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Beauty theme = I want to see it Unofficial history theme=Want to read Mei Luxin's unofficial history = I want to read it twice [Blow kiss] Come more, come more, come more

It's good-looking, the subject matter is novel, the unofficial history is wild enough, yet humorous, and the character's personality is well controlled. It's a rare book. I give it five-star praise. I hope you work hard and don't stop updating it. Regarding the unique taste of Meiluxin, I look forward to interacting with Shadow Chef (ಡωಡ)

I really like reading Chinese fanfics like this, especially the characters' personalities are super interesting. First of all, I like this kind of secondary creation character very much. After seeing the character's reaction and everyone's reaction when talking about it, I like to see those weird reactions. It's very fun. Another book I am following is about writing fan fiction for characters. The author seems to be unresponsive when flipping the fan fiction in front of the characters. It has not been updated for a long time, and I have followed it for more than 300 chapters. The protagonist of this book is super cute. If it was like this before time travel, my wife would like it very much. It has a conscience and a brain, and the writing is pretty good. It was said that it was to take revenge on the second young lady for exposing the second young lady and so on. Well, it was fun. It was originally just for revenge but ended up being because of Chongyun. I felt uncomfortable because of this incident, and felt guilty and astringent as if I had eaten an unripe sundown fruit. Are there any super cute ones? There are a lot of updates, the writing is good, the Chinese language is fascinating, and the characters' reactions are also included. The hesitation of this beautiful young writer. It can only be said that it is a battle-level immortal product. Please don't read my comments directly, just think it's super good, and then come and criticize me if you are not satisfied with it. The author said I am a troll or something. Don't reject it. I am just talking about my personal hobbies. I like to watch this kind of thing. I have a lot of movies, videos, second-generation live broadcasts, etc. In my bookshelf. I prefer this type, and I also like to watch the characters cry. This is my personal hobby. I can only say that in my personal eyes, this is a good book and worth recommending. If you read it poorly and criticize me, can you give the author a 1st point? You can't say it's a troll. After all, because my personal hobbies are not to your taste, you can scold me, but that doesn't mean that this book is not excellent to me. It has always been excellent to me, as long as the weirdness behind it remains unchanged. The second young lady of Feiyun Society did not admit or deny that she made a lot of money in a humorous and polite way. Let everyone's focus shift from men and women to the automatic behind. I really like the description of the characters in this book, and our cute little writer finally has his own love nest. I like to fall asleep listening to the sound of the waves. I only need to write manuscripts every day and sleep with the sound of the waves. It is the love nest of the young writer and I can sleep with the sound of the waves. What do you like about young writers?

The knife is delicious, the wild history is also very fragrant, and it satisfies many of my brain-tested plots. I feel that some stories should be seen by more people in Teyvat (the dedication of the gods and their relatives, the dedication of the unknown heroes, if the common people know it, will it reduce a lot of ignorance, such as the situation of Mondstadt's giant baby?), It is much better than most of the movie-watching accounts (these are what I hope everyone will appreciate when watching the movie) It takes a few words), I don't know how to describe it (only those who are related to each story can describe it), and the characters of each person are portrayed so well. This is the performance that the Genshin Impact characters should have in my heart (much better than the assembly line copywriting of the characters in the activities I see now). From the text, I feel that the author looks at the world with great tenderness. I hope this book can be updated with high quality and quantity. I will accompany this book to the end [Sending Hearts]

Progress: 108 This is the latest chapter. I like the Chinese version the most. It's so funny. The emperor doesn't even know he has a Taoist companion, hahahahaha... The daily life is okay. As Mei Luxin, hearing her father's call is another plot line. The only problem is that the heroine has a weird personality, a little cowardly, and has the mind of a child. The heroine is obviously a time traveler, but her behavior (excluding the writing) feels too similar to her. She is timid, cowardly, and unconsciously pretending to be cute. In short, she does not look like a time traveler.

