Time Rot***********

The scenes are excellent in rendering and depiction, blending emotions into the scenery, with strong emotions, vivid characters, novel selection of materials, and the author's imagination is very rich. The protagonist Chenlong continues to grow through trials and progress in battles, giving readers a clear story perspective. With movie-level rendering and description of battles, the world seems to be truly presented in readers' minds, as if it is happening in front of their eyes. The writing is bold, the writing is beautiful and the stars are moving, and the pen is like a dragon and a snake weeping about ghosts and gods. Hidden secrets, the ink pond can collect water, and a piece of paper can collect clouds thousands of miles away. The writing is exquisite, as arrogant as the shy moon covered by long clouds, and has the aura of a wild dragon soaring into the wind. The plot advances in an orderly manner, with a certain degree of relaxation, and creates a universe-like illusion. The novel talks eloquently and slowly, with a rhythm like flowing water. The pen moves like a dragon and a snake, and the ink stains the deep lake. The story is crazy but not arrogant, humble but not humble, reserved but not competitive. The chapters are coherent, logical and unified in style. The protagonist and his friend Ella, as well as his dragon mother and three other "brothers" all have rich psychological activities. The characters are three-dimensional, the motivations are reasonable, and the settings are precise. Every character is carefully carved by the author like a work of art, and every scene is like a beautiful picture that is added and colored by the author. The protagonist Chenlong, a little white dragon, seems to be slowly walking towards us from a brightly lit stage. Standing there, his every movement, every expression, and every word is full of the unique beauty of the dragon tribe. When he tilts his head slightly and blinks his eyes, the picture is like a touching mysterious arrow stabbing into the heart of the reader. It is beautiful and cute. The little white dragon in your works is very charming, lively and vivid. In your writing, he has flesh and blood. When he is happy, he will make readers smile with joy, and when he is sad, he will also make readers feel pessimistic. The eroticism is sultry, and the joys and sorrows touch the heart. You have successfully made readers sympathize with the characters in your novels, and feel that nature and man are one. It is an excellent western fantasy dragon novel and a treasure novel. I like to read it, it's not bad, I can read and eat it with confidence. I hope the author will continue to excel in his creations and develop superb literary talents. I wish readers will continue to make progress while reading and condense their superb wisdom.

The author himself has good writing skills and has a unique interpretation of the protagonist's growth over time. This is a highlight of the book. I look forward to the author's description of subsequent ability development. There are also problems. The description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is a bit big. The process of deepening the relationship between Ella and the protagonist is less. There are too few scenes between the meeting and the protagonist going back in time to save people, which makes the protagonist's madness to save Ella later seem a bit inexplicable. Obviously the knife part is well written, but because there is too little emotional foreshadowing, this part of the knife seems to have no feeling. The protagonist is also weird. I don't know if the author himself is describing it in this direction. It's a bit too extreme and crazy. It's okay to use death too many times as an explanation. The transition from normal human thinking in the first few chapters to gradually beast-like thinking only took three supporting characters to kill the protagonist. It felt a bit rushed. When I think about the protagonist and Ella having such an unforgettable love, it feels strange that there are multiple female protagonists in the label. Overall, the main highlight of this book is that the growth in time is unique and interesting, and the writing is good. It would be nice to have more and more detailed descriptions of emotions later on.

It's not too much to rate yourself too high [shy] In my novel, you can see that starting from the bottom timeline, you build and trigger various time skills brick by brick. The main focus is a hearty development. Or maybe... It just makes me happy. But it doesn't matter. From the initial "death retrospective" to the unintentional twisting of the "blue ring" and the triggering of the first "time stop", the soul slipped into the dragon god's realm to seek death; from the creation of a controlled "bullet time" to save Ella's liver explosion and the completion of precision magic surgery, to the cruel "split timeline" to create a virtual time boundary in order to synchronize the lifespan of his lover and not want to be alone. Every step is Chenlong's casual choice. A decision without regrets. Everyone will also see how the "blasphemous combination skill" started from stealing fragments of divine power, evolved into a strategic deterrent, and finally became a five-color dragon with no choice but to delegate power to Chenlong's heaven-defying magical skills. Also, there is a discussion on how "Space-Time Paradox Copy" can be sublimated from a transportation skill to the power of lifting an entire city into the sky. The power of time overlap... "Local Time Stop" was first used in the Contract City Hotel. Of course, there is also the deterrent to Poseidon by "God's Punishment: Skyfall". "Divine Punishment·Holy Light" is a complete mockery of the concept of "Holy Light". Look who is the dragon of light, proud face. The above list of skills is a complete growth path for a soul in a different world, at the cost of countless deaths and retracements, to gradually transform "time" from a life-saving tool into basic rules, strategic art, and the core of one's own divinity. It may not be to everyone's taste, but it's definitely interesting! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It has the flavor of ancient Western fantasy, very classic, and worth watching. For Sese! Let's take a look at more and add more later.

It's very beautiful, support it😋

Setting novel content is not bad, please support it [laughing]

Well, it's very good, but it's so strange. I don't know why it looks good.

Time-travel type

The writing is OK, the rare dragon text re0 plus dragon text, plus from weak to strong? You are too prolific, you write so much in less than a month?