Demon Slayer: for the Sake of Shinobu, I Chopped Muzan into Pieces

It is a very good fanfic, and it is well connected with the original plot. The origin and reason of the self-created breathing method are very innovative, and the characters also have an obvious growth curve (although due to the short length of Demon Slayer fanfics, this line has surpassed many fanfics, and most books have not written this point). It also truly shows the talent of the protagonist that was praised by Hei Shimo in the introduction. The talent of opening up the world around the time of Hanashira's death is really high [Like] Brother Bai Jing is very handsome, but I don't like the author's rather hasty ending. [Pinch] He could have been polished more carefully.

This is the first time I've given full marks to a Demon Slayer fanfic. The characters are well developed, especially the emotional relationships between the characters. It's not too abrupt and very distinctive. The author is too authoritative when it comes to writing about emotions [facepalm]

Let's talk about the general content, that is, the protagonist traveled through time but has never seen Demon Slayer. His family was unhappy in both his previous life and this life. He was adopted by a trainer and learned to breathe the wind. Then when he went to Kasumigiri Mountain to learn something, he met Shinobu and the others, and then rescued the Butterfly sisters whose parents had died and were being chased by ghosts. I also like this book very much. I have read at least 50 demon slayer novels. Many of the plots are based on formulas. Basically, you know the plot, travel through time, and get the system. I also hate this kind of book very much. I think the system and other things that can be obtained through time travel are just like Shuangwen, which is very annoying. But the author's writing in this book is very clear and there is nothing embarrassing about it. But I'm curious why every book shows the death of the Butterfly sisters' parents. Many people say that only in this way will the Butterfly sisters join the Demon Slayer Corps. There is a plot in it, and it feels like a horror movie... You can go to the page and take a look, in short, it is highly recommended! But I don't have much patience, so I stopped reading until the end because the author hasn't finished it yet. . . It's also a pity, so I'll have to wait a year or two, but it still represents the perfection of this book! I hope the author will update more~[Salute]

It's good-looking and pure. Both the fighting and the emotional lines are very well written. It easily made me feel like the protagonist himself. It's now finished and I'm starting to update the extras. I hope to see the happy life of all the pillars in the future. The striped matter must be resolved. It's only now. 25Th birthday (Part 1), hurry up and release the next update. I can't sleep, and there is no ending for Kanae yet. Is it with Fengzhu or with the protagonist later? Although I didn't see Kanae saying that she is not interested in the protagonist, that's it. Update it quickly. Zhu Bo [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

It will definitely be popular. The author is very talented and every poem in it shocked me. There are just some shortcomings (personal opinion). The author probably wrote too fast, resulting in some sentences that are not fluent and have some grammatical defects. Of course, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and this is still a book worth reading. (Personally, I feel it's comparable to rice pillars)

How can I put it, there are shortcomings and advantages, and I have finished watching them all. When I watched the Demon Slayer anime, I felt very sad. I saw the characters I liked sacrificed one by one, so I kept looking for fan fiction to make up for the regrets in my heart. Now, it is time to step out and I can't keep feeling sad. This novel is quite good, and it was attractive enough for me to finish reading it. Unlike the other novels I have read that were rated over 9 points each, they were all full of errors and I couldn't finish reading them. They were too harsh. This book is already very good, it shouldn't only have this little score.

In terms of plot, after all, the newcomer does have areas to polish, but it is already very good. The biggest feature of this book is the battle scenes. The battle process written by the author can be said to have attracted people here. The picture quality is still very good. My personal opinion is that the number of poems in the article can be reduced. I and 🍅book friends here probably can't understand it, 🍅here is not so hardcore.

A very good novel with a good plot structure. Unfortunately, my taste is different. I like the two heroines [smile] [smile] [smile] (Butterfly Sisters)

It is a very good book. The author describes the protagonist in a very three-dimensional way. We have witnessed the protagonist's transformation from treating others indifferently to fighting to protect his friends to finally protecting others. He said "I am enough for people who have no future" and "Father, I only have three years to live." It really brought tears to my eyes.

I am like a small fish in the long river of this world. The wind and waves of fate may always be unsatisfactory, but I am not like other small fish who rush forward bravely. I yearn for the ideal sea. I like to flow slowly and freely in the river, swim briskly, go with the flow in the wind and rain, and enjoy life. Even if reasonable difficulties and setbacks are everywhere, I still look forward to it, because I can look forward to clearly feeling that I am alive. Even if no one cheers, I must hold on to my life. No matter how impetuous the society is, I must stick to my bottom line.

Good-looking teacher, I can score more points for the 94 points. Please keep working hard.

Very well written! But don't talk about stripes' longevity, it's a really good knife [crying]

My overall feeling after watching it was okay. Some details and plots are not that good. I can't tell clearly, but it doesn't affect the viewing experience. As for the plot development, I felt a bit fast but not too fast because I skipped some plots. Maybe it's because there are few original plots.

The writing style is okay, but not delicate enough. The character descriptions could be more detailed, and more effort could be put into researching the emotions and psychology of the characters. The poetry is still good, but there are some areas where it is not up to par. It's still a little short of detail. There are a lot of omissions in the plot, and a few foreshadowings aren't stable enough. Overall, it's a very comfortable read.

I've read three of them, they're so good!

The plot is pretty good, but a common problem among demon slayer fans is that they think ghosts are too strong, and this one is the same. Demon Slayer is essentially a world of low martial arts. The power of ghosts lies in their ability to recover. The blood ghost technique can only be mastered by a few ghosts, and most ghosts are not that powerful.

So far, so good. There are no other big problems except for the layout problem. It's a pity that Kanae didn't write it well. I can see the signs of emotion, but it was not taken away. I can only say that it is a pity.

It's quite good-looking, and I recommend it to bookworms. The only regret is that it's a pity not to accept the double butterfly.

Among the Demon Slayer fanfics I have read so far, it is pretty good, but like other fanfics, there is nothing special about it. Maybe it's because Demon Slayer is really not good at writing new things. I originally wanted to give it three stars, but I felt it wasn't that low, so I changed it to four stars.

The emotional description is very delicate, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. It is worth watching.

It is the best among Demon Slayer fans, and... Especially the little poems that appear from time to time, I have to say that the author is awesome. The feathers are falling, the sun is dark, the night is frosty, and the ghosts are living in the quiet alley. Bai Jin quickly saw the evil spirits and killed him, and the scenery came all over Lieyang Road.

Why did she ask me to put down my weapon when you arrested her? This sentence makes me happy

It's good, but now I feel a little regretful for the protagonist and Megumi

Five stars for you, stay alert and don't lose your share.

The author who respects the original work the most, I recognize you.

It's good to read. This book has a different feel from other Demon Slayer fanfictions, and a sense of novelty (=^▽^=) Recommended [Like]

The characters are three-dimensional and delicate, each character has a role to play, and each one is a living existence! Love to watch! Update faster!

It's beautiful, the style is very close to the original work

The writing is good but it's not segmented and it's a bit uncomfortable to watch. Also, does the male protagonist have any memories of Demon Slayer?

This book is really good [laughing]