If you like Meiluxin or Yeshi, just jump in! At first I thought it was just a book about the funny and wild history of emperors and immortals, just for dinner. Unexpectedly, when I looked at it, I felt very excited! And the pacing of this book is so good. The article "The name of Morax actually hides the twin gods and the contract of life and death" made me twist into a maggot on the bed! I came here for unofficial history, but, I want to say but! After reading more than a dozen chapters, I found that I actually loved the protagonist's daily routine more! The setting of the main character's social fear, otaku beauty, and Luxin is so cute! It's really the ultimate cute contrast! The protagonist is the humanoid Meilu Xin. While making waves in Liyue with her wild history, she also carefully conceals her identity for fear of being stripped of her vest. It makes people feel funny and a little pitiful at the same time. It's especially interesting to see her use "unofficial history" as a way to clumsily interact with the world!

It can be said to be one of the best on the track of Melusin. There aren't as many poisonous points as most fans' private settings. The characters are not OOC either Then the portrayal of the protagonist is very lovable from his actions and language.

It's great. The writing is really exquisite. The description of the characters is also very consistent with the original game. Many details are also in place. There are no bloody plots or characters (PS: Doge, the unofficial history written by the protagonist, is not included here) There are too few people reading this comment, right? Are you hiding this book so no one can find it? At present, the plot is too smooth and smooth. According to the fanfics I usually read, this book is rated 9.4! (Nearly 60,000 people are watching but less than 400 people have commented? Is it still the fault of Red Persimmon??) When I reviewed this book before, there were only 400 reviews. After reading more than 200 chapters, I came back and saw that the number was actually 2,000. However, this is still a small number. It is rare to find a daily novel that does not follow the main line. There are still too few people. Also, I have read a lot of other books these days... It can be clearly seen that the author is indeed a little rushed in some places. In comparison, some dialogue transitions and inserted descriptions in this book are a bit monotonous. For example, you can not just use names to refer to people. It is obvious that the author has used them in the early stage, but almost none of them later, such as using rhetorical pronouns without names. It can be clearly seen that the writing style is much more up-to-date than before, and it is much smoother than before. Personal opinion, don't care if you don't like it Ah, I also discovered that the author's writing style is tense and confusing all when writing the protagonist.

It's a well-written story that starts with unofficial stories. If you like unofficial stories, you can come and read more. The main character is also really cute.

It's okay. Unofficial History is not very wild, but it's not particularly ugly. It's just that the protagonist has too many roles, which is fine in itself. But I don't like the character of the protagonist. Most of it is okay, but it's a bit annoying when I encounter the plots of Xingqiu Chongyun. The author has talked about the motivations of the protagonist's behavior, but my personal experience is exaggerated and complicated. It would be better if there were less psychological descriptions. Now I basically only watch Unofficial History and Unofficial History. I will skip some parts related to the protagonist. My personal rating is 3.5, Because the frequency of updates is rounded up.

The writing is very good, the plot is also good, the pace is slow, and the characterization is also very good. It is the character's personality that I gradually accepted after reading it. This may be the reason for the low score of this book. After reading it later, it was quite enjoyable. The new author is already very good at writing to this level.

I think this book is very good. It is rich in content and full of true feelings. It reflects the normal reactions of normal people in strange environments. This writing technique is very powerful and I think it is very successful. This book not only has the main text narration, but also has extra content such as various unofficial histories. Some of the unofficial histories are rich in content and worth thinking about. It not only allows readers to have the pleasure of reading novels, but also allows readers to see the reality of real life. This is a well-deserved masterpiece (it may be a little selfish, but I have read it rationally)

Although we know that this novel is not about fighting But there are too many self-descriptions, psychological descriptions, and action descriptions. Although it is true that how you read novels has something to do with the writing style, it is not necessary for us to just look at the writing style [smile][smile][smile] I don't have the habit of giving bad reviews when I give book reviews, so I'll give it four stars. I feel like it's actually about 2 to 3 stars [facepalm] [facepalm] I feel like the emotional drama is almost written into a novel. Just the water dragon coming to pick someone up is about 10 chapters long.

I really like this kind of serious nonsense novel. As someone said before, this kind of novel is written about other people's Yao, and then, the reactions of the characters are very interesting. Then there is this subject. The protagonist is a humanoid Meiluxin, who is an orc, with soft and cute breast dumplings, and a serious psychological description. It has a strong sense of substitution and has some expectations. For the subsequent plot, I only give it about 8 points, which is a bit aggrieved to the author. Generally speaking, this kind of daily film is only watched after those intense fights. I can only say that the author of Tomato Free Novel Every Day is definitely a good scalper.

