NBA: Team up with OK to Defeat Jordan at the Beginning!

The theme choice is very attractive, and it combines time travel and basketball competition well. The restoration of Kobe's technical characteristics is relatively good, allowing readers who know the game to understand the clues. However, some of the dialogues are slightly stereotyped, and it is recommended that they be closer to the characters' personalities and the background of the times. [Eat melon][eat melon]

It's just that the time was wrong, the players showed up at a time they shouldn't have. The writing is so confusing. What year is this now? Kobe was 18 in 1996. The protagonist is one year younger than Kobe and he can't even make it to the NBA. There are other player issues that make me so confused.

The setting of time travel + system is considered a classic combination in sports literature, but the author has come up with new ideas. The description of the game scenes is a bit repetitive. It is recommended that more tactical changes and on-the-spot responses be added.

This novel is one of the best I have ever read. The characters in this novel are well written. I give you a five-star rating. Come on, author! ! !

The book is okay, but I don't understand why I have to go to the Lakers and be on the same team as Kobe.

It's well written, every word and every sentence touches people's hearts. It's a rare good work. It's very good.

It's so well written. I really like it.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Author, you must finish it for me. This is the first basketball article I have read so many times.

When I read it, I felt that my ideas were very clear, and I didn't get confused by the complicated plot at all. The author's layout skills are so awesome!

It's very interesting. I wanted to read the plot again and again. I watched most of it twice. It's so exciting. Come on, come on, come on!

Looks good, I hope I don't have diarrhea later

The overall rhythm is well controlled, and the details of the game scenes are relatively in place. It can be seen that the author has a certain understanding of basketball. However, some of the supporting characters are a little thin. [Send heart][Send heart]

The cool points are not simply and crudely piled up, but are perfectly integrated with the wonderful plot, making it a hearty read.

The writing is very good. This is the first time I read a novel of this style. I like it. Come on!

The various details in the book are also well handled and full of realism. It makes people addicted as soon as they read it. It is worth recommending!

It's gripping at the beginning, every chapter has a hook, I stay up all night to catch up on updates, and I make a lot of money without adding water!

A very good book, as long as you can read it. It proves that this is a book with content

The author's writing ideas are very clear, and the complex character relationships and plot trends are organized in an orderly and exciting way [Like]

Following the author's words, it is easy to be drawn into the plot, which is very appealing and well written.

I think it's pretty good

During the reading process, you can clearly feel the author's intentions. The whole story is clear and layered, and it is worth following!

I think it's okay, Shuangwen, don't worry about the timeline [laughs][laughs]