Father and Daughter: 1975

It's nice to read, but I suggest the author write it in Mandarin, otherwise it will affect the reading [laughter]

It's great. There are few stories about women's rebirth in Hong Kong in the 1970s. There are few stories that are so honest. I've read one before where the heroine was reborn to marry an inspector. The name was not Hong Kong, and the plot was not Hong Kong. There was no Hong Kong flavor at all. It was no different from an ordinary rebirth. It made me very bored. In this article, the dialogue gives a more authentic Hong Kong flavor. Although I can't understand it, I can roughly guess what it means based on the context. In fact, the proportion of dialects can be slightly adjusted, or some descriptions of the 1970s can be added to add some environmental era characteristics to make it more immersive. I will continue to pay attention to see what happens next.

The writing is really good. Can you recommend it? Can the author write it in Mandarin? Although the novel is set in Hong Kong, we readers can't understand what it is saying.

Super pretty! I have read nearly a thousand Tomato novels on various themes, but this is the first one that made me want to review a book! Every character is so detailed and immersive that I feel like there is a father and daughter next to me who started a business empire in Hong Kong in the 1990s! Ultra-delicate and super-feeling, it is not a feeling brought about by external movements, but a feeling brought about by more delicate senses and psychology. There is a feeling of looking at the people next to you with calm eyes and yelling like a madman, calmly watching the ups and downs of the world, and feeling like you are outside of it but still in it. Very strange feeling

I don't think my grades are too high. One or two sentences in the local dialect are okay, and they are written in chapters and paragraphs. Are you reading a novel or learning a local dialect?

A novel written with care will be given one point if it only lasts a few minutes. How about giving a point to a novel that has only been read for a few minutes? Are you sure you're not a black man? In the early stage, because I wanted to restore the Hong Kong flavor, the dialogue was in Cantonese and the narration was in Mandarin. Many editors said they couldn't understand it and they have already modified it. Now there are comments saying that there is no Cantonese and no taste. It's really hard for me [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

I can't understand Cantonese, but I can still understand it even though I'm guessing. It's just tiring to read. It should be very enjoyable for people who understand Cantonese. The author didn't want to show it to people who don't understand Cantonese.

I think it's very interesting, but appropriate dialects can make reading more interesting. However, too many dialects really hinder my reading comprehension. I'm missing one star. I'll wait for an update. I beg the author to use less dialect. [Sending my heart]

I really like the story content and character settings, although I can't understand the professional parts at all. Judging from the daily word count and the main text, the author is both hard-working and lackluster, and you can see that he has put his heart into it. Of course, there are some minor problems with the writing, but the flaws are outweighed. I hope there will be less expressions like "I didn't realize... Awe" and "The era/foundation... Started from now on" in the future.

This is the first Cantonese novel I read, and all I can think about is TVB dubbing. There are probably a lot of mistakes in the pronunciation, but that's not the point. The point is that the writing of this book is so amazing! I've read novels and learned Cantonese grammar. I'm multi-talented, so what else do I need for a bicycle? Show them all to me!

After reading it, the author's stall is huge and I look forward to cooperating with the mainland. Being able to see my father grow up, I no longer feel that the tie is suffocating, and I use a purple clay pot to make tea. As for my daughter, she has always been a master in strategizing, and she understands technology and a little bit of marketing. The Cantonese spoken by everyone has not yet been revised by the author, so some of them are indeed incomprehensible and can only be guessed, but the non-dialogue is not Cantonese, so it is a bit fragmented to see it this way. Finally, this is not a common Tomato cool article, which is interspersed with psychological descriptions, but is it difficult to write? For example, the father looked at his daughter with awe in his eyes. This description must have appeared at least five times, so it was a bit annoying for the reader. I wish the author will write more smoothly!

I was a little tired after reading Chapter 30, because the long paragraphs in Cantonese affected my reading. Later, the author deliberately avoided such problems and felt much better. It feels like a deus ex machina. Suddenly he took out a black technology that was never mentioned before and told everyone about it. Ok, problem solved! My father and his subordinates have too strong tool attributes. There are high-tech weapons and systems that can be given to them in advance to learn how to use. Hunting a knight, his daughter digs out black technology, his father and his men... Shocked, shocked, shocked.