It's nice to read and I like it very much. I think this subject matter is very interesting. But she has written so much. Didn't it reach Fontaine? Actually, I really want to read some unofficial history about Villette [laughs] and then find out about the main character [sending my heart]

This is the second Meiluxin novel I have come across that is well written. The content is interesting and humorous and the author updates it very quickly. However, the new book has a few rated chapters. It can be put on the bookshelf first, but it is still worth recommending [Like]

It's good to watch, and it feels like the protagonist is really living a good life in the Teyvat continent. After watching it, I'm looking forward to the protagonist returning to Fontaine. Will she travel there by herself, or will someone pick her up?

This is really a rare and good book. I initially sought entertainment for the purpose of watching Unofficial History, but as I watched, watching Lovia make friends, watching her have the courage to take off her cloak and face life, and seeing her being able to talk and have fun with her friends naturally, I really felt happy (I was very happy for her anyway😊). And the characterization here is very delicate and well grasped. The author's depiction of emotions is really great, and the characters seem to come alive in his writing. All in all, this book is really good! There are many, many advantages! (The vocabulary of the brain is burned out...)

Bonus points for the beautiful theme, the psychological description is beyond the reader's perspective but it's in place. It even made me go back to play Genshin Impact after not playing it for 3 years. First of all, let me explain that I am not interested in CP. I did not expect it to be a female channel book before reading it, but the two words "hope" are most abundant in the whole book. No matter what the subject or the way it is written, hope is the last harbor in the imagination. I may not be able to have beauty in reality, but I can at least see hope in the author's writing. I just want to taste something sweet. I am already bitter enough. Is it foreshadowing that substitutes are so popular in female videos? It seems like this is the only way to write in daily life.

