JOJO: the Bizarre Adventure of Kurumi Tokisaki

Unexpectedly suitable character and world background. Tokisaki Kurumi was indeed a good boy who was a very righteous hero until he learned that the monsters he killed were all Mio's experiments.

The writing is excellent. To be specific, I would give it a 7. There are no common problems with fan fiction. Inserting Kurumi into JOJO did not make me feel uncomfortable. From my reading experience, books with titles that make people feel fresh at first glance are generally not of high quality. This author has really grasped the idea and integrated Kurumi into the world of JOJO. This is quite rare. There are also innovations in the content (maybe it's because of my lack of knowledge). Compared with the original work, there are new stand-ins and plots. The battle scenes in the article not only include a single force defeating ten groups, but also the description of the battle of wits is very good. This point is well grasped. Final summary: In terms of my personal personality, I will write a long review to recommend this work only if it allows me to read a book of more than 100,000 words in one breath. My personal recommendation index is 8 points [like]

It looks surprisingly good, it doesn't feel stiff and it really blends in. Occasionally, I imagine that a strong lady sneaks into a men's gang... Thai pants are hot!

Dang, Kurumi Tokisaki with the Araki line!

When to unlock Kurumi's other time abilities? My suggestion is to unlock them first. The first bullet speeds up and the second bullet slows down to reduce mental energy consumption. The future vision of the fifth bullet can be strengthened to see one to ten minutes in the future. The fourth bullet can be unlocked when fighting DⅰO. The eleven and twelve bullets can be unlocked before fighting Kira. The eighty-nine bullets can be unlocked by beating the boss. The ten and three bullets can change their abilities. What do you think about Ten and Three?

The writing is really beautiful. I hope you can keep writing. [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

It may be a little boring in the early stage, but the protagonist really experiences all this story with his own actions, but it is not like most follow-up fans who just follow the story but has his own story. Metaphorically speaking, it is more like another possibility. The writing is a little light, but the rest is fine.

Great, this book allows me to see another possibility for Sansan to not be driven crazy. The ending must be the ultimate Kurumi who controls the power of time and space.

It's a very novel subject matter. Even though I haven't seen JOJO and Yue Zhan, I can still understand it. Moreover, it's not the kind of drama that you lose interest in after watching it for a while. The author is very thoughtful and creative. The battle scenes are not the kind of one-stop fighting. There is a battle reasoning link that JOJO has to offer. All in all, it is very interesting to watch.

Personally, I feel pretty good

The book is a good book, but there are too many people in the comments who teach authors how to write books [awkward laugh]

Five-star review, why are so few people watching it?

Very well written, five stars without explanation

Quite unique

Will there be a follow-up story about Beyond Heaven?

It's a good book. Even the values ​​​​given by the self-made avatar system are reasonable and not obtrusive. The most important thing is to actually name it with the title of the song. Many Jo fans can't do this.

The writing is good, and the ideas for the extra stand-ins are also very imaginative and not perfunctory. More importantly, they use suitable song titles as stand-ins. I hope it sticks to it.

The writing is really good, there are no common poisonous points, and the writing style makes it feel like it is reasonable for Kurumi to appear in Jojo.

It's great, the best JOJO article I've read recently.

Very nice, not too abrupt

The author must work hard!

Greatness needs no words

It does not completely follow the rules of the original work, but adds some original enemies to better express Kurumi's abilities.

It's probably just a beautiful thing, no need to say more [blowing kiss]

Very interesting setting, there are many original stand-in designs worth seeing

Looks good, the storyline is exciting, excellent product

Very interesting, I like this kind of fanfic very much

Will the author write the plots of the next few films? @Kun

It's so beautiful. If it doesn't look good, I'll be furious.

Very nice, please give the author a gift