Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Refining Weapons in Shantytowns

I feel like the writing is very good. My humble opinion: It would be better if it were not a harem novel, as it would be very possible to adapt it into a manga, animated cartoon or even anime. Four stars because I don't like harem stories. Don't criticize the author! Seeing this, the next woman is Su Xiaotang, the next one is the senior sister, the next one... The next one... The next one........., A proper harem story. Give up, give up. If you don't like the harem, don't enter.

It is a grassroots counterattack type, and the golden finger is not exaggerated; the characterization is relatively successful, at least after reading it, you can clearly remember every character who has a role; the plot is also polished in detail, and the author should intend to write a long novel. Although the protagonist's realm grows slowly, it is more real, and the slow realm does not mean the plot is slow. The plot arrangement is reasonable and reflects that each realm has things to do and encounters in that realm. If this book continues to be updated, it will definitely reach around 9.0

I have to be fair, I don't think the issue of suppressing combat power is relevant. This issue is consistent with resource allocation. The content is very clear. The spiritual energy in the sect is condensed, so the speed will be fast. A medium-grade spiritual stone for you in the past three or four days is nothing. Moreover, the journey of cultivation itself is time. Do you think that it takes years and months to build muscles? Many books are quick because they are written in one stroke, but this book is much more detailed. A lot of things happened in a few months. This is a very interesting book. The author writes with great care, I can say that this is another great novel! @

A mediocre weapon refiner struggles to survive at the bottom. There are no flaws, the plot is smooth, and the characters are vivid and flesh-and-blood. Worth a look!

It looks good. The life of a little weapon refiner was difficult at the beginning, but he struggled through it. He learned step by step, made progress step by step, and finally stabilized his income. It's good to watch. Keep reading.

The writing and plot are all top-notch, and it's a good addition to my bookshelf. 4 Stars is already the highest, and I never give it full stars.

It looks like a masterpiece. Although the system settings are a bit old-fashioned, the intensity is well controlled. The development speed is just right, the details are appropriate, the plot is compact, and there are appropriate reversals. The world view and other settings are gradually improved and reasonable, and the handling of interpersonal emotions is currently very good. I would call it the best fantasy work in recent times.

The plot is okay, suitable for my own reading and perception!

The protagonist is flesh and blood, not just liver for liver's sake. Survival is mixed with fun. The book is not bad. To nourish

Highly recommended to everyone, a great book.

It's good to have motivation to keep reading!

The writing is very careful, appropriate, and emotionally delicate. It's good. You must read it. Come on!

I like this kind of mortal-style novel, which is delicate and contains fierce conflicts. I highly recommend it to book friends.

The writing is top-notch, the climax comes one after another and I can't stop at all. It's just that 6.7 Wives feels a bit too much.

Overall very good The author is a bit immature

The rhythm is very good. Although there are cheats, the upgrade time is still good!

Apart from the fact that I am not a mortal cultivating immortality, I feel pretty good if I have meat to eat.

I'm still watching it, it's worth recommending

The storyline is thrilling with ups and downs

The plot is good, it's my favorite type, and the author will keep up the good work.

It's beautiful, I've seen the hardship, I've seen the sadness, I've seen that glimmer of hope, come on [like][like][like]

Cultivating immortality while struggling for survival, there is no such thing as mindless invincibility, great book!

Very good, the writing is average, the story is reasonable, and the characters are templated

I like it very much. The golden finger is not big. It describes the hardships of practicing as a casual cultivator.

.. The structure is pretty good, let's see how the story develops.

Read it in your spare time, it's a decent novel!

It's really well written 👍 I like this style very much

It's a good book, you can read it

The plot is exciting, including cultivating immortals, machinations, and the tortuous reality of the environment of cultivating immortals. I just didn't expect it to get such a low score. Is it because of the erotic description?

I like this subject matter, the writing and storyline are also good