[Complete, HE, Shuangjie] Niu Tiezhu is a street novel author who got lucky one day - yes, in the physical sense.
By some strange combination of circumstances, Niu Tiezhu traveled through time to his own book.
Good news, the system has been awakened.
The bad news is that he is dressed as cannon fodder and is not even a villain.
The worse news is that judging from the time point of time travel, he will be beaten to death for provoking the protagonist in five days.
But fortunately, talent points can be stacked infinitely. As long as you can do it, you will become a numerical monster sooner or later. You can punch Long Aotian and kick the villain. Just thinking about it makes me happy...
But apparently, he was happy too early.
When the character he created discovered that the so-called world was a bad novel written by a bad author, a strangulation of the author quietly began... (New book has been released)
Reader comments
The following is the subjective judgment of this reader on various aspects of this article for reference by subsequent readers. The scores range from 0 to 100, and the scores are arranged in ascending order of level. 60 Is a passing grade, 75 is a good grade, and 90 is an excellent grade. The higher the score, the higher the reader's recognition of this aspect of the article.
Character design and creation: 76
Design of plot content: 83
Plot rhythm design: 73
Rhythm control of writing: 75
Paragraph layout: 75
Word choice/sentence rendering/atmosphere rendering: 72
Theme/idea: Good (I would like to represent the three views of compatibility with this reader: Fail/Pass/Qualify/Good/Excellent)
Plot completeness: Excellent or near excellent (I represent this reader's opinion: Failed/Passed/Qualified/Good/Excellent/Excellent)
(Failed: Eunuch Wen;
Pass: hasty ending;
Passed: ending but digging the hole but not filling it;
Good: The ending fills in some pitfalls;
Excellent: The ending and the pitfalls are basically filled;
Excellent: At the end, all the holes dug have been filled in, and the writing is logical and logical. )
Overall rating: 4.1/5
Summary: An article that does not hide its flaws. Personally, I think it is somewhat challenging to choose the main line of this article. However, the writing support is limited, which results in a limited audience for this article, or it may not meet the author's expectations.
But I think it is still a very good article. Will the author write another one?
This book is very good, why do you say that?
Because before encountering this book
Book shortage! ! ! ! I was short of books for five weeks.
I can't read any books, so I finally found this one that suits my taste.
The author's setting is very good. The only flaw is that there is a bit of a drag near the finale, but it doesn't matter, it's pretty good.
Finally, there are relatively few 🥩, and there are only a few basic extras, but it doesn't affect it. I still love to watch the plot flow, and I hope the author will get better and better! ! ! [Love]
Nice! So delicious! So cute! Baby, you are so cute (/≧▽≦)/~┴┴ You must stay together with Wang Zai! Xiaoyi, I also support you... Who knows how funny it is when I see it and like it even more [laughs] Xueyihou looks at it from the front, cute! Look from the back, cute! Look on the left, cute! Look on the right, cute! Look above, cute! Look below, cute! In summary, it's endlessly cute!
It's good-looking. Although the author said it was a relaxed style, in fact it was a plot flow with not much emotional drama. I highly recommend reading this book if you want to watch a drama + if you like two men😋
The extras are also very delicious, you can eat them without saying anything😋😋😋
So far, I have read "Enter Baopu's Family". I don't know why. The writing style feels very good and smooth, and it is humorous and makes me smile. But it gives me the illusion of an honest person selling rotten things, hahahaha... It's interesting. I haven't seen the author's other works, and I don't know what the rest of the story is like. Anyway, so far I'm quite interested in reading it.
It looks good. I originally thought it was an AI cover and I didn't really want to click on it, but the introduction is to my liking. . After reading it, I realized that the author's writing is very strong and the plot concept is very reasonable, but the length is too short...! But it can be said that he is the best author I have ever read on Tomato. How come there are so few people and low ratings? What a pity!
The writing is superb, the plot is intertwined, the villain is so cunning, I feel like the sky is falling [face-covering] [face-covering] [face-covering] The subsequent extras are also well written [adoration] [adoration]
Really enjoyed this book! ! ! The plot is intertwined and very novel. The emotional line may not be so obvious, but it is super, super, invincible and beautiful! ! ! ! The author's writing style is very good🤓🤓
The writing of "Xue Yi Hou" is really annoying, but the reason why the main palace is the main palace (.)
Pure love for elementary school chicks, the plot is also very interesting, the emotions are also very interesting, in short, it is very interesting [Love] The author is so good at writing ambiguous atmospheres, there is only a hug in the main text, and there is only a kiss in the extra chapter. I was so excited that I punched the air
The protagonists worked really hard... Both protagonists
Each character has their own unique story experience and their shining points. For example, the second male protagonist can neither be considered a good person nor a pure bad person. Where there is good, there must be a negative. The same is true. When he is not chosen, he can let go very well. He is a charming villain😍.
