Arknights: the Savior's Journey of the Lateran Son

Welcome everyone to watch the second issue of Ark fan review Let me start with the conclusion: this book is generally readable and interesting, and overall it falls within the range of a large book. Advantages: The concept of this book is good, the perspective of the protagonist is novel, and the narrative is relatively delicate. At the same time, the author also respects the original plot very much. Except for some words that should not appear in Terra, there is basically no OOC. Disadvantages: The narrative structure in the early stage is relatively confusing. The author originally wanted to enrich the image of the protagonist and his related characters with interludes. However, due to insufficient writing power, the result was unsatisfactory. It was not until the Tower of Babel chapter that the story focused on reality. Secondly, the growth of the protagonist is unsatisfactory, both in terms of strength and mentality. After experiencing a life and death crisis and knowing the secrets of the world, it can be said that he has made no progress and is still naive. Let me give the author a suggestion and reminder: when the writing power is not enough, the quality of the plot and the capacity of the plot cannot be balanced at the same time. If you want to write too much, you will not be able to write anything well. From what the author said, it can be seen that this book should have an outline. It is recommended that the author handle the details of the plot. Now the plot has a sense of dragging. Also, two updates are still too few. The author should continue to work hard. Continue to wait and see

Let me talk about the conclusion first. In the super big cup, I hang up after the daily display, but I also have a dream in the contract, and the future can be expected ( The highlight is the multi-line narrative, the transitions are ingenious, and the story fragments complement each other like a puzzle. But it requires a little patience and understanding. But the structure can be said to be exquisite and interesting. A little personal regret is that the flow of emotions is not smooth enough. For example, in sketches, the heavy colors cannot be suppressed, the gray levels are not rich enough, and the overall picture looks "gray". I personally appreciate the concept of "similar", but after the author introduced this term, he did not vividly express the "connection" between the protagonist and 2226, who are the same kind, which is a big regret. The plot is very interesting, told from the perspective of native Terran people, which is more detailed and real than time travel, and is much more readable and interesting. However, the author's empathy ability is required to be high, but the author did not make serious mistakes in this regard, but he was unable to shine. Seeing the above points here, the ingenuity is very good. In terms of structure, the author's writing can be controlled and not fragmented, but the emotional aspect is a bit thin. I hope the author can either let the emotion be dissolved in the character's frown or smile, or let it flow freely in the text. To sum up, the current impression (personally speaking) is that it is very suitable for my taste, and it is the first echelon of Zhou Tongren. At the same time, there is also hope for the future

Become the protagonist. Chapter 2 starts with a revolving door [laughs][like]

Let me talk about the conclusion first. Under the super-large cup, the early plots are quite good. Although the protagonist does stretch his hips a little in the early stage, and there are too many transitional plots, which makes it more uncomfortable to watch the progress in the middle, but the author's jokes make up for this. It is also a common problem among Zhou Tong people. Most people have not read the plots, and have only heard about some classic plots in short videos and discussions. As a result, many people don't know what they are looking at, but there is nothing they can do about it. The reading threshold of Zhoutong people is so high. The subsequent plot gives me a feeling that the author is writing a high-level book and is addicted to his own art and cannot extricate himself. The battle in the Shard is very touching, the setting of the protagonist is also very novel, and the characterization is relatively comprehensive. It is considered an excellent fan.

Overall review: From the perspective of former congee p, it's not bad. It's been a while since I quit, but the taste and feeling are still familiar, and the author's concentration is definitely up to par. But I'm afraid that's all I'm afraid of here, with low, depressive and meaningless thoughts. Without a lot of joy to dilute the gray atmosphere of daily life, I can only look forward to the CCB session (you can't have all kinds of activities like in the game). The author even uses a tone that is bland to a bit scary, "Progressing." After all, it's still a daily lack, right? Not completely, but there is a feeling that the whole story is shrouded in gray.

OK Is the current plot a revolving door?

Author, you must finish this book well [crying] [crying] [crying] Otherwise, otherwise, Vadasi will cry to you. I have been waiting for Rutland's novel since the beginning of "The Deeds of All Living Beings". I was very excited when I heard about the angel's strangeness one day before the event. I have thought about several outlines, but now that I am in my third year of high school, I have no time to write, so you must update it well. No matter what the book looks like, I will finish it. (Xiao Le is so optimistic, cheerful, cute, charming, kind, sympathetic, and optimist who comforts people. He is smart, well-behaved, cute, sensible, and sunny. As a male high school student who has been single for 18 years, he can't even think of a strategy. Woo woo woo.)

