[The fanfic of Zhan Crimson Eyes, may later travel to Death with Esdeath, Night Raid and others] Yunzheng is a disciple of Ye Maoshan. One day, he was called into the room by his master and was about to be refined into a pill. Fortunately, he was already prepared to refine the master in an instant.
Just when he made a breakthrough in cultivation, thunder rolled from the sky and sent him and his little golden monkey away together...
When I opened my eyes, I found a little girl with long silver-blue hair standing in front of me, who was chattering without knowing what she was talking about...
Reader comments
It's strange. I've read all of Tomato's Crimson Eyes fanfics. This one is definitely among the top three, but there is no rating. The other fanfics either have protagonists who are mentally retarded, or the characters are crooked, and the characters are broken, or... The plot is messy and disorganized, which is not the case in this book. The subject matter is also very novel. It is not like a book written by a new author. At least it can be read without giving people a feeling of tearing. Maybe I am on the wrong platform. It is possible to explode if you go to the starting point [Love]
I was wrong, I should praise, I should scold, this book was almost handled very well, but it collapsed in the end. I understand that the plot needs to jump and cut in, but the twist is too rigid and far-fetched, an unreasonable feeling arises spontaneously, and the natural feeling in the previous part is lost, and the subsequent content can no longer be read with concentration. Although there are only a few chapters left, I still feel pity sincerely, the author is eager...
It's a pretty good book. At least I enjoyed reading it. The emotional part is handled well, but it's a bit weird to say I like Chi Tong later.
It's strange. I've read all of Tomato's Crimson Eyes fanfics. This one is definitely among the top three, but there is no rating. The other fanfics either have protagonists who are mentally retarded, or the characters are crooked, and the characters are broken, or... The plot is messy and disorganized, which is not the case in this book. The subject matter is also very novel. It is not like a book written by a new author. At least it can be read without giving people a feeling of tearing. Maybe I am on the wrong platform. It is possible to explode if you go to the starting point [Love] I was wrong, I should praise, I should scold, this book was almost handled very well, but it collapsed in the end. I understand that the plot needs to jump and cut in, but the twist is too rigid and far-fetched, an unreasonable feeling arises spontaneously, and the natural feeling in the previous part is lost, and the subsequent content can no longer be read with concentration. Although there are only a few chapters left, I still feel pity sincerely, the author is eager...
It's a pretty good book. At least I enjoyed reading it. The emotional part is handled well, but it's a bit weird to say I like Chi Tong later.