The Pinnacle of the World: The Dark-Dark Fruit from the Start

It's okay, unlike your last book, I ran away after reading 5 chapters. Stop, stop, stop writing a book if you don't have inspiration. It took 4 chapters to recruit Lafitte! And how long has it been since you read One Piece anime and manga? Why are there other words like "Don't want me to truly surrender"? It would be too embarrassing to say it directly. Is it so awkward to recruit people in the pirate world?

It's nice, but the author tries to use less "time rushes". Every time I see it, I think it's been a few years, but it turns out it's only been a few days [face covering]. You can write a few days later, a week later 🍉

The setting is quite good, the plot is reasonable, and there are no too many poisonous points for the time being. I hope to see the protagonist say to Blackbeard from the top: "Dizi, you can't control this earthquake fruit, let me do it" 😂

First of all, the author's attitude is very good and his writing style is also good. Secondly, harem stories contain daily life. Finally, the author's design of self-building power and revenge plan is very naive, but it is a cool article, and it is my problem to read it with my brain.

Judging from the many One Piece fanfics I have read (regardless of platform), this author's understanding of the original work is unparalleled by other authors. He is very loyal to the original work, does not make any assumptions, and also points out the mistakes that most fan works make. But it is also because the author respects the original work, so he has to make up for Oda in many places, otherwise it will appear too illogical and the character will appear stupid. There is no way, this is the fault of the original work Oda, after all, the characters in the original work are quite stupid, per capita prenatal education. Among the better pirate writers in Tomato, Daye Huo also respects the original work relatively well. However, Daye Huo's book contains reasonable speculations based on existing information and divergent thinking. Although it is often backstabbed, to be honest, as long as it is written early, most people should be able to accept it. And one thing about the pirate characters he wrote respects the original works - they are very stupid. Just because the original characters are idiots, they can write pure and refreshing articles without violating the rules. This may be the reason why Dayehuo's books are relatively popular (after all, this platform likes pure and refreshing chapters, Chapter 3 of the Lieutenant General, Chapter 10 of the Imperial Deputy, Chapter 30 of the Four Emperors, and Chapter 50 of Gan Yimu, which does not require much strict logic) In summary, this book is considered the best among Pirates fandoms. Unfortunately, it didn't become popular and the author was forced to speed up the completion process.

Very good, you can read it with your brain. Although the development in the front is relatively slow, it is not a story about abuse of the main character. At this time (volume two), the original heroine is still in the process of being (developed). She is temporarily non-toxic and collects quality (female). As for the male crew members, ignore them. The heroine is like a passerby with them, just a thug and a subordinate. Finished spreading flowers!

So far, the plot development is pretty good. Just a suggestion, the side effect of the Dark Fruit is that you need to endure double the pain, so can the second fruit not be the Gravity Fruit? The most suitable one for the protagonist should be the Phantom Beast. Although the protagonist's body is already very strong, these things are more terrifying when they are superimposed. Even if it's not a fantasy beast, it must be the most advanced superhuman type, such as the Fruit of Time, an almost unsolvable rule-based ability

The setting is good and the plot is okay. A little bit of poison is acceptable. After all, it is a personal poison and has nothing to do with the setting or plot. Here's a suggestion: Just use AI appropriately, don't be greedy.

It's okay, it's not brainless. Without the passion, it's hard to express emotions when there are too many people. In fact, the pirate world does not need too many manpower. Just those forces, if they control the underground leaders, they will have money and information.

It's okay, a harem story, the heroine Quan Jie QC, the early stage of recruiting young girls, there are more in the second chapter, and I've eaten 6 so far. It's okay. The book sets the fight to become stronger, resulting in injuries or even serious injuries every time. It's a bit abusive to the main story, and it also suppresses the fighting ability. Sometimes it is suppressed and sometimes it is not suppressed.