Patient: Gin

It's really very beautiful. It's the first bite of fine chaff I've eaten among so many tomatoes (maybe because I'm picky in reading articles). The emotional line is also very delicious. I will eat it for a lifetime. I hope the teacher can keep writing it. I think the emotional scene is not that abrupt. When they first met, Ritsu had a slight flutter for Gin. In the subsequent interactions, Gin gradually handed over his trust to Ritsu, and the relationship between the two was slowly getting closer. This can also be seen from their habits and relaxation in getting along. Moreover, the two people have similar personalities, both are very efficient and rational. It is normal and easy for two people of the same frequency to get close, maybe because The article is relatively fast-paced, and neither of them often express their emotions clearly, so the emotional line seems rather abrupt, but if you look closely, the relationship between the two develops gradually, and it is natural for Gin to change his possessiveness towards Ritsu from possession of items to possessiveness of people (with the addition of protectiveness). In short, I personally think the emotional line is very good, and I don't object if you have your own opinions, and the writing is really good [blowing kiss]

The emotional and plot lines are okay, and the details are rigorous, but the traces of AI polishing are a bit heavy. Gin lifted Conan's vest very early and treated him as a ready-made experimental subject, but he was a relief article covered in black square skin. I thought that saving Jingguang would keep him out of the plot, such as sending him abroad, but he got involved again when he couldn't get along with the protagonist. I don't quite understand what to do next. Is it necessary to rely on Ling Jing's approach to cooperate with the police to bring down the organization, and then the protagonist and Qin get rid of this mess and go it alone? Overall, I can still watch it. CP is my favorite flavor.

My God, this book is so logical that it makes people go numb. It is very beautiful. I also admire it very much. Like the protagonist, he is very rational. The author's mind is like a bottomless pit. He has come up with many things. How should I put it? I feel that after reading this book, I should understand it. Human nature should be so to speak. In short, this novel is really good to read. I sincerely recommend it to everyone. It is very, very good to read. I have read so many novels. This is the first time for me. This is my first time commenting on a novel with so many words. I hope everyone can support the author.

Emmm The writing is very good and the setting is also very good. But... Is there any trace of AI polishing [Thinking][Thinking] Just a guess, don't comment if you don't like it

I really like this kind of clear and step-by-step description!! For a rational person, it is not too comfortable to read!!! And the doctor and Qin, the same kind of people cautiously and slowly approach, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Check it out!!! [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] This intellectual love makes me want to stop [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

The writing is very good, and the characterization of the protagonist is also great, but it's a pity that it's a relief article covered in black text (sigh)

Nice looking. Gin is my favorite in Conan.

What does slow water mean? It's like a long stream of water, my God! ! ! Gin really kills me! ! ! ! A person who is rational and almost emotionless is cold and cold as a killer. Oh my gosh, it's so sweet. , What is meant by a long stream of water? This is called a long stream of thin water. , And the back part is really super sweet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The author also writes very, very well, and makes each character very three-dimensional! ! ! It's just that not many people saw it! If you are a fan of Qin Jiuwen, you can read this book. It's really super, super, super good-looking, and it's also sweet! ! ! That clumsy tenderness, so sweet, so sweet, so sweet! ! ! ! ! ! ! Remember to read my book review next time~~~~~~~~~~ I care about all those who read Gin stories. The real protagonist and Gin are really sweet to me. In the early stage, it was a long and steady flow, and there wasn't that much emotion, but there were still some kisses. Then, oh my god, it's so sweet! ! ! ! So sweet! ! ! So sweet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Believe me, this book is really super sweet and beautiful. Every detail of the interaction, oh my god, there are delicious candies~~~~~~~~~~~~ It really blew me away, they really hit each other hard. Okay, remember to read my book review next time~~~~~~

Laws, actually, you have never heard my voice towards you, because love is silent🥺Ross, you know, you have a remote valley, and I also have a remote valley, we are destined to be together🥺[][][] (It's been a long time since I've seen such good writing!!! The ambiguous love makes my blood boil with excitement, and I'm so excited to eat [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]) Is it high-end, Rouse?

It's good-looking and super cool, but the writing style isn't particularly noob. I really recommend everyone to watch it. It's not only fun but also fun. The protagonist is also very intelligent, the writing is relatively fluent, and there are no strange misunderstandings.

