A Mortal's Path to Immortality, My Immortal Wife Returns Home from the Start

It is a rare good book. The author accurately depicts his personal experience of entering the writing world with a rhetorical technique. He was waiting at home for his wife to return from working hard, and vividly described the various mental journeys and personal experiences that led him to the writing world. He also wrote about the various joys he had along the way of writing. There are thousands of good Tomato books, but this is the first time I have encountered such a good book. I wish the author and his wife a happy marriage and happy fatherhood.

Very good-looking, highly recommended. I enjoyed reading the cuckold story so much 😢

This is a top-level novel about cultivating immortals. The characters in it are all flesh-and-blood, and the ups and downs of the plot are heart-stirring. Especially after the 100th chapter, the writing power is fully demonstrated! The title of the book is somewhat misleading, but it is indeed of a very high standard.

A divine book, even at a level that shouldn't appear on Tomato. The cuckold is used to divert attention in the front, and it gradually gets better in the back, with layers of reversals and reversals. The writing is delicate and the foreshadowing is cleverly conceived. It really stands out among the highly homogenized fairy tales. It's very good-looking.

The author has the means to keep people coming after the explosive start. I admire it. It shows that there is indeed something remarkable. It is more suitable for people who have read a lot of books. Newcomers may be directly poisoned to death [face covering] [face covering] The subsequent plot is quite enjoyable.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good novel about cultivating immortality in Yangshizi. The plot is relaxed and the characters are vivid. I have read Chapter 176 so far, and I am really shocked by the author's writing style and ideas! From a personal point of view, Weiyang is the "promoter" of all the current plots (the Taoist couple, the male protagonist going up the mountain, the master being captured, the sect's destruction). It seems that everything that happened has something to do with Weiyang, but it is difficult to define her as a bad person. The two sides of the barrier are inherently antagonistic, and it is understandable that she plans the true blood for her father's family, but the subsequent development is far beyond her own control, and each and every incident makes her feel guilty towards the male protagonist and thus provides help many times. From the perspective of a reader, I think there is nothing wrong with her, but from the perspective of the male protagonist, she should be tidied up (she is really harmful to people, and she is just causing trouble) [laughing] Yanran, as an innocent victim of Weiyang's real-blood plot (she is possessed by a love poison and a strange demon is lodged in her body), has created three Taoist companions. At present, it seems that they are innocent (one is a male and a female, one is disguised as a man, and one is just a companion), and it can be seen that she loves the male protagonist from the bottom of her heart. An ordinary peasant girl who is lodged by a strange demon will inevitably have an impact on her heart and behavior. She is looking like a script for a heroine. Looking forward to the follow-up development! The male protagonist, Chen Yang, is a low-level peasant boy with a golden finger and a small follower. He follows the path of slowly growing up with the help of noble people, and surviving in desperate situations. There is no over-level challenge to kill everyone, nor is there any submissiveness and tolerance. The other characters in the article are also portrayed with flesh and blood, but it is a bit difficult to deal with Li Yan's rebirth as a woman. Is it necessary to have a cuckold connection and a love rival become a lover? The author foreshadows and decrypts at the same time, and the plot is controlled so well! ! ! Really looking forward to the follow-up development! ! ! Rarely good article! ! ! Come on

It's really super good-looking. Don't be scared away by the introduction and name. The more you look at the back, the better it looks. It's a different world of cultivating immortals. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 Trust me, you'll get excited after seeing it.

Currently it's pretty good among tomatoes (in my case). The main plot is about cultivating immortality. Although I almost dismissed it at the beginning (the edge was okay, the green~ was a bit difficult), I read it leisurely at the time, but found that it became more and more fascinating. The emotional line has some minor flaws, the story has ups and downs, some characters are flesh and blood, and the group portrait skills need to be improved. For now, the rest of the story is on the right track. The writing is becoming more and more fluent, the writing is brilliant, many foreshadowings are gradually revealed, and the protagonist's buffs are also stacked up. At least he looks like a protagonist~ (For the protagonist, I think it can be evil, it can be good, it can be sanctimonious, it can be despicable, but I don't want it to be stupid, ignorant, or a tortured virgin or something like that) Big cheers for the author! The protagonist has a tough life, and is even more of a strong-willed character...

First of all, let's draw a conclusion: it is indeed a cuckold article, but it is not bad, with a score of 7 points. Excluding cuckolds, it's a pretty good fantasy novel for mortals with an 8.5 Rating. But not only does this article have cuckolds (this is even minor), the protagonist of this article will be separated from the early stage in the later period (the first fifty chapters break with the broken shoes, but later he will miss the broken shoes), and there are a lot of people rushing to wash the broken shoes. The main cuckold story is that Zhao Yanran, a broken shoe, has been married to the protagonist's childhood sweetheart for 10 or 20 years. After going up the mountain, he "fell in love" and was "detoxified" by the three Huangmao brothers (Li, who is currently a woman; Zhao, who is currently dead and may become a woman; and the other one who is similar). Then when the three-year period is up, Broken Shoes goes down the mountain, accompanied by a man named Zhao, who "does it" in front of the protagonist. He does not let the protagonist detoxify and asks Zhao to detoxify. The protagonist just listens to the corner. (Actually, there is no problem with the logic. At this time, the protagonist is still a mortal, unable to do anything and just feeling aggrieved) As for the main text, it is a standard plot nesting, and the foreshadowing unfolds one by one, which is relatively smooth. But the pace is very slow. Even if the author has tens of thousands of words per day, the protagonist with almost one million words is just building a foundation.

After reading the book for so long, this is the first time I tried a cuckold story, and I got hooked. The beginning really shocked me. I endured the discomfort and got better after reading it. The author's portrayal of the subsequent characters feels more realistic, which is different from most of the fairy tales I've read and is very fresh. I just feel uncomfortable and want to watch it now. I still feel uncomfortable after watching the later part. The poison resistance is still too low. I hope it will be better in the later part. Up to now, this book is really awesome. The respective settings for cultivating immortals are imaginative yet logical, the foreshadowing of the scenes before and after is echoed, and the group portraits and characters are vividly drawn, making it possible to remember everyone after seeing them. It's been chapter 500 and you, Old Chen, still miss you Sister Zhao, 🐢It's over🤓🤥