American Comics: I Play the Role of a Fortune Teller at the Beginning, and I Will Tell the Avengers

Overall it's pretty good, but I really like telling riddles. Basically, everything must be riddled, original work. Anyone who can do divination has no magic stick like you. And isn't he a time traveler? Why does the Hulk have to do divination? It's not okay to rely too much on divination.

As far as the current plot is concerned, the overall writing is okay, and there are no problems with the portrayal of the characters. It can show the sense of mystery, and as a mysterious fan, there are no outstanding points. For myself, there are two areas where it currently feels a bit lacking. One is that the overall pace is too fast. Although I can understand the new author publishing a book, I still hope that the pace can be slowed down to enrich the mystery of the plot and the protagonist, add appropriate transitions, and depict more daily life. The second point is that if possible, I recommend adding more scenes to create an atmosphere, rather than using simple characters to advance. Most Cthulhu-themed books like to depict mystery. As a fanfic itself, especially if it is written by a new author, in terms of writing style, there is not much fault. If you stick to it and the setting does not collapse, this should be good. The above is my own opinion. Because this is a mysterious fanfic and has some high requirements, it is definitely my own opinion.

Come on, it's rare to find a beautiful comic and Lord of Mysteries, so don't give up.

It's okay, there's no big problem at the moment. The plot arrangement is a bit tight, but it does not affect the look and feel. This may be because there are few branch plots as the main plot progresses. The main plot is well crafted. Although a lot of holes have been dug (drawn) and have not yet been filled, logically a certain degree of self-consistency can be achieved. Just be careful not to forget to fill in the holes later.

Suddenly I feel that the protagonist is walking in the Marvel universe as a fortune teller. He can also write about the Lord of Mysteries in his spare time. With Westerners' love for the Lord of Mysteries, I think they can have an orgasm directly in their skulls [laughter] Is this not written anymore? I originally planned to keep it for a while and then look at it. Seeing this situation, I won't keep it to death.•ᴗ•💧

It looks good, I like it, but there are too few. I also have a few questions to ask, is the protagonist's divination ability prepaid? Why do ordinary people still have the ability to divine? Can the protagonist still become the Lord of Mysteries? After all, the current master of mystery is Klein, and will the protagonist give other people potions? To be honest, I finished reading Lord of Mysteries but I didn't get enough of it. Their thieves with different abilities are fun. I hope the author can write more. Updates are so slow. I finished reading them in a few days after watching them for more than ten days. Please give me more!

Author, have you forgotten the rules for playing a fortune teller? [Thinking]

I can give it five stars. The pace is a little slow but still acceptable. Each character is very special and can be seen from the perspective of a bystander. The foreshadowing is also very good, and there will be unexpected rewards. I like this book very much.

I'm being conservative at the moment. Will the protagonist die and change his vest? Licking the dog. . . .

It's good to read, but Klein never thought that it would be so difficult to advance to Sequence Nine [facepalm], but it is actually a good Marvel and mysterious fan novel.

This new book is good. I will add another star later. Add one star.

Beautiful, rare subject matter, I hope the author will not go to the palace

Not bad, it just depends on whether he becomes a god in the end or something.

The subject matter is good. Tony was already suspicious when he came out of the cave. The protagonist just gave a clear warning. The result told me that Tony would not investigate and asked the protagonist to help solve the matter. Stan's character setting felt even crazier based on the author's description. As long as the author writes more weird things, I would feel better. (=ＴェＴ=) Being scolded

It looks good, the narrative structure is clear, and the characters are consistent with the original work.

It's very interesting. It's basically the best book about divination that I've read, although it's a bit short now.

Very good, a little green

I haven't read the original work of Mystery, but I think it's okay to give it a try [eating melon]

Is the first book you read so interesting? The system is so recommended

I think it looks pretty good, and I see that there are no surprises for now, hehe, I like it ʔ•̫͡•ʕ

Nice! Unexpectedly, I dug up fine chaff! Come on, author, write quickly! Don't be tired or idle!

Overall it's okay, the quality is higher than the average of those Marvel fanfics

It looks delicious for now

Good-looking, very good-looking

Not bad, keep it up

Greatness needs no words

Very good book, thumbs up from old bookworms

Marvel's pretty good food

What is written is not enough to poke fun at

It's rare to see this type of thing, so there's nothing wrong with it so far. The only problem is… when I discovered it, it wasn't even 120,000 words long! My uncomfortable batch!