Overall, this is a very good book. In my personal opinion, As for why you say that? I think I can probably answer it from several aspects. 1. The theme chosen and the character settings and background in the novel are very unique. Second, the content and plot of the novel are not only unique, but also very heart-warming Third, the most important thing is the protagonist. The character is very vivid and three-dimensional, and very attractive. 4. Characteristics and advantages of the author's writing style Let's talk about the first aspect first. Among all the novels about the second creation of Genshin Impact, the novel that uses Mei Luxin as the plot theme and even the protagonist is Mei Luxin cannot be said to be rare, it can only be said to be unique. Anyway, it is the only one I have seen. The topic selection of Dan Dan Lun probably attracts most readers who like to read this kind of second creation and are tired of traditional second creation themes. Meloxin is a cute and beautiful creature unique to Fontaine. I don't think any player will hate them, so it is not only novel but also captures the love of players and readers. The second aspect. Although the content of casual and daily novels is not unique, but rather common, what if we add the topic of Meiluxin? This is what makes it unique, and the article revolves around the protagonist Lovia and the things that happen to her, plus this is her daily life. This not only allows the novel to closely focus on the protagonist, but also can well reflect the protagonist's changes, mental processes and emotions. This is more able to grasp what readers want for a novel whose chosen genre content should focus on people. After all, daily life is definitely based on leisure, so although the protagonist is a little cautious in the early stage, it is still a beautiful and warm life to read (although Lovia is a little cautious in the first half of the novel in Liyue, and even lives a little hard, and even when she is sick, there is no one to take care of her, but in ordinary life, you can still find a lot of fun - such as her favorite writing - which itself is what daily novels can embody (warmth, and Lovia is originally surrounded by people who care about her), and in the later part of the novel, life becomes better, and the people and things around her become more and more abundant, which can catch the reader's appetite (I will not give an example here). In addition, the novel does not mention that Lovia likes to write unofficial history, which makes the article more interesting. Although I know it is unofficial history, it is really interesting to read. Isn't it a kind of fun to read another novel inside the novel? This is also completely different from other Genshin Impact novels. The protagonist likes to write unofficial history, which naturally adds more interest and richness to the article. Of course, the plot revolves around the protagonist Lovia, but it is different from other Genshin Impact novels in that the theme of this novel is daily leisure. Therefore, the plot does not care about any adventures, novel things, or too extensive friendships (and given the character of the protagonist, she does not like extensive friendships), but instead They are all talking about some very ordinary things, such as Xiangling asking her to taste dishes, Funina custom-made clothes for her, and Villette asking her to be the food consultant and chef of the restaurant. The ordinary things cannot be more ordinary, but because of this, the plot of the novel is very soothing and leisurely, very suitable for readers who are willing to soothe their mood and read heart-warming stories. The third aspect. Very, very important. The character image of the protagonist Lovia is very distinct and three-dimensional, and it is well confirmed in the plot. Of course, there is no lack of changes that the character should have. In fact, I was confused at first about why the protagonist was so cautious when he first came to this world. I thought that if it were me in the book and I knew I was so cute, I would definitely not be so cautious and would often show myself generously because I appreciate my own characteristics and believe that others will also like and accept me. In the second half of the article, when the protagonist returns to Fontaine, I found that although Lovia is no longer as afraid of showing herself to others as before, she is still more cautious now, as if she is socially afraid, and she is very concerned about other people's opinions and evaluations. But when I read the author's description of the protagonist's life experience in the previous life, I could probably figure it out. Lovia was so cautious because of her previous life experiences, not because she wanted to be like this. After experiencing rejection from relatives, betrayal from friends, and unhesitating belittlement, Lovia was afraid to show herself to others again, even if the other person had good intentions. Of course, the characters' personalities must have changed. Although Lovia closed herself to outsiders at the beginning and was unwilling to express or reveal herself, after experiencing so many wonderful things and meeting so many people who had sincere concern and hope for her, Lovia's heart must have changed. At the beginning, she lived a very cautious life, but after experiencing so many wonderful things and people, she became more cheerful, and even dared to joke with the Duke - characters who are full of changes are often more attractive. In addition, there are her basic characteristics. Lovia's hobby is writing unofficial history. At first, she used this hobby as a way to earn some money. Later, after she no longer had to worry about money, this hobby was not discarded. Instead, it was used as entertainment and something to share. Even at the time of Li Yue, she was still very cautious and even afraid of showing it in front of others, but she still had this love. Whenever he thought of When she writes about a subject or writes an unofficial history, she will describe her excitement and joy, as well as her guess about the response of the book, just like a child who is so excited and unconcealable when she does something well or secretly does something bad. This is in line with her character image, a 14-year-old girl (the article says she was 14 when she first traveled through time), which is not inconsistent at all. (It's a bit embarrassing because the word count is exceeded, so I'll post the rest under the topic of my comment) The fourth aspect. This point almost directly determines the quality of the book. An author's writing style lies not only in his description of things, characters, plots, and content, but also in how he writes these things into something that is very beautiful, not inconsistent with reading, interesting and attractive. Although not every sentence in the article is as gorgeous as ancient poetry, it is definitely good enough for readers. This directly affects the reader's perception, how to write the plot well, how to connect it perfectly, how to write the characters vividly, how to make the character's personality and language characteristics unique, and how to tell who it is at a glance. This is better reflected in the unofficial history in the article than in the ordinary plot. For example, Mr. Shi Po's acting style and language style, when writing about immortals or emperors in Liyue in ancient times, how he wrote the style of writing to have a feeling of both classical Chinese and vernacular writing, and how the correspondence between Mr. Li Xin and the shopkeeper Sun wrote words that were almost classical Chinese like those between literati and inkmen. The author can write it and write it well, which shows that he has a very good literary foundation. I think this is probably why the author's first book was so popular. About these four aspects, I seem to have said too much. Readers can jump to read if they think it is too long. The most important of them should be the third and fourth parts. The most important and most important part is the third part. I think this book is good both subjectively and objectively. But before I had such a profound and careful interpretation, I felt that the biggest impression this book gave me was that it was very, very novel. To say how much I recommend this book, I think no matter what words I use, I should say it endlessly. In short, it is very *114514 recommended. Readers can really read this book. I hope that the author's writing will become better and better, and more and more readers will like it. Mumada(*Ü*)Ｉ Lᵒᵛᵉᵧₒᵤ♥

