After My Wife Went up the Mountain, She Became a Taoist Couple with Her Senior Brother.

It is a rare good book. The author accurately depicts his personal experience of entering the writing world with a rhetorical technique. He was waiting at home for his wife to return from working hard, and vividly described the various mental journeys and personal experiences that led him to the writing world. He also wrote about the various joys he had along the way of writing. There are thousands of good Tomato books, but this is the first time I have encountered such a good book. I wish the author and his wife a happy marriage and happy fatherhood.

Very good-looking, highly recommended. I enjoyed reading the cuckold story so much [crying]

This is a top-level novel about cultivating immortals. The characters in it are all flesh-and-blood, and the ups and downs of the plot are heart-stirring. Especially after the 100th chapter, the writing power is fully demonstrated! The title of the book is somewhat misleading, but it is indeed of a very high standard.

A divine book, even at a level that shouldn't appear on Tomato. The cuckold is used to divert attention in the front, and it gradually gets better in the back, with layers of reversals and reversals. The writing is delicate and the foreshadowing is cleverly conceived. It really stands out among the highly homogenized fairy tales. It's very good-looking.

The author has the means to keep people coming after the explosive start. I admire it. It shows that there is indeed something remarkable. It is more suitable for people who have read a lot of books. Newcomers may be directly poisoned to death [face covering] [face covering] The subsequent plot is quite enjoyable.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good novel about cultivating immortality in Yangshizi. The plot is relaxed and the characters are vivid. I have read Chapter 176 so far, and I am really shocked by the author's writing style and ideas! From a personal point of view, Weiyang is the "promoter" of all the current plots (the Taoist couple, the male protagonist going up the mountain, the master being captured, the sect's destruction). It seems that everything that happened has something to do with Weiyang, but it is difficult to define her as a bad person. The two sides of the barrier are inherently antagonistic, and it is understandable that she plans the true blood for her father's family, but the subsequent development is far beyond her own control, and each and every incident makes her feel guilty towards the male protagonist and thus provides help many times. From the perspective of a reader, I think there is nothing wrong with her, but from the perspective of the male protagonist, she should be tidied up (she is really harmful to people, and she is just causing trouble) [laughing] Yanran, as an innocent victim of Weiyang's real-blood plot (she is possessed by a love poison and a strange demon is lodged in her body), has created three Taoist companions. At present, it seems that they are innocent (one is a male and a female, one is disguised as a man, and one is just a companion), and it can be seen that she loves the male protagonist from the bottom of her heart. An ordinary peasant girl who is lodged by a strange demon will inevitably have an impact on her heart and behavior. She is looking like a script for a heroine. Looking forward to the follow-up development! The male protagonist, Chen Yang, is a low-level peasant boy with a golden finger and a small follower. He follows the path of slowly growing up with the help of noble people, and surviving in desperate situations. There is no over-level challenge to kill everyone, nor is there any submissiveness and tolerance. The other characters in the article are also portrayed with flesh and blood, but it is a bit difficult to deal with Li Yan's rebirth as a woman. Is it necessary to have a cuckold connection and a love rival become a lover? The author foreshadows and decrypts at the same time, and the plot is controlled so well! ! ! Really looking forward to the follow-up development! ! ! Rarely good article! ! ! Come on

It's really super good-looking. Don't be scared away by the introduction and name. The more you look at the back, the better it looks. It's a different world of cultivating immortals. [Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile] Trust me, you'll get excited after seeing it.

Currently it's pretty good among tomatoes (in my case). The main plot is about cultivating immortality. Although I almost dismissed it at the beginning (the edge was okay, the green~ was a bit difficult), I read it leisurely at the time, but found that it became more and more fascinating. The emotional line has some minor flaws, the story has ups and downs, some characters are flesh and blood, and the group portrait skills need to be improved. For now, the rest of the story is on the right track. The writing is becoming more and more fluent, the writing is brilliant, many foreshadowings are gradually revealed, and the protagonist's buffs are also stacked up. At least he looks like a protagonist~ (For the protagonist, I think it can be evil, it can be good, it can be sanctimonious, it can be despicable, but I don't want it to be stupid, ignorant, or a tortured virgin or something like that) Big cheers for the author! The protagonist has a tough life, and is even more of a strong-willed character...

After reading the book for so long, this is the first time I tried a cuckold story, and I got hooked. The beginning really shocked me. I endured the discomfort and got better after reading it. The author's portrayal of the subsequent characters feels more realistic, which is different from most of the fairy tales I've read and is very fresh. I just feel uncomfortable and want to watch it now. I still feel uncomfortable after watching the later part. The poison resistance is still too low. I hope it will be better in the later part. Let's give a little spoiler in advance, I'm afraid too many people will run away immediately after seeing the beginning. Don't sympathize with Zhao Yanran and think that she was forced. This Zhao is a pure bad guy, but those three people were used by Zhao. Although, those with low poison resistance should not try it. The front is really awesome. If you can't hold it, just jump. The back is really good looking. (I take back my comments after seeing that there are no pure good guys or bad guys in the supporting characters of this book. Zhao Yanran is also a very complex character, which makes people sigh. I highly recommend this book. I haven't seen such a beautiful fairy tale in a long time.)