A good book, the pace is suitable, the description is not bad, the setting is rigorous, and there is very little OOC It's just that the first two chapters are weird, but then it gets better [face covering]

He or be, this second chapter is all about the revolving door. It's hard to comment. I thought the protagonist was going to pretend to be a big one, but who knew he pulled a big one? Let's look at it again (there's a CCB, so what the heck) Jin ah [admiration]

First of all, let me explain that this book is about an aboriginal protagonist who knows the plot. The harem novel (the heroines who have read it so far are: Tutu, Lemuan, Fiametta and Mostima) are generally worth reading. The one million words process can be regarded as a full witness to the growth of the author. For example, the first volume's obviously immature writing and unnatural plot processing (such as some inexplicable interludes and shifts in perspective and time) can be seen to supplement the plot, but the perception is not very good, and the protagonist in the first volume is depressed throughout the whole process. Writing, and Tutu taking advantage of the opportunity, may make people feel frustrated. Fortunately, the author is also aware of his own problems. The protagonist is basically invincible in the future, and most of the enemies are not opponents (although this increase in combat power may be inexplicable?) Moreover, Tutu is also a member of the harem, and even though she is ccb, she has nothing to say. This book also continues the tradition of making up for regrets in the humanities of Congee: for example, Froststar successfully joined Rhode Island, the patriots are still alive, and the tragedy of the integration movement did not continue. However, Xiaote still died, but the author said that he would be resurrected later. Apart from these serious plots, there are descriptions of the harem and some ordinary but happy daily life. It is still very enjoyable to watch, but I don't know if the author will use the knife. The protagonist always feels like he is planting a flag when he leaves Tutu later. It's not very clear. Overall, I think this is a fanfic worth reading. The characters don't have any objectionable OOC expressions. It's a good way to kill time.

Let's wait and see. The pace is a bit slow at the moment, and the protagonist is a bit weak. There are no other major shortcomings. The female protagonists have been confirmed to be 2226, Fat Duck, Xiao Mo, and Sister An. It can be seen from the writing that the author is working hard to improve, and he will continue to work hard.

The quality at the beginning is obviously lacking, but the pick-up later is really surprising. A very good book. Advantages: more expectations than questions. Disadvantages: more expectations than questions. After thinking about it, I decided to give it 5 stars. This level is rare nowadays. In some places, it is obvious that the rhythm is dragged out for too long and the viewing experience is not good, especially many battle scenes. The performance is very good, but it affects the narrative. The characterization of the protagonist relies a little too much on RES' settings, and in many cases, it fails to reflect his reality. The narrative in the first volume is too fragmented, with interspersed narratives and even ten chapters of memories, which is not good. Other miscellaneous things are harmless. Overall, the flaws do not hide the strengths, it's pretty good, keep up the good work.

An excellent Sakota fanfic must first accurately capture the shadow under this aura. It will not be satisfied with describing a sweet utopia, but will dig into the deep meaning of "sympathy" Therefore, the greatest charm of a fanfic describing Sakota's happiness is its redefinition of "happiness". For Sakota, happiness may not be carefree bliss, but learning to build an independent self-dam in the endless tide of empathy with fellow people. At the end of the story, the author may let the characters understand that true salvation does not come from the peace granted by the law, but from the courage to share the pain with a specific person. It does not shy away from the scars caused by "sympathy", but still dares to write about the persistence of "wanting to be happy". When the story comes to an end, whether the characters return to the hymns of Lateran or build a new home in a strange land, readers will remember not the triumph of the grand narrative, but the small moments full of human struggle. It is these moments that make angels willing to fold their wings and return to dust, and make us in front of the screen willing to believe that even the fate engraved in our genes can be rewritten by the miracle called "love". Although I don't know the final ending of this novel now, I don't complain about my special hopes for the plot, because after all, the plot is determined by the author himself. As a witness, I will listen carefully and understand the image of each character in the plot according to the author's narrative order.