Nice! Apart from being a little short, there are basically no problems. The emotional and plot lines are all very well written. It is one of the few movies on Tomato that I found good enough to watch [][][][]
It's very interesting. I tell those who write novels to dig holes and not fill them in at their own risk.
Say it honestly. The setting and plot are very new. This kind of setting is rare in the "Tiandao" series, and there are even very few books in the "Tiandao" series.
The writing is very good. I couldn't figure out the emotional line before. It came out of nowhere. The answers at the end are very good and I understood it instantly.
Come on! It's really well written. It's just that this book is too poignant for a sensitive person like me. I'm afraid I won't be able to forget Heaven's Way Blood Food [face covering]
I finished reading the extra part after reading it halfway through, and I found gold. The logic of the characters is quite smooth, and the emotional development is natural. It avoids the shortcomings of many straight-male two-male novels. It makes me want to pull up a banner: The writing is really awesome. [Cry]
The concept is very clear. At the beginning, the author traveled into the novel he wrote, and had to work hard to do some things that changed his destiny in order to survive. In the first half, there were actually very few emotional lines. As they developed slowly, the relationship between each character was very close, so it would not make people confused easily.
The place where everything exists is Li Mingyi's home😋😋Jiu Jian Xian and Master are both reliable and cute
Not bad, it's the kind of ambiguous I like, but it's too plain! ! The whole text seems to be just a hug and a kiss
It looks good, the plot is not cliché, and then, it is relatively complete, and the pictures are also very interesting. The sweet relationship between the two people at the back, I feel that the transportation is not very convenient, but the pure love hits hard, it is really cute [Love]
A very delicious book! It's also very clear water, but it doesn't affect me at all in loving them. It's very pure love! ! I actually don't like Xie book reviewers very much. Seeing that the author has no ratings yet makes me want to support it.
It's no good. Author, do you know that I think there are still holes that haven't been filled? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]. It's beautiful and the writing is good.
Yes, the characters are vividly described. There is another small twist later [laughing]
My wife is so beautiful (♥∀♥) [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's pretty good-looking and fast-paced
Very nice, I like it very much
Congratulations on finding you a treasure
After seeing more than 100 chapters of "All Living Things", I just want to say I'm sorry for the essay I wrote, it's so painful for those characters.
Not bad, I like the character of the protagonist very much
🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑, You can watch it, it looks good
I can't write a book review, but I love reading it, it's pretty good
It suits my taste, but I just can't get enough of it! It's totally fine to have another few hundred chapters
It's very, very beautiful, but there's no rating yet!
The following is the subjective judgment of this reader on various aspects of this article for reference by subsequent readers. The scores range from 0 to 100, and the scores are arranged in ascending order of level. 60 Is a passing grade, 75 is a good grade, and 90 is an excellent grade. The higher the score, the higher the reader's recognition of this aspect of the article. Character design and creation: 76 Design of plot content: 83 Plot rhythm design: 73 Rhythm control of writing: 75 Paragraph layout: 75 Word choice/sentence rendering/atmosphere rendering: 72 Theme/idea: Good (I would like to represent the three views of compatibility with this reader: Fail/Pass/Qualify/Good/Excellent) Plot completeness: Excellent or near excellent (I represent this reader's opinion: Failed/Passed/Qualified/Good/Excellent/Excellent) (Failed: Eunuch Wen; Pass: hasty ending; Passed: ending but digging the hole but not filling it; Good: The ending fills in some pitfalls; Excellent: The ending and the pitfalls are basically filled; Excellent: At the end, all the holes dug have been filled in, and the writing is logical and logical. ) Overall rating: 4.1/5 Summary: An article that does not hide its flaws. Personally, I think it is somewhat challenging to choose the main line of this article. However, the writing support is limited, which results in a limited audience for this article, or it may not meet the author's expectations. But I think it is still a very good article. Will the author write another one?
This book is very good, why do you say that? Because before encountering this book Book shortage! ! ! ! I was short of books for five weeks. I can't read any books, so I finally found this one that suits my taste. The author's setting is very good. The only flaw is that there is a bit of a drag near the finale, but it doesn't matter, it's pretty good. Finally, there are relatively few 🥩, and there are only a few basic extras, but it doesn't affect it. I still love to watch the plot flow, and I hope the author will get better and better! ! ! [Love]
Nice! So delicious! So cute! Baby, you are so cute (/≧▽≦)/~┴┴ You must stay together with Wang Zai! Xiaoyi, I also support you... Who knows how funny it is when I see it and like it even more [laughs] Xueyihou looks at it from the front, cute! Look from the back, cute! Look on the left, cute! Look on the right, cute! Look above, cute! Look below, cute! In summary, it's endlessly cute!
