is also getting better and better. Blessed are you who keep reading. I hope the author can keep writing. As of now writing, I have become concerned about the fate of the author's characters.

It's a good story with a clear context and complete characters. Even people who don't know anything about EVA and Warcraft can understand it. My personal rating is 9. It feels comfortable to read more than a hundred chapters in one go.

It's really good. As long as you stick to the first few chapters, the writing and plot development will be very different. It can be said that it is an innovation, but it is also based on a reasonable plot based on the setting. It is worth reading. It is a book that is truly written with this world as the main line.

Not bad. At least the character design when he appeared was not distorted. The subsequent changes in character design are also the plot after some changes, which are parts that should be changed. The writing is also smooth. Just pay attention to the change of the two symbols when you first read it, otherwise it will be easy to get confused.

So far, this is the best AVE fanfic I have seen in my 5 years of reading.

Many EVA fics are written awkwardly, but this one is okay. The character and analysis are quite good. At the same time, you can see Shinji's growth and train him to be less annoying. There are also some cool points in the plot. In the end, the protagonist and Shinji are independent and have their own journeys, which makes me very satisfied. At the end, the protagonist abducts Xiangxiang [laughing] Summary: A great EVA fic, except that the word count is a little short. Recommended for book friends [Learned]