Make a Wish for the World, the Tattered Kitten Mends It

It's very beautiful, and it's my favorite style, but the author needs to pay more attention. This book is actually quite sharp, and it's easy to touch sensitive points and remove it from the shelves. Sometimes you have to think carefully about it, but this book really poked me. Whether it's the wish setting or the cruel reality ending, I was very touched.

It's a very good villain novel at the moment. Don't worry about the three-dimensional issue. The content is the same as that of a typical monster creation novel. The protagonist doesn't have a high sense of existence, but that's good. In previous monster creation novels, the protagonists all appeared in person. Basically, they stayed elegant and acted as the Riddler before becoming a god. Later, he became the mastermind behind the scenes. It was okay at first, but later on, it was weird. The protagonist of this book came out and asked if he wanted to make a wish to me. He would not care about them after that. It didn't matter what happened after that. There was an inexplicable feeling of fear. The author just kept it when he wrote it, so as not to be blocked by then.

Very good. Finally, he is not the owner of a coffee shop or teahouse, nor is he a man or a boy who fell to the ground in an alley on a rainy day at the beginning. This protagonist is the real behind-the-scenes person. He has no personal preferences and everything is left to chance [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully] Um, what the hell is Qin Wu? It's a big failure. The official just recruited someone and they were killed without even a little confrontation.

Very cool^ω^ Come on, author! The characters in it are also very well done, highly recommended! Especially after knowing that all those who make a wish are destined to perish (๑> <๑)

It's good-looking, and the characters who are approached by the protagonist are all very miserable. The world background is dark. Although it seems that they have been given extraordinary and costly abilities, which have changed the current situation, they have stepped into a darker abyss. I always feel that the protagonist can't go back home, and even if he can go back, it won't be his original home.

The writing is very good. It is the best book about the magic circle setting that I have read so far. Although the protagonist's rescue is a little slow, a good setting needs to be conceived. I still hope that the author can slowly polish the setting. However, there is no need to write too many linkages of abilities. After all, wishes are still wishes of desperation. Can the author consider what I'm thinking about? Alienation In the first stage, simply alienate items and let the alienated items fight for them. Of course, at the beginning, we should start with tiny human body tissues such as broken hair, dander, etc. In the second stage, just mutate some shaped objects, such as trees, houses, land, cars, and of course high-rise buildings. Stage 3 is the final stage of my conception. Through continuous use of alienation, oneself has been completely alienated. Every cell in the body has been alienated. Every cell has the ability to alienate, and can continue to spread the alienation. And because the cells have been alienated, they are no longer bound to the body. As long as there is one cell left, the alienation can continue to spread and rebuild the body. This alienation can be specifically shown as changing the shape and state of objects, turning animals into still life, and still life into animals. Of course, if you can't keep up with the version, you can also add some concepts, such as alienated cognition, alienated reality, alienated time, alienated space, and even alienated world. I don't know if this can be the author's inspiration. It would be great if it can be chosen. I hope it can be chosen. Oh my god.

The beginning is good, the plot is realistic, and the characters are well developed (first 50 chapters) It was very messy at the end. Not only was the plot bland and boring, but as the characters increased, it started to look more like a facial expression. In the end, it was obvious that the data was no longer good, so I cut it [face covering]

It's a pretty good behind-the-scenes boss story. At least it doesn't involve romance. He's not a moral role model, but the setting makes the structure of the novel relatively simple. It would be boring to just write one kind of plot. After all, it is a novel, and you have to consider the fun. Of course, if it is the kind of story that generates electricity for love, then I didn't say that.