How should I put it? This book gives people a very dissociated feeling, but it does not take the perspective of the male protagonist like other novels. The third perspective of this book is more important. The feeling of reading other people's stories is obvious, and the article describes the male protagonist's thoughts or state too much and repetitively? The first few chapters are okay, but after reading it, it will feel very repetitive and boring. Overall, it is good, and the emotional line is quite natural. I can try to write it more immersively (only personal opinion)

It feels pretty good-looking! ! But why are all the comments talking about AI polishing? ! I think the logic is quite smooth, it's like a sweet story, and the emotional lines are well written! I can't see any traces of AI, I hope the author can work harder! Super pretty! ! ! ! ! This book is really beautiful, it's the kind of long-lasting emotion! I think their emotional progression is very beautiful. But the score is too low! Those who gave it a low score had watched more than half an hour. Looking at my reading time, this book is really good! ! Come on! ! ! Looking forward to the next development! !

It's not a daily update... At this time, a reader was slightly broken... Okay, serious review. This article is written around the protagonist and Gin, of course, mainly around the protagonist. Others, whether it is Conan, the organization, or the police academy, did not describe too much. It was the protagonist's perspective, the protagonist's experience, and the protagonist's life. I was watching his daily life. This feeling is rare. Other fanfics are from God's perspective, and you can see everyone's actions and psychological activities; but this book is from the audience's perspective, with the camera following the protagonist and rarely showing other people's psychological activities. The whole article is plain and simple, warm and everyday. It is recommended that the author let the young couple sprinkle more sugar and interact more. The protagonist and Gin can live a happy life than anything else! [Praise]

Emma is really good-looking. I really like the dual male protagonists in this setting. I love it so much.

The emotional line is relatively light, and the relationship between two people warms up more slowly. It is a type of article that I like very much ૮₍♡♡₎ა. The details are very good and there is no special content. It is the kind of article that uses the emotional line to assist the career line. The writing is very good (๑⃙⃘´༥`๑⃙⃘) 𐂐 thin rice

When I read the introduction, I thought it was pure black, but then I saw redemption.

Great writing. The pace is fast and clear. The doctor's calm analysis really shocked me.

Wocwoc I read a lot of gin books and felt OOC, but this one felt right! ! The author is really good at writing! The gin tastes really good! ! ! !

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I'm really looking forward to everyone's reaction after their relationship is revealed [laughing] [laughing]

It's really beautiful. I really liked the atmosphere in the early stage when they were not familiar with each other, as well as the character and mental state of the protagonist. Later, when I got to know them well, the atmosphere of their daily life was really great! ! And the part where we discuss time is really funny, hahaha, but I really want to see Ritsu lose his horse in front of both parties! ! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Just can it be updated daily? ! ! !

Let me ask if the setting is black or red, which side will win? Will the police academy team come to the rescue?

It's so exciting, author, don't be tired and don't take a break [Love]

It's really beautiful and the emotional line is really delicate. I don't know what the ending is? If it were be, I actually kind of want to watch a double death kind of thing

It's delicious. This article is actually a sweet article. It has been polished by AI, but the daily life is very beautiful and suitable for recharging yourself. It will be stiff in the early stage, but it will be better in the later stage. I hope everyone can read more [Sending Hearts]

It's good to read, but after reading more than 40 chapters, I found that the protagonist doesn't seem to have a clear stance. Call him black, and he kicked the pot~ But call him popular, and he concealed a lot of things. It gave me the feeling that the protagonist's stance is not clear [crying] Maybe it's because I haven't read enough~

The first chapter was all good, but the reading experience after that was very painful, because each update was so many days apart, which made me feel very unfamiliar when I read the latest chapter, and I almost forgot the content of the previous article...

After thinking about it, I will give it five stars. Compared with other fanfics, it can be said to be quite good. There are no very obtrusive golden fingers, whirring systems, etc. It is very personal. The tension of being in the eye of the storm is well grasped. But one thing that made me a little tired of reading is that in order to create the atmosphere mentioned above, the teacher always uses words such as calmness and control. Frequently, people who read it are a little tired. Everything else is good.

A very good fanfic, the characters are not OOC, the writing is very good, and the plot is also very good. The relationship between the protagonist and Gin is like a long stream of water, reasonable and warm. Both of them are calm and self-possessed, maybe a little bit crazy. I feel that the two of them are really busy at work [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] I want to see more sweet interactions between the two [sending my heart] [please give me more updates] Big boost to the author 💪

It's quite okay if you ignore the AI ​​component. I like the setting very much. It's because the AI's narrative feels too formatted. I like the character design and emotional lines, and the plot of discovering the God of Death is also very novel.

It looks great, but I have a question: who is left and who is right?