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I feel good. The protagonist has a good personality. I have to say why there is no rating for more than 700,000 words. It is also because the author's writing style is relatively slow and hot, which is inconsistent with the general environment of Tomato. I feel that the quality is okay, at least it is to my taste, and it is really large. A chapter can be as little as 3,000 words and as much as 10,000 words. This is purely for the love of generating electricity. Any other author who wants to make some money would not do this. Support, you must support! [Blowing kiss]

The writing is very good. From the first chapter, you can see that the author's writing is good. The only shortcoming is that the beginning is already returning home after a trip. There is no detailed description of the growth process of the partner and the lack of empathy. However, the author has a strong sense of substitution in the description of the acquaintance of the elves, which makes up for this. I beg the author to stick to it. I really like this book.

The quality is above average and highly recommended. The protagonist has a great personality. The interaction with Pokémon is also very good. The interaction with Sirona is particularly sweet. The author updates very quickly. In short, it is a special recommendation. The shortcomings are, to be honest, what do you think of the early plot with Sirona? How do you say it's a bit? Just don't think too much, just treat it as a funny plot, but if you think too much, the viewing experience may be very poor. And the father of the protagonist, to be honest, there are really many flaws. How should I put it? It just felt like I was looking for something. I felt that the plot was a bit unpalatable to be honest. But in a word, this book is highly recommended. I hope the author can continue to work hard, this book will really become popular! Come on, author!

In fact, we can quickly get the second team out. Now the home team has basically been thoroughly studied. If the opponent only uses restraint, there is no way to fight. You can't just rush in and win by shouting about friendship bonds, or use tactics or something. It updates quickly and the content is quite sufficient, but the description is too long. But it can be seen that the battle aspect has been studied, and it looks quite comfortable. Unlike other novels, it is only a few moves in seconds, and the second team can hide a few of them, and then take them out when there is a game. After all, the protagonist is not specialized in one system. Then you can read more information, ask seniors for advice, and train several teams of different systems. However, the training will be more difficult and will take a long time to understand and adjust. You can also have the second team specialize in one tactical system. It depends on how to arrange it later.

① There is no obvious level indicator: for example, the King-level gym level. ② How can ordinary people live like going out to practice for four years and then coming back to play the Baby Cup? ③ It also depends on your comment that you need to form a second team but you don't want to play the Baby Cup all over again and go to college. It's like asking a person in his thirties to take the elementary school exam. I judge the strength against the original gymnasium (good luck to the author) Maybe I didn't read the one in college, maybe I made a mistake to protect myself [Cool][Cool]

After watching more than ten pictures, it came out. It is indeed very good. The characters of Sirona and the protagonist are well described, and the plot is also good. It's just that this damn paragraph is too long.

The elf team has been formed so early, so it's a bit difficult to write about what's next. Come on.

Well written, I really enjoyed reading it

The author writes very well

Very interesting, plot

It looks pretty good so far, but the paragraph is too long. It's a bit satisfying to watch for a long time, especially the description of Pokémon battles.

Brothers, let me help you sit down offline [laughs]

The author's writing is very good, but the paragraphs are too long. Who would have thought that there are only more than 100 chapters in more than 700,000 words?

The author's writing is beautiful and the details are spot on. Keep up the good work! [Sending Hearts]

It's a different style from the one taught by Teacher Lu. It's beautiful.

The character of the protagonist is very good, and the character is very unique, and the region is based on China. I give it five stars.

What are the preparations for the second team? Will [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon] collect mythical beasts?

Did the author change the paragraph? Before, the line by line was too compact. It's good to change it.

Fortunately, it's just too bland, no waves.