Personally, I rarely comment on novels, but this novel made me angry. Advantages: The writing is smooth and the plot is compact, very magical girl Disadvantages: Too Magic Circle, too depressing. Even Magic Circle can sometimes soothe the mood. The author is like blowing up a balloon without letting him pop or deflating. There is no highlight of humanity (it is very easy to make him pop. In such a big world, I don't believe there are no people who despair of the human species. As long as one wishes to destroy the whole world, all mankind will be better) A person may have a wish with negative emotions, but among the eight billion people, none of them wish to be a righteous partner of the Light Armor Warrior Kamen Rider. This world is unreasonable, capital (exploitative), negative, and too realistic. And I feel that the protagonist's final ending may be like Allen's As long as someone tries hard and then fails, it's fine. I have never seen anyone try hard to save this shabby world. Even Qin Wuwei feels that he wants to be like Ye Shenyue. The combat power is extremely unbalanced and there is no competitive battle. At the beginning, he wanted to see if there is a witch. There are so many pictures. There is no witch appearing. I have been watching some people suffer various blows, then make wishes, and then take revenge on society. This pattern has always been there. The author has three modes of making wishes. The mode of not wishing others to suffer, or the mode of helping others, gaining strength, and then taking revenge. The wishes made are not abstract enough, not fantasy enough, and not weird enough.

In this world where luxury covers up ugliness, light hides darkness, and people think their daily lives are filled with injustice, your novel is so unique. It satirizes the world in a way that is not unjust, but unfulfilled. Excellent, but you can be born out of Puella Magi Madoka Magica, and there is no need to become someone else's shadow fan.

The writing is really beautiful, believe me! ! ! I read 40 chapters in one go, it was really good! ! ! ! There is no frustrating plot, the writing is also very good, and the author is really good at writing.

It's a pretty good plot and it's written very smoothly. If the protagonist is someone behind the scenes, it depends on how the supporting characters write it. There are too many desperate people. I don't know if the author can write their endings perfectly. Anyway, I felt very comfortable watching it. I'll keep reading and cherish it. I'm afraid it will be taken off the shelves someday, because I understand everything in it [laughing]

This book is very interesting, and the subject matter is quite novel. The front is nice, but the back is a bit bland and boring. I hope the author can create a more crazy character. Well, let this character cause some destruction and make the overall plot more ups and downs, otherwise it will feel a bit boring. In fact, Lin Mo's character in the early stage was a bit fun-loving. But in the later period, he surrendered to Qin Wuwei, and the plot became dull. This Qin Wuwei's ability is a bit strong. Perhaps because he is the president, he is more stable in his work and will not show up easily. He just works behind the scenes. His wish is that "no child in this world will die due to a desperate fate", so he hopes that someone in the future will wish to "let everyone in this world be as desperate as him". Let them fight, this kind of plot, well, it will be more interesting. This person can also be a fun person. Also, the presence of the protagonist in the later stages is a bit low. It feels like this protagonist exists purely to be a tool and to make wishes. I hope the author can increase the presence of the protagonist a little more. Also, it's already chapter 76. Except for Li Qian, no one's soul has been exhausted. I hope the author can write it quickly so that someone's soul is exhausted and they end up fighting. Finally, I sincerely hope that the author can make this book better and better. (This is purely my personal opinion, please don't criticize me. If you don't like it, just ignore this comment)

Newcomers also have the advantage of being a newbie. The subject matter is very new, so if you get full bonuses, as long as you maintain this logic, you can guarantee that the novel will be a 9.8 Or above. There is currently no poison, not even a little bit.

The writing is very true, especially in the story where Fang Ci is divided between kindness and reality. In elementary school, we must protect hygiene and care for the environment. On my way home from elementary school, I picked up a 1 yuan mineral water bottle and was going to find a trash can to throw it away. Then someone saw me holding this empty bottle and asked me what I wanted to do? Just tell me to throw it away casually.

It's very beautiful. If the author writes all the subsequent content, the rating will definitely increase. However, in the later stages of writing, the characters and various plots are intertwined, which is too complicated. It is also understandable that the author can't write it in the end. I wish the author to work hard and write a better work [smile][smile][smile]

The writing style is also very good, and the characters are well drawn. It is a good article. The pace seems a little fast. I don't know how it will develop later, but the whole article is pretty good [blowing kiss][shy][shy]

Personally, I think this is well written. Don't bring in Kyubey. Although it is written according to Kyubey. Most of the stories are very sad and sad, and everyone has their own pain. Although the wish you make is the kind that will hurt you in the end. But it also gave hope and revenge. It felt very good in that environment and conditions. If I didn't make this wish, it would only be more painful and desolate. Most of what is written is about the pain, helplessness and desolation of the people at the bottom. Salvation is achieved through making a wish. What was written above is very good. A little bit in the middle. There was a bit of a rush at the end. Overall, it's well written. The rating is a bit low, but it looks great. Those with high scores are not as good at writing as this one.

