Card Era: My Fruit Character Card

The writing is quite good, I read a lot of bad reviews, but they are all minor issues and personal preferences, nothing major. However, the biggest problem of the author is that the world view is not spread out. For example, food that improves soul power is stated directly by predecessors, but it does not mention the impact or explain why future generations cannot do it. The setting of the natal card is also relatively vague. It is not clear whether the thing on the card is awakened, or a certain kind of intention. After all, there are only a few kinds of fruits on the card, and it is not clear whether the protagonist awakens all the fruits, the fruit platter, or the types of fruits on the card.

Still quite interesting There are too many plots in the competition, it's really boring to watch😑

Very nice. The national treasure type of fruit.

It's quite interesting. It's not too different from a novel I read before. After all, that novel basically summed up all the anime in my childhood. It's good to be different, and it's good to write one by one.

I have read Chapter 38 so far, and it is quite good. There is a small problem in Chapter 30, but it was made up for later. Fast forwarding does not affect it at all. There is a small exchange competition with the senior class. The attitude of the teacher in the protagonist's class is not very good, but the teacher starts to explode gold coins and apologizes to the protagonist. Overall, it is a small problem, but the first part is considered a minor problem, and there are some typos in some places. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but after all, it is in Tomato, so five stars are still worth it.

Very nice. Is the protagonist a girl?

Everything else is okay, there's nothing bad about it, it's just that the author stopped updating it.

See the latest chapter fifty-eight. In summary, the writing style is good, there are flaws, but the flaws do not hide the good points. Considering that it is in Tomato, I can give it five stars. In addition, because of the book title Fruit Treasures, I hope to complete the other Fruit Treasures as soon as possible and increase a certain amount of interaction between the Fruit Treasures. There is still only one pineapple Fubuki, which is a bit regretful. Finally, come on, the author, and wish you better and better things in the future.

Very creative, hope to develop it only from fruits.

Not bad, I like it very much

I'm a bookworm, I don't pick

Come on, new book, just less

Very good come on come on! ! ! ! !

It's okay, four stars support it

Very beautiful and very satisfied

Not bad, childhood memories

It's a good book on Tomato

I really find it interesting

I like it. It's so imaginative.

If you have some ideas, you can see

Personally I think it looks pretty good

Very interesting story writing

A very interesting book,

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It's been a month and a half, is it completely cut off? Then I will delete the book. If there are any updates on that day, I will comment on the post. [Note]

I thought I could only make cards related to what my birth card was. It turns out that you can also make skill books or something like that

So prosperous, so prosperous, so dazzling, hahaha, so prosperous, so dazzling.

It's pretty good, why is the rating so low?

It's a good idea, but it's not toxic at the moment.

As an author, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.