The early stage has a certain dissuading effect. I personally think that up to chapter 100, it is a recovery from the tragedy at the beginning. After the transition in the early stage, the recovery has successfully started to stabilize. The author's writing is good, but there are indeed some chapters that people with weak empathy cannot understand. Summary: In the super cup, he is expected to become a fantasy god

Well, judging from the perception, you need to have patience to read this book. This book had a lot of problems in the early stages. The narrative was confusing, and sometimes I suddenly fell into memories and felt a little confused. Another point was that when the protagonist's inner values ​​entered a major turning point, it was not written well, and I just watched the protagonist get beaten [laughing and crying]. Then in terms of combat, I know that the protagonist is very strong, but the result is that it will falter from time to time. Simply put, it is not enjoyable enough to watch. But after Chapter 174, the viewing experience is much better. It can be clearly felt that the author's writing style is constantly improving, and the emotional line is gradually gaining strength at this time (there will be many Shura fields [smirk]). The author's writing is very delicate, and he will make jokes from time to time, which will make you laugh from time to time while reading. There is almost no OOC in the characters, especially Fiammetta. The author will take into account the character's personality to a large extent when writing. Although this book has many shortcomings, most of them are in the early stages. Overall, it is a book worth reading. I sincerely hope that the author can write a work that satisfies him (I wanted to give it 4 stars at first, but I really like Lemuan written by the author, so I directly praised it with 5 stars)

It's a good book, but the shortcoming is that I discovered it when it was 200,000 words long. It's not a pleasant read😡The pace is slow (maybe it hasn't reached the main plot yet), and the story doesn't seem to be a brisk style at the moment; the upper limit will be higher, but the plot feels like it needs a longer length; so don't leave it alone. Author ✋😭✋Onegai, if you can't keep going, Watasi; just do it like the Holy Son next door to 9 million words😋 I suggest you give it a try and read it again.

A rare Ark fanfic from an Aboriginal perspective. I have seen a lot of time-travel perspectives before, but I have never been able to find one from an Aboriginal perspective. Thank you to the author. Finally, "Brother who writes fanfiction, you must persevere." [Understood]

Personal complaint room, when I saw that Andorn was still the same, and that the protagonist was not born knowing it, I wanted to complain at that moment, but I still read the introduction, and the timing key was given to the protagonist. Can't I just crush Sister An? Continuous updates

Absolute empathy, the field born from it, will teach you...

The flow of this book is very slack, but your quality makes up for it. It's just a little slow at the beginning and I feel like I could skip a chapter or two.

It's very interesting. Let's go quickly to the scene where Sister An pouts the protagonist [Adoration]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking!

Support, support. Also, the cover turned out to be Fiametta. At first glance, I thought it was Xiao Le [face covering]

In fact, if I change the first two chapters, my score should be higher. The rest of it is really good.

It's good to watch. Although the current plot is a revolving door, the chapter about the origin of Yi Yan's weapons is amazing. The summary is - Jin Kou Ya! ! [Sinister smile]

This is one of the rare high-quality Arknights novels in Tomato. I feel that the author writes it very well. I like it very much😍 One point is that the protagonist's combat performance is a bit weak. He is said to be very strong, but his combat performance is incomparable to that of Kitty Egg Roll. For example, against some insignificant soldiers, Kitty Egg Roll can be defeated in a few seconds (I think he is very oppressive in the game, like a mythical creature), but when it comes to the protagonist, it seems that there are too many steps, and it does not show the crushing of the weak by the strong. It is not obvious that the protagonist is very powerful, so it is recommended to strengthen it. Then I would like to ask, have all the female protagonists appeared (Sister An, 2226, Xiao Mo, Fat Duck, etc.)? I still quite like the year-old movie and the Deep Sea Hunter group. By the way, I read that the latest volume is before becoming a god. Is there another volume that will be finished after this volume is completed? There is so little. The map expansion is a bit small, the Yan Kingdom has not been visited, there is a Haihei in Iberia that has not been completed, and there is a flying puppy in Colombia. I don't want to finish it or anything! I'll write at least five or six more volumes.

I think it's ok, everyone has different preferences

Good, good, good, good, look good

There's nothing too big about it yet. If I have to say it, I've forgotten all about the first chapter after reading it [face covering]

Look, I really like this style