Arknights: The Laterano Saint's Journey to Save the World

Welcome everyone to watch the second issue of Ark fan review Let me start with the conclusion: this book is generally readable and interesting, and overall it falls within the range of a large book. Advantages: The concept of this book is good, the perspective of the protagonist is novel, and the narrative is relatively delicate. At the same time, the author also respects the original plot very much. Except for some words that should not appear in Terra, there is basically no OOC. Disadvantages: The narrative structure in the early stage is relatively confusing. The author originally wanted to enrich the image of the protagonist and his related characters with interludes. However, due to insufficient writing power, the result was unsatisfactory. It was not until the Tower of Babel chapter that the story focused on reality. Secondly, the growth of the protagonist is unsatisfactory, both in terms of strength and mentality. After experiencing a life and death crisis and knowing the secrets of the world, it can be said that he has made no progress and is still naive. Let me give the author a suggestion and reminder: when the writing power is not enough, the quality of the plot and the capacity of the plot cannot be balanced at the same time. If you want to write too much, you will not be able to write anything well. From what the author said, it can be seen that this book should have an outline. It is recommended that the author handle the details of the plot. Now the plot has a sense of dragging. Also, two updates are still too few. The author should continue to work hard. Continue to wait and see

Let me talk about the conclusion first. In the super big cup, I hang up after the daily display, but I also have a dream in the contract, and the future can be expected ( The highlight is the multi-line narrative, the transitions are ingenious, and the story fragments complement each other like a puzzle. But it requires a little patience and understanding. But the structure can be said to be exquisite and interesting. A little personal regret is that the flow of emotions is not smooth enough. For example, in sketches, the heavy colors cannot be suppressed, the gray levels are not rich enough, and the overall picture looks "gray". I personally appreciate the concept of "similar", but after the author introduced this term, he did not vividly express the "connection" between the protagonist and 2226, who are the same kind, which is a big regret. The plot is very interesting, told from the perspective of native Terran people, which is more detailed and real than time travel, and is much more readable and interesting. However, the author's empathy ability is required to be high, but the author did not make serious mistakes in this regard, but he was unable to shine. Seeing the above points here, the ingenuity is very good. In terms of structure, the author's writing can be controlled and not fragmented, but the emotional aspect is a bit thin. I hope the author can either let the emotion be dissolved in the character's frown or smile, or let it flow freely in the text. To sum up, the current impression (personally speaking) is that it is very suitable for my taste, and it is the first echelon of Zhou Tongren. At the same time, there is also hope for the future

Let me talk about the conclusion first. Under the super-large cup, the early plots are quite good. Although the protagonist does stretch his hips a little in the early stage, and there are too many transitional plots, which makes it more uncomfortable to watch the progress in the middle, but the author's jokes make up for this. It is also a common problem among Zhou Tong people. Most people have not read the plots, and have only heard about some classic plots in short videos and discussions. As a result, many people don't know what they are looking at, but there is nothing they can do about it. The reading threshold of Zhoutong people is so high. The subsequent plot gives me a feeling that the author is writing a high-level book and is addicted to his own art and cannot extricate himself. The battle in the Shard is very touching, the setting of the protagonist is also very novel, and the characterization is relatively comprehensive. It is considered an excellent fan.

Become the protagonist. Chapter 2 starts with a revolving door 😄👍

Overall review: From the perspective of former congee p, it's not bad. It's been a while since I quit, but the taste and feeling are still familiar, and the author's concentration is definitely up to par. But I'm afraid that's all I'm afraid of here, with low, depressive and meaningless thoughts. Without a lot of joy to dilute the gray atmosphere of daily life, I can only look forward to the CCB session (you can't have all kinds of activities like in the game). The author even uses a tone that is bland to a bit scary, "Progressing." After all, it's still a daily lack, right? Not completely, but there is a feeling that the whole story is shrouded in gray.

OK Is the current plot a revolving door?

Author, you must finish this book well 😢 😢 😢 Otherwise, otherwise, Vadasi will cry to you. I have been waiting for Rutland's novel since the beginning of "The Deeds of All Living Beings". I was very excited when I heard about the angel's strangeness one day before the event. I have thought about several outlines, but now that I am in my third year of high school, I have no time to write, so you must update it well. No matter what the book looks like, I will finish it. (Xiao Le is so optimistic, cheerful, cute, charming, kind, sympathetic, and optimist who comforts people. He is smart, well-behaved, cute, sensible, and sunny. As a male high school student who has been single for 18 years, he can't even think of a strategy. Woo woo woo.)

Let's wait and see. The pace is a bit slow at the moment, and the protagonist is a bit weak. There are no other major shortcomings. The female protagonists have been confirmed to be 2226, Fat Duck, Xiao Mo, and Sister An. It can be seen from the writing that the author is working hard to improve, and he will continue to work hard.

A good book, the pace is suitable, the description is not bad, the setting is rigorous, and there is very little OOC It's just that the first two chapters are weird, but then it gets better 🤦

Well, judging from the perception, you need to have patience to read this book. This book had a lot of problems in the early stages. The narrative was confusing, and sometimes I suddenly fell into memories and felt a little confused. Another point was that when the protagonist's inner values ​​entered a major turning point, it was not written well, and I just watched the protagonist get beaten 😂. Then in terms of combat, I know that the protagonist is very strong, but the result is that it will falter from time to time. Simply put, it is not enjoyable enough to watch. But after Chapter 174, the viewing experience is much better. It can be clearly felt that the author's writing style is constantly improving, and the emotional line is gradually gaining strength at this time (there will be many Shura fields 😏). The author's writing is very delicate, and he will make jokes from time to time, which will make you laugh from time to time while reading. There is almost no OOC in the characters, especially Fiammetta. The author will take into account the character's personality to a large extent when writing. Although this book has many shortcomings, most of them are in the early stages. Overall, it is a book worth reading. I sincerely hope that the author can write a work that satisfies him (I wanted to give it 4 stars at first, but I really like Lemuan written by the author, so I directly praised it with 5 stars)