Broken Iron*****

It's a pretty good book, but when I read the male protagonist, I always unconsciously bring into mind the image of the warden in the Delta [facepalm]

It's a very good book. Basically, there are no poisonous or embarrassing points. If I have to say it, it's only a little bit about the confession of the star. Also, the number of words in each chapter is too few. I haven't read enough and it's gone. [Please pay attention] [Please pay attention] [Please pay attention]

I clicked in because the heroine Xing and the warden (the mysterious gun-jumping man Doge) retained me. In fact, Mingqing's background experience and Xing's character creation were very good. The writing style is dense and good. For example, a star may really fall in love with an unknown person for the sake of love - this is very pioneering (doge, if there is a big comment, please comment, continue) The creation of the star gate is very hard, Theresa really didn't expect it, but isn't the star gate also a kind of "star" gate... This is a book I will look forward to updating tomorrow. I also really love Ah Xing, he is carefree yet delicate in strange places, his style is varied and beautiful without being boring (are there really people who hate Ah Xing...) I have been envious of Ming Qing for days... To sum up: If you are looking for a new book, there is Pure Love in The Elements of Iron Breaking. There is nothing wrong with this book at all. I think if there are no surprises, there is no problem with an 8.5 Or above. (Reply me...)

The writing is exquisite and detailed, the characters are full and rich, the plot is orderly and not draggy, the environment is deeply portrayed, and the emotions are well rendered. The characteristics of the characters are distinct and not OC. It can be said that there is no poisonous point. As for the plot, it will not be solely connected to the main plot. It will open up another exclusive plot, which only intersects with the main plot. It will affect the process of part of the main plot to a certain extent. The main core is not there, and the change is quite good. There are character hints and foreshadowings, but not many (commonly known as the Riddler is rare), but it does not affect the viewing experience. After all, too much foreshadowing will only feel too boring, unless it is the kind of foreshadowing left inadvertently, such as Kafka saw the box in the star's hand All in all, it is well written, and it is expected to be on par with or even surpass the new Dark Tower fan fiction. So since I gave such a high evaluation, can you code faster while waiting for the meal╭(╯^╰)╮

It's a pretty good book, but it always makes me think of the image of the warden in the game.

It's a good book, but the emotional line jumps quickly in the early stage. If you can't stand the sensationalism, you can just jump to it. There are only a few pictures, and the connection is not a big problem. This is such a good book I advise you to watch it for half an hour before rating it, otherwise it will not count. I seem to have made this mistake

I think the writing is very good and it suits my taste. The protagonist is high-class and cute. The appearance of the old warden reminds me of some not so good memories [laughter]

Always think of the warden in the delta

The protagonist is really distinct, especially the character and background. Although there may be a little bit more that we don't know, it's not very OOC. It can be said that it fits the character very well. There is no poisonous point. Poison testing experts will tell you! The author's writing is of high quality and the update efficiency has been improved. Read it casually. If you don't like it, come to the author. I am very determined to read novels Shennong has arrived! Poison? Basically nothing It's actually not necessary to lift the snack a little bit Basically the warden of the Delta. Personal opinion Welcome to kick

A story with a grand background, a novel idea, and a solid read. It not only retains the taste of Bentie, but also brings a new adventure experience, especially suitable for fan readers who want to see something "different"! "

Very nice! Authors don't have to worry, they can write at their own pace. The new book's score of 6.5 Is actually quite high. Among all the new books I've read, except for those with a fan base, there are basically no scores higher than 7, which is already very impressive.

It's a book with great potential at the moment. If it doesn't collapse later, there won't be any problems with Yuzuo.

Author, come on, I believe in you [sending my heart][sending my heart]

If there was a person named Raven 🤔🤔🤔

It looks pretty good so far [got it] Very delicious novel 😋

If you write well in the back, you will get 8 points guaranteed.

The warden was so frightened that he cried. The new world cannot live without the Iron Order!

It's pretty good. I'm just afraid that the male protagonist will suddenly take out an Ash-12 [crying]

Dude, you are so sweet. I have a fishing genius with a black tower, and here comes a facial paralysis commander and an abstract star [laughing] The Iron Collapse Zone has also been eating chaff recently.

It's good to read. Good luck to the author.

Okay, give me more sugar

The devil escort is too scary

I don't know why I like this kind of mysterious and high-class male protagonist.

I want to listen to Gehro's speech [eating melon]

To put it bluntly, I put it bluntly, Galaxy Succubus is a perfect score! ! [Sending Hearts]

Fat, as fat as braised pork.

Be careful when reading novels, this phenomenon is spreading more and more [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] It's so delicious Ψ(￣∀￣)Ψ😋😋😋

The warden is still too authoritative and exhausted [laughing evilly] [covering face] [crying with laughter]

Very nice book, made my brain spin

A very good book, to my liking