First of all, let's draw a conclusion: it is indeed a cuckold article, but it is not bad, with a score of 7 points. Excluding cuckolds, it's a pretty good fantasy novel for mortals with an 8.5 Rating. But not only does this article have cuckolds (this is even minor), the protagonist of this article will be separated from the early stage in the later period (the first fifty chapters break with the broken shoes, but later he will miss the broken shoes), and there are a lot of people rushing to wash the broken shoes. The main cuckold story is that Zhao Yanran, a broken shoe, has been married to the protagonist's childhood sweetheart for 10 or 20 years. After going up the mountain, he "fell in love" and was "detoxified" by the three Huangmao brothers (Li, who is currently a woman; Zhao, who is currently dead and may become a woman; and the other one who is similar). Then when the three-year period is up, Broken Shoes goes down the mountain, accompanied by a man named Zhao, who "does it" in front of the protagonist. He does not let the protagonist detoxify and asks Zhao to detoxify. The protagonist just listens to the corner. (Actually, there is no problem with the logic. At this time, the protagonist is still a mortal, unable to do anything and just feeling aggrieved) As for the main text, it is a standard plot nesting, and the foreshadowing unfolds one by one, which is relatively smooth. But the pace is very slow. Even if the author has tens of thousands of words per day, the protagonist with almost one million words is just building a foundation.

It's quite good-looking, and has the potential to be a full-length novel. I'm very optimistic about you, the author, and the male protagonist is also very kind and lovable. Treating Zhao Yanran as a passerby is not green. Don't tell me that you want to get back together with Zhao Yanran. It's quite estranged. If we get separated, don't get together again. The single female lead, Elder Shen, is pretty good.

"The Rural Love Story of Cultivation to Immortality", "The Story of Greed and Joy", "Love Is You, Me and Him", "My 26-Year-Old Little Boy" The author's writing is fluent, and I find it difficult to apply what I have learned and seen on the right path. Maybe you are writing to yourself who is not sure how old you are, so boldly pursue your dreams!

I have finished reading it, and my record can be checked. I read it quickly. It is generally good. It is a normal and old-fashioned fairy tale, but the subject matter is novel. As long as the subject matter is normal, it will be 4 stars. Overall, it is a good fairy tale, but most of the front parts may not be acceptable. People who read novels for a long time will not like that. It is okay. It has a psychological effect. I will give 5 hearts because this kind of novel is rare and it is worthy of enriching my novel manager.

The combination of love and immortality is beautiful! There is more human touch in it, which is more interesting than the ordinary pure immortal cultivator. I just hope that there will not be too many female protagonists, so as not to be sad [laughing][laughing]

I have read a lot, and this one was surprisingly good. Unlike other immortality novels, the routines all have the same template. This novel has twists, foreshadowing, and unexpected moments. It's this protagonist who is cultivating immortality with a cuckold, but this is the first time I see it [laughing]

The two reasons for giving five stars are that the author's writing style is very delicate and accurate. Of course, for a single article, if I talk about the plot, I can only say that I feel sorry for the author. After all, it is impossible to imagine such a plot with a broken heart just by relying on one's imagination. I must have experienced it personally, and I feel sorry for the author again.

The front 🐢 is indeed very poisonous, you can just cross it quickly. Sometimes I don't agree with the thinking of pig's feet in the early and mid-term. But the writing is getting better and better, especially the peach plot at the end, the romantic description is really good. Hope to give Taozi a good ending. But in the early stage, Zhao Yanran really didn't want to see it again. No matter what the difficulties, seeing the male protagonist shouting Yanran, the real green-haired male protagonist's scalp went numb. I just want to see Sword Master Qin and 🍑

I watched it for fun, but then I calmed down and read it and found that the story is quite interesting, at least it is unique on the Tomato platform. The author must have worked hard on the outline, taking care of each other before and after, there are many foreshadowings, and the writing style is not like that of a new writer. The character creation is very good, and somehow it always feels like Jin Yong's martial arts, entangled with the confidante, and the chaos in the Shura field. It's just that the perspective feels too omniscient. It's too painful to know that their various vests are messing with each other, but they can't directly reveal each other's identities. And I'm still worried about how the protagonist will end up in the Shura field. At present, it seems that the heroines have very distinct portrayals, and there are still many hidden lines that have not yet been revealed. Can you give me an explosive plot?