It's good-looking. Although the author said it was a relaxed style, in fact it was a plot flow with not much emotional drama. I highly recommend reading this book if you want to watch a drama + if you like two men😋 The extras are also very delicious, you can eat them without saying anything😋😋😋
So far, I have read "Enter Baopu's Family". I don't know why. The writing style feels very good and smooth, and it is humorous and makes me smile. But it gives me the illusion of an honest person selling rotten things, hahahaha... It's interesting. I haven't seen the author's other works, and I don't know what the rest of the story is like. Anyway, so far I'm quite interested in reading it.
It looks good. I originally thought it was an AI cover and I didn't really want to click on it, but the introduction is to my liking. . After reading it, I realized that the author's writing is very strong and the plot concept is very reasonable, but the length is too short...! But it can be said that he is the best author I have ever read on Tomato. How come there are so few people and low ratings? What a pity!
The writing is superb, the plot is intertwined, the villain is so cunning, I feel like the sky is falling [face-covering] [face-covering] [face-covering] The subsequent extras are also well written [adoration] [adoration]
Really enjoyed this book! ! ! The plot is intertwined and very novel. The emotional line may not be so obvious, but it is super, super, invincible and beautiful! ! ! ! The author's writing style is very good🤓🤓
The writing of "Xue Yi Hou" is really annoying, but the reason why the main palace is the main palace (.) Pure love for elementary school chicks, the plot is also very interesting, the emotions are also very interesting, in short, it is very interesting [Love] The author is so good at writing ambiguous atmospheres, there is only a hug in the main text, and there is only a kiss in the extra chapter. I was so excited that I punched the air The protagonists worked really hard... Both protagonists
Each character has their own unique story experience and their shining points. For example, the second male protagonist can neither be considered a good person nor a pure bad person. Where there is good, there must be a negative. The same is true. When he is not chosen, he can let go very well. He is a charming villain😍.
Nice! Apart from being a little short, there are basically no problems. The emotional and plot lines are all very well written. It is one of the few movies on Tomato that I found good enough to watch [][][][]
It's very interesting. I tell those who write novels to dig holes and not fill them in at their own risk. Say it honestly. The setting and plot are very new. This kind of setting is rare in the "Tiandao" series, and there are even very few books in the "Tiandao" series. The writing is very good. I couldn't figure out the emotional line before. It came out of nowhere. The answers at the end are very good and I understood it instantly. Come on! It's really well written. It's just that this book is too poignant for a sensitive person like me. I'm afraid I won't be able to forget Heaven's Way Blood Food [face covering]
I finished reading the extra part after reading it halfway through, and I found gold. The logic of the characters is quite smooth, and the emotional development is natural. It avoids the shortcomings of many straight-male two-male novels. It makes me want to pull up a banner: The writing is really awesome. [Cry]
The concept is very clear. At the beginning, the author traveled into the novel he wrote, and had to work hard to do some things that changed his destiny in order to survive. In the first half, there were actually very few emotional lines. As they developed slowly, the relationship between each character was very close, so it would not make people confused easily.
The place where everything exists is Li Mingyi's home😋😋Jiu Jian Xian and Master are both reliable and cute
Not bad, it's the kind of ambiguous I like, but it's too plain! ! The whole text seems to be just a hug and a kiss
It looks good, the plot is not cliché, and then, it is relatively complete, and the pictures are also very interesting. The sweet relationship between the two people at the back, I feel that the transportation is not very convenient, but the pure love hits hard, it is really cute [Love]
A very delicious book! It's also very clear water, but it doesn't affect me at all in loving them. It's very pure love! ! I actually don't like Xie book reviewers very much. Seeing that the author has no ratings yet makes me want to support it.
It's no good. Author, do you know that I think there are still holes that haven't been filled? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]. It's beautiful and the writing is good.
Yes, the characters are vividly described. There is another small twist later [laughing]
My wife is so beautiful (♥∀♥) [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's pretty good-looking and fast-paced
Very nice, I like it very much
Congratulations on finding you a treasure
After seeing more than 100 chapters of "All Living Things", I just want to say I'm sorry for the essay I wrote, it's so painful for those characters.
Not bad, I like the character of the protagonist very much
🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑, You can watch it, it looks good
I can't write a book review, but I love reading it, it's pretty good
It suits my taste, but I just can't get enough of it! It's totally fine to have another few hundred chapters
It's very, very beautiful, but there's no rating yet!