It is a rare novel with the theme of Melusin. The protagonist is very cute and the storyline is well developed. So far, no major flaws have been found. (Quietly: In fact, I didn't read the wild history written by Xiaomei Luxin very seriously. I don't really criticize the cp written by Xiao Luo, and I think the wild history is too wild haha, but there must be people who like it and support Da Da to continue writing! Another thing: the author is simply a donkey of the production team (I Can you say that), I have never seen an author who updates five times a day, and this one is the first. While the quantity has increased, the quality has not declined. Sometimes I feel a little tired when I read what the author has to say. I hope you can pay attention to rest and not tire yourself too much. Keywords: Genshin Impact 2, Melusin, time travel, wild history creator, the protagonist has no cp.

It's really nice and long-lasting, and the author's writing style is also very solid. The only drawback is that when I dug up this book, I only updated it so much [face covering]

They are all compiled by the author or are unofficial histories of Teyvat on the Internet. It is recommended not to read them in class, as they are easy to laugh out loud (I almost got caught by the teacher [face covering]), but the author seems to be unable to write the feeling of close friends between friends of the opposite sex. His writing style can't do it, so he added some ambiguous feelings in it, but in fact he is still a friend, which feels a bit weird. The others are very good and worth reading, but please hurry up and write. I have been reading it for a long time and I have almost finished it [crying] @Charlie is a wolf

Look! What you are looking at is Meluxin! The little one is so cute [Admiration] Besides, the descriptions of some wild officials' perspectives are really good. I love watching cp fandom wild officials [I've learned it] [I've learned it]

A great fanfic with a very cute protagonist and a very abstract and funny plot.

It's a bit interesting, although sometimes I feel uncomfortable, um, but overall it's pretty good, very innovative, and I'm in the process of updating it. The stories I wrote are also very interesting, but there are a few new books.

If I could add a decimal point, I would give it a score of 4.8. I felt a little frustrated at the beginning. I felt that the protagonist was too neurotic and seemed to have a persecutory delusion. However, the characterization is nothing to mention. The subject matter is also relatively novel. The unofficial stories are also okay and echo the original plot. It is well connected. Overall, this is a pretty good book. At least it is the best among the Genshin Impact fanfics I have read. However, the character of the protagonist is not very likable [Sending Hearts]

After reading this book for so long, it's time to comment [Thinking] Personally speaking, the characters in this book are very well controlled. To me, there are almost no OC parts, except for those in unofficial histories. The content is very cheerful, and the reader feels very comfortable. It is a rare good book among Genshin Impact. Our little Lovia is also very cute, and her growth experience is also gradual and not too abrupt. She has gradually become cheerful and optimistic from being introverted and timid after passing through, and her interaction with the characters of Genshin Impact is very heart-warming and very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Sending Hearts] In short, I like, eh! [Blowing kiss]

After reading it for so long, I realized that there is no book review yet, so I will give you a small review. 1. The protagonist is a time-traveler. Before time-travel, he was the ultimate sociopath. After time-travel, he is still the same as Genshin Impact. But now, with the development of the plot, the ice in his heart has slowly melted. 2. The author depicts the environment and psychology very well. He describes the protagonist's transformation from confusion to inner determination, from difficulty integrating into the world to acceptance of the world. The writing style is very good. 3. When the protagonist first comes, he has a human mind. It takes dozens of chapters to transition to a beautiful mind. This part is also well portrayed. 4. This book is a slow-burning type. The protagonist stayed in Liyue for about 160 chapters before going to the next country. If you don't mind, don't read it. 5. This book has a book group, and the author is very active. You can come in to catch and tease the author (bushi) 6. Due to the protagonist's social fear, it may not be very pleasant to get along with Xingqiu, Shen He and others at first, but it will be fine after we get to know each other better. Don't read if you don't mind. 7. The protagonist of this book is a wild history writer, and the original wild history will also be shown in the book. The author has a great imagination. He may not be able to let go at first, but he is getting more and more happy. It is strongly recommended to get involved. Having said that, there are currently no poisonous points in this book. It is expected that the stable rating will be about 9.3, Which is suitable for reading. There are too few, please add more quickly [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The subject matter is novel and the characters are described in detail. It's just that the protagonist is a bit too social-phobic, I hope he can grow up a bit later on. [Love]