My personal opinion is that this book is a new book among Tomatoes. The author has good writing skills. Many of the early settings will dissuade many people, such as cuckolds. The female protagonists are not perfect in all aspects of the normal immortal novels. Some are forced to sell, and some have multiple marriages. This may also dissuade many people. However, if you don't want to just read cool articles and are willing to think about the author's writing logic, you will find that these 'toxic' plots can actually be justified later on. Finally, the details about the female protagonist going up to the mountain to have sex with the male protagonist have not been revealed (as of now), but the male protagonist was indeed cheated. This fact is here. I hope the author will pay attention to this point and not get back together inexplicably when the time comes. If you really want the male protagonist to forgive, it is okay, but at least write the ex-wife into the past, otherwise it will really become Gui Nanwen [angry] (Only represents personal opinion) Give five stars for motivation

I didn't expect this book to have such a low rating. It's a typical low-end, high-end approach. The first ten chapters are a bit toxic. Some people gave a one-star negative review after reading it for less than half an hour. It is really the greatest injustice to this book. You must know that among the three people, one is a woman disguised as a man, and one is a man. One can be a man or a woman, and one can change from a man to a woman. This is not the kind of Liu Beiwen you understand. The author starts with 8,000 words per chapter, and the big chapter has 15,000 words. One chapter has more words than other people write in 6 chapters. After 30 chapters, the author writes more and more smoothly, and the more he writes, the better he is. Cultivation In the text, this book is the only one that has not lost its fighting power. Unlike other books, the protagonist's aura lasts for seconds, and he is still invincible, killing people across realms, and so on. This book is real, step by step, allowing us to witness the protagonist's process from scratch, from childhood to adulthood, and It has a sense of immersion. I read it for 7 days, all night long every day. I was too lazy to stop and scratched my head. This book has a rating of at least 9.5 Or above. The author writes about the affairs between men and women, which is an introductory three points. The attitude of the little girl is especially superb. This book is really well written. It's simply not enough. You can look at how many words there are in a chapter. Comparing it with other books, the author really writes one chapter a day, and he writes a lot. The writing in the later part is really good, the world view is very big, and the plot is very full. Even if it is a bit poisonous in the early stage, it is just to attract people. Later, it can be said to be a tomato cultivating fairy head, and the writing is good. Great story.

This novel is indeed interesting to read. Although Zhao Yanran was indeed disgusted by the first few hundred chapters, one of the three yellow hairs in the back is a girl, and the other one was resurrected and became the protagonist that the woman fell in love with. It is simply mind-blowing and explosive [please read carefully]. Although I always feel that the routine seems to be similar to the divorce breakup flow of Dou Po Cang Qiong, but it is a bit more disgusting. But as long as you read the back part, it's a good read.

It's quite imaginative, breathing 3,000 feet underground. Survive in adversity, seek immortality, do not admire high-ranking people, and have a bit of ambition to become a successful person. It's just that the romance with Shen Hongmei after the destruction of Qingmumen was a bit long.

I came here because of the reputation, and the review is that it is good-looking. The most important thing about a novel to me is the plot. This book is ready to be released in Novice Village. The overall narrative is smooth and the plot is reasonable. In addition to some inconsistencies, such as the description of the realm when you first reached the third floor, there is also the conversion of high-grade spiritual stones for the first time. Every character is flesh-and-blood to me. As of now, there is basically no leveling up to defeat monsters, or even just a little Qi-training guy. But it's enough to see. I think the plot is very interesting, so I'm giving it a small reward. I hope the author will work harder and update more. I personally don't like reading books, but I like this one very much. I believe more people will come to see it in the future

It's really well written. If I hadn't suddenly wondered what the cuckold novel was about, I would have missed a good book😭. I started reading it directly from about the 150th chapter in the middle, and I was about to reach the climax😋. It felt so good to read it directly. It was indeed very toxic in the early stage. I smelled the bed where my ex-wife had done sex with others, and it was my own bed, and I even made my bed collapse. I really didn't expect that. I haven't finished reading the first part yet, but after reading the first dozens of chapters, I can read it directly from chapter 150. Almost all the characters appear in the front, and a new map will be used later. Characters I don't know will basically not appear. In the early stage, the male protagonist looks ordinary, but later he practices some skills and turns into a humanoid succubus🤓. He can only wear a mask to walk around the world😡. It's really good to read. The author writes almost 20,000 words every day. The last few chapters are pretty good, look how long it took me to read [Thinking]

Looking at the length, let me talk about my psychological feelings. When I first saw the title of the book, I was actually very disgusted and felt disgusting. As expected, the first 30 chapters really disgusted me. I read the first chapters with a completely curious mentality. However, the subsequent cultivation process and some worldview settings are really interesting. The author's writing skills are full of power, the narrative style is simple and refined, and the images of many characters are very three-dimensional. In short, if you can survive the tormenting period in the beginning, then this is really a masterpiece of immortality. As an aside, while I was waiting for the update, I also reviewed the previous poisonous points and found that some of the female characters involved with the protagonist were mutilated (loss of chastity). I don't know if this is the author's bad taste or a metaphor for certain phenomena in reality. In short, readers with virgin complexes should read with caution.