It's really beautiful. The author should update it soon! It's the kind of business war I want to see. Although the author's modification of the characters is a bit too typical, and every important character has a standard description of emotions, it's very interesting. It is said on the Internet that real business wars are often simple and unexpected, like watering down a money tree, but this is a fast-paced, secretly bloody business war. The heroine and her father work well together. One solves technical and future development problems, and the other uses his own experience in the world to execute. And the logic is perfect, not all one person works alone, there is cooperation and investment, in short, I feel very happy😊, but there are too few, write quickly!

It's tied in one breath. It's very exciting so far, the plot is compact, the father-daughter characters complement each other well, the heroine's system is helpful but not too much, and it still relies on people to develop, so it is not so abrupt. I hope the plot doesn't collapse later. Why is such a good infrastructure article not popular? I really hope that the author is seen. Except that the title is in Cantonese, there is no reading difficulty in the article, and the subject matter is very novel. Both the business war and the technology war are completely incompatible with other similar articles on Tomato. The content is not inconsistent. It is really highly recommended. Moreover, the ICAC police station looks so Hong Kong-like. I hope that the author's articles will become popular, and Tomato's articles on Hong Kong development will definitely be excellent.

I don't know why the rating is so low, but I think it's really good. This book may not have those ordinary family stories and grudges, but only some international imagination and technological things. I think it looks great. It is a real heroine story, including when the author said that marriage is just a grain of sand in life at the end, I felt great.

~There are so many Cantonese words that I can't help but guess~But it's well written.

I like it very much. I recently used Duolingo to learn Cantonese and I only learned it for a few days. I just happened to come across this novel and I can basically understand it. I find it quite interesting. Later, it was written in vernacular, and the reading speed became faster.

7.1 Points... I can't bear to give a low score. It's a good-looking entrepreneurial article... But there are too many adjectives... Every time something happens, I have to say a bunch of [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] as prefixes, especially for mental activities and current status... Why don't you just click on it?

It's good to watch. I like it as a Cantonese. Don't stop updating it. If you do, I'll curse you.

I don't think there's a lot of Cantonese. Real Cantonese conversations are definitely not like this. There will be many words that are not used in Mandarin, as well as many modal particles. The most common thing here is "Lao Dou". Even saying "What the hell" is not actually Cantonese. In Cantonese, one would definitely say "". I wonder what are the slang words that some readers say have large sections?

At the end of the day, I felt like I was rushing to work. When I encountered technological bottlenecks in research and development, I didn't care about anything and went straight to the solution. Overall, it's okay. If you can speak Cantonese, you may have a better reading experience when reading this novel.

Jiang Xiaoduo is a god, a god of war who makes the era take off. She takes her retired underworld boss Jiang Shengxiong to conquer the world, change the world, and build Made in China into a global brand. Top quality [Like] [Like] Although it is exaggerated, I think it is very enjoyable [laugh] [laugh]

This vernacular article (Cantonese) written by the author is beautiful, funny and true. I hope the author will not collapse. I also hope that the APP can add Cantonese audio books as soon as possible [full] [full] [full] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

It's very interesting, the story line is complete, the characters are not broken, and the character is not sloppy. Admiration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Okay, it used to be Cantonese slang, but now it seems to have changed back. 1. The heroine's business empire is more developed than Wei Xin's, in electronic technology, film and television circles, industrial circles, and financial circles. 2. Except for the description of people who have just started selling bb machines and there is a market for them, there are few other participants. Most of them are descriptions of the heroine and the struggle between the young and Dangerous boys in Hong Kong, Hong Kong business, and British business. 3. No cp I hope there will be articles in the future that describe business development while also benefiting the people.

The consequence of not being able to control reading serialized articles is to find a shitty yellow reminder button when you look up [crying]

It's good to read, but there are a lot of dialogues at the front that you can't understand and you have to guess, which makes your head look bigger. Please keep up the good work, the author [crying with laughter]

So far it looks good

If it were written in Mandarin, this article would have a wider audience. I really can't understand the large Cantonese text.

Except that some dialects are incomprehensible, the plot is very attractive. Can the author publish a booklet that corresponds to dialects?