The Abyss Estate

The protagonist takes the lead on his own, saving this and that, but he doesn't take care of himself, and it's not scary at all.

For a reader who loves horror novels looking for excitement, the only shortcoming of the author of this article is that there is too much psychological description of the protagonist? I think you want me to have a sense of immersion, or you wrote it from the perspective of immersion, but I think this plot is not exciting enough? You can't try to make me, the reader, feel that the development of this story point is scary and exciting by describing the protagonist's fear, because simply describing the ghost in the story or how the protagonist escapes will be difficult for onlookers to immerse themselves in. I think the author's writing style is very good, but can he try to write in a way that guides the reader's emotions?

Chapter 50. Not much to say. Inexplicably, the protagonist's aura is extremely heavy. Qin Na used her own life to save the protagonist for the first time. Is this reasonable between life and death? There is no reason for no one to comment and no one to read. If the article written before is transferred here, it may have a low score. But if a new book has no score or no score, it is basically GG.

I have read two dungeons. The dungeons feel like an escape room, with a strong sense of oppression and a good horror atmosphere. The disadvantage is that the content of the dungeon story is a bit dull. I hope that the author can enrich the dungeon story and enhance the sense of participation of the supporting characters in the future.

It scares people and creates a sense of oppression, does it cause anxiety in silence? Also, the author writes too frequently and exaggeratedly about the small actions in the rules. In the second copy, I held the fragrant cauldron with lightning a few times. I can only say that you have watched too much of the new movie "Bixian". There are not a few ghosts in the whole drama. As a result, you made a fuss and hallucinated the people around you and committed suicide. Did you find it interesting?

Objectively speaking, the writing is good, but too much emphasis on the inner activities of the protagonist makes it feel like a patchwork of writing. The levels are all good and full of horror, but the passers-by are too useless and the protagonist is too holy. The theme of horror and bloody rules still needs to be calmer. Save the people who should be saved, and don't save those who want to die.

It's pretty good, but it's been suppressed and suppressed all the time, and it seems a bit boring.

The protagonist is too kind-hearted. The teammates in the dungeon are not very reliable and there are some gangsters. There are one or two newcomers in each copy. If you don't mind, you can watch it. I can't stand it anymore

The writing is pretty good, but there is always something wrong with English. Is it just me or does everyone do this?

I've never seen a protagonist who enjoys being a Virgin so much... Don't always save this one and that one? Even if they are not familiar with each other, they are going to be rescued together and become the savior?