It's beautiful, and the setting is eye-catching. Most of Tomato's behind-the-scenes articles feel the same, but I feel that this kind of subject matter will not last long. I hope to see the day when this book is finished [laughs]

This book is very good. I can say that justice is not served, but it depends on the protagonist. This kind of devil-like character gets justice. It is very well written, it is written completely on the mat, and it seems very real.

Very good book with a lot of reality Although it is filtered, it is indeed the idea of many people It's a pity that the proportion of people who pay the price is a little small. A group of characters with flesh and blood and deep meanings. Two of them were burned out and one of them killed each other. The death was a bit dull, but it was already very good. I heard that this kind of push should not be too much, and the ⭐ should not be rated too high, so it is four stars (actually it could have been five stars, but after reviewing it once, I am a bit worried) Although I feel that the prices inside are a bit different and a bit inconsistent. But everyone's story is pretty good Some people are smart, some are stupid, some are strong, and some are weak Still quite comprehensive It's a pity that it ends like this I hope that if I read the next book, I can read the recent news again and add it to the list. For example, the foursome of you and me, and then Xiaoyu and the others

See the latest, good grass. Nice behind-the-scenes article? (Forget it, although the officials are all aware of pig's feet, the text is all about superpowers), but what is different from other behind-the-scenes stories is that superpowers cost lives, and they are sent out after being used too much. The characters all have their own characteristics, but the one who makes people unhappy is the honest man, who is also a bad liar. I think he is quite strong, and he has the feeling of being easy to follow his words, but if someone believes him, he can't beat the honest man, and even if he can't beat him, he has to show up and get beaten. Looking at it this way, there are gaps between abilities. There is no specific level division, it is quite vague. The strongest one currently seems to be unable to face a nuclear bomb.

It's great to watch, the characters are well-developed, and the plot is great. The protagonist is a Kyubey-like being. Now that I see it, I want to say that everyone in it is great. This is true from the perspective of both the Avengers and the country. I think if reality becomes the same as in the work, we will also make their choices like the characters in the story. The cause and effect are clearly explained, and everyone has their own difficulties. Looking forward to the follow-up.

This subject matter is very novel, and the author writes it very well. There is no heroine and no bloody plot. It's just that it's so well written that it's easy to touch sensitive points and get blocked, so be careful. (Don't forget to add it to the bookshelf in advance, a reminder from those who have come here)

It's good to watch, I really like this kind of extraordinary creation, the main character does not intervene in the middle, it's so cool, the author is very good, but I feel that the author is a two-dimensional person, there are some elements in it [laughing]

Many of the settings in this book are very attractive to me. I would like to give you a five-star support. [Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart] In addition, can you give me a free-for-all among all the forces? Now there are only official and mutual aid associations. What about lone wolves and neutral third parties? Five stars, must be five stars

It's great, but I hope the tone still needs to be grasped. After all, people who think in black and white are naive, and reality and fantasy are not the same after all. I wish the author can write better [laughs] [sending heartfelt wishes]

I saw 48, it looks good, I love watching it, I sit and watch it, I lie down and watch it. The writing style in the first ten chapters may not be very good. By the way, I can mention a few things about the protagonist's original world, and the fact that his parents have not contacted the protagonist.

Beautiful, one of the few words I can think of, after reading this book on Tomato for so long. I finally found a book that fits my feelings. The protagonist is absolutely neutral and almost invisible. He doesn't interfere and doesn't care about letting things develop. It's definitely a good book.

Yes, the five-star praise is the salvation of the poor people at the bottom, self-salvation, at the cost of souls, revenge, asking the world for an answer, and creating the life you want. It has just been developed, and I look forward to the follow-up [Sending Hearts]