Demon Slayer Learns Breathing Techniques, Red a Is My Experience Pack

Shirou Emiya who turned into a perfect creature [laughing evilly] However, Emiya's projection is special and can be stored for a long time. If Emiya himself does not want to cancel it, it will always exist. As a by-product of the inherent barrier, this projection is more similar to a subspecies of fantasy materialization.

The plot is smoother than expected. I thought the fusion of the two works would be strange, but the author delicately blended the two sides perfectly. Apart from the annoying Shinji's whitewashing, it's really great to watch!

Looks good, I announce that Tomato novels have a new Shirou Emiya after Free Wolf and Burning Wolf Well, after reading it again, I feel that the author has a common problem. Some people always look down on Shirou for some reason. They subconsciously underestimate Shirou without knowing his strength. Starting from the first column, they jump to conclusions without understanding anything and think he can't do it. Who (because I haven't watched Demon Slayer) was dictating Shirou, and then to the pig-headed one at the back, who attacked Shirou without any reason, but Shirou kept giving way to the other side because the opposite side was a piece of rough jade. He even accepted him as his disciple and rubbed weapons for him. After reading the whole article, I feel that although Shirou here has great strength, he has always been humble. He will do whatever others ask him to do and completely obey other people's orders. Even if others offend him or hurt him, he doesn't care. This description is too saintly, unlike Shirou. You must know that Fate also has Sakura Line (becoming Sakura's partner) and Yukinoshita's Oath (prequel to Magical Girl Illya), as well as Red A as an example, which is enough to prove that Shirou will also struggle, suffer, and be dissatisfied. He is just an ordinary person with a righteous mind, but Shirou in this book is like a nanny, working hard without complaining, without his own life or personality. I suggest you read the books Burning Wolf or Free Wolf. Although he has the world in mind, he also has his own selfishness. This is a normal human being.

Shirou written by Yunyue Kitchen is half-hearted about Xingyue's setting (turning Shirou into a perfect ghost). Xingyue's heroic spirit line is owned by the Alaya family alone. If he becomes a Dead Apostle and participates in a big event, he will be targeted by Alaya [laughing] (let the Templar Church and Clock Tower know and wait to be annihilated or sliced into specimens [laughing] There is no need for Tsukishu to come in, and the characters created by the native Shirou double-crossing Katatsuki and Demon Slayer are not pleasant. However, there are not many Katatsuki in Tomato, let alone more than 200 in this one. An extra star will encourage the book to pass the time. I hope the author can collect more materials in the later period and improve the setting to respect the original work.

It's great to watch, and I'm looking forward to the Shura field between Dai Mao and Gray [laughing] However, without the famous rescue scene of Dai Mao, would Shirou really be devoted to Dai Mao?

It's a rare good book. The author writes it very well. At first glance, it's not at the level of a new author. It's very well written. The author must be an old author. The writing doesn't look like the immatureness of a newcomer.

The plot is very smooth, but I think it would be better for the author to fill in the human history of blood types, as well as the origin and so on... (´_ゝ｀) Some places are different from the official settings, which is a bit uncomfortable😣

Not bad, okay Just so so, let's see what happens next.

There are many ooc areas. 5.5 Is too low. 7.5 Should be normal.

After all, ghosts don't need to sleep, right?

Super good, I feel it is more appetizing

Overall it's good, but occasionally there are some bad points... Anyway, it's okay, I give it four stars. After further review, I feel that the author's understanding of both Demon Slayer and Xingyue is not particularly deep. Senior chefs and textual research parties do not recommend it, so that's it

Author, I am a member of the Sword Party [laughs awkwardly]

Come on, I haven't seen a good Shirou fanfic in a long time [Adoration]

It's interesting, you can take a look

Not bad, the image is very successful

Too much for my liking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

A bit like Senko Muramasa

Not bad, although there are many problems

It's okay. I don't know why the rating is low.

Shirou's true talent was discovered

The writing is good, but it feels more like a Demon Slayer fanfic, with too little fate content.

The plot is compact, the description is delicate, and it is not toxic at the moment. I finished reading it in 2 days, so I'll give you a good review first to avoid interruption [laughing]