The author's writing is so good. I thought it was a strange novel, but I couldn't stop reading it. Most of the so-called poisonous points have been explained later. The plot, rhythm and emotions are all well written, and the female characters who appear have their own strengths. I didn't realize it when I first read it, but later I realized that there were so many words in each chapter, but it was still not enough to read.

The characters created by the author are really special. Zhao Yanran's portrayal is not just a villain. I see a character with complex emotions and contradictions. It is the most special image in the novel I have read. The characters of Ouyang Hua, the leader of the Qingmu Sect, and the ancestor of the Qingmu Sect are very good. Weiyang's design is also unique. The protagonist will continue to change with the advancement of the plot from a stupid young man to a thoughtful one. It really has a sense of story, the world view is very grand, and the settings are detailed. In short, it is really good-looking. To be honest, I just watched it out of curiosity in the early stage and didn't read it carefully, but the subsequent plot really attracted me deeply and I couldn't sleep at night while watching it. The author will update it quickly. I really want to read the rest of the plot, but it's too short and I can't bear to read it. After seeing this point in time, I was about to go to sleep, but when I lay down, my thoughts were wandering back and forth, thinking about the plot. I am very grateful to the author for bringing a little bit of special fun to my boring life.

After reading so many novels, this is my first time to write a book review. The main reason is that I feel that people have too deep misunderstandings about this book. I feel that some people only read the first part and then left with a negative review. This is really a flaw for the diligent author. I really want to fight for the author. This book is among the novels about cultivating immortals. It is currently the best book I have read on Tomato (I like it very much). The reasons why I say this are as follows: first, the world depicted in the novel is very grand and wonderful. As the plot progresses, you will slowly be amazed by the author's imagination; second, The author's description of the characters. Each character has a unique and distinctive personality, and the characters' emotions are rich and delicate. In my opinion, the protagonist's character is not as perfect as in other novels, and also has shortcomings such as selfishness. Of course, this is closely related to the protagonist's mental journey and environment, and it is logical. Yes, don't get too involved in the novel, just appreciate the ups and downs in the story from the perspective of a bystander; thirdly, there are almost no loopholes in the logic of the narrative of the story. The plots of the story are linked one by one, and the author will not spend a chapter to show the word count. This is the most comfortable place for me to read this book. It makes me feel that my energy will not be wasted on useless words. I spend most of my time listening to books. Listening to books will slow down my appreciation of books, so I can feel the author's serious attitude towards this work and the author's profound writing power between the lines. I can also feel the difference between this book and other books. The rating of this book is not so low at all. There are currently so many immortal novels written by Tomato, and most of them are just verbal novels without any new ideas or highlights. I saw that this book can be regarded as a gold rush. What particularly gratifies me is that the author still insists on writing 10,000 to 20,000 words per chapter in the face of such sluggish ratings. Who on Tomato can be like the author of this book? This shows how much effort the author has put into this work. Before reading this book, I was short of books, but I have a very good taste. I looked for many books to listen to, but found that there seemed to be no wonderful works in Tomato, until I saw this book by the author. [Inquiry] I was really curious when I read the introduction. I wanted to see what kind of mentality the author had to write such an introduction. As a result, as I read it, I found that this book was written like a work of art. From a distance, it looked like broken glass shards, but when I looked closer, I realized that it was scattered crystals. With the author's pen power, he could write a masterpiece of novels about cultivating immortality in Tomato. However, the competition among novels about cultivating immortals is too fierce. The author may want to use this method to stand out from the crowd. As a result, many netizens who did not have the patience to read more than two chapters gave it low ratings, which was counterproductive. This book is really a very beautiful book. I highly recommend everyone to read it. I can't help but remind you not to read too deeply. Use the perspective of a bystander to feel the various emotions in the book and discover the fun in the book. Read it. I believe you will not regret it. Just look at how long it took me to read it. I won't say much else, but I also want to say that the author is awesome.

It's a good book. I want to read it if I want to experience something different. It's very cool. Everyone comes to see it, everyone comes to see it, you can't just let me see it [face covering]. Anyway, it's worth watching. They say it will get better later on, but really, I was able to persuade 9.9% Of the time to quit, and I experienced an incompetent husband. All in all, it's great [face covering]

It looks good, and a green hat at the beginning can clear your name. Real. The author is very experienced in writing the emotional line, and the cultivation line is also wonderful. The world view is grand and filled with enough realistic details. The foreshadowing is detailed and frequent without being overwhelming.