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The writing is quite good, but the minor point is that it is the same as what was written in the comment area. It feels like forming a team is not as good as building a behind-the-scenes force, similar to Team Rocket, which is not exposed to the official gaze. The purpose is to recover all the weird elves and can properly cooperate with the official. Then the protagonist finally conquers all the weirdness and ends the weird era. He still needs five-star support, but there are no other poisonous points. In fact, it is okay to write like the author. There is nothing serious about it at the moment. I feel that I can still read it. The author can just write the story he wants to express. The writing is also good, and it is very comfortable to watch. The character creation of Fa Xiao is very successful. This character is very likable. If the author is writing the article for data, you can try changing it now and see if you can change it. The protagonist can have two identities, light and dark. On the surface, he is an official T0-level foreign aid and cooperation partner, and secretly, he is the big boss behind the mysterious underground force. No matter what, I think the writing is quite good. As of now, there is no problem in writing four to five hundred chapters.

I have read Chapter 48 so far. Although the protagonist holds a level 70 Dragon King, the weirdness of the Poké Ball given out is locked with the protagonist by 60 points of favorability. It is because of the protagonist's words that he treats the Poké Ball holder as a half-master. However, I personally feel that the favorability lock of 60 is still a bit low. The Dragon King took 30 injury medicines from the protagonist before he returned to his peak. During the period, if it weren't for the protagonist's Poké Ball, it would still have to be suppressed under the Dragon Lock Well. The protagonist didn't call the Dragon King very frequently to come out to fight, and even replaced it with a luxurious ball with a better internal environment (which has a bonus to the speed of the Dragon King transforming into a dragon). Maybe I am the kind of person who has a strong need for control, and I feel that the Dragon King is really given too much face by the protagonist. The protagonist should not use the elf ball that locks 60 favorability to catch it, but should use the paru ball that locks 100% loyalty and can be squeezed to the extreme without resistance. In addition, the first protagonist skill assigned by the author is strange power. In fact, I personally feel that the skills used by the protagonist in the early stage should be more training-oriented + corresponding to basic skills. For example, in terms of soul, [Meditation] and then [Psychic Power] can help the protagonist improve his mental defense and attack methods. Physically, the amplifying auxiliary skills such as [Sword Dance] should be used for training first and then the physical output of [Strange Power]. This arrangement is better. Moreover, this is a weird world rather than a Pokémon world. As a summoner who stands behind to be protected and assist, or even just throws balls most of the time, the protagonist's priority should be to increase mental resistance and enemy tracking/assistance/attack capabilities, rather than physical bonuses first (physical bonus abilities should be used first by the protagonist's younger brother. Compared with the protagonist, the younger brother who holds the inheritance of the Goddess is the one who prefers melee combat. The protagonist is a summoner-like style, and the younger brother is a magic knight-like style).

I think the writing is good and the subject matter is novel. At the beginning, a level 70 dragon king is almost semi-invincible. Moreover, the background is a transborn child and he is not very poor, which is great. It is said that it is a nanny who sends elves to the elves. I don't know what to think. The system task also requires three people to form a team and give the elves to the spiritual energy. I just want to ask if there is anything wrong with being a child. And being a child is not a hindrance. Being able to do magic is just a blast. At least I have read the fifty chapters and I think it is very well written. There are some small poisonous points but the flaws are not concealed. It is definitely not extremely poisonous. Come on, the author will write more chapters every day. It will be even better.

For those who like this type, it is very good. The combination of Pokémon and strange resurrection is very interesting. Great support to the author. He will update 10 times a day for hundreds of days. Hahaha, it must be longer than the mortals. [Salute]

I just started reading it and the content is okay so far. As for the many people who gave negative reviews saying that the main character randomly sends things and lowers the rating, this is completely the behavior of trolls. The author also explained in their comments below that it is a disguised way of saying that the system has completely bound the goodwill to the other party. Even if the other party is allowed to die, the other party will not hesitate. This is equivalent to cultivating one's own power, sharing things with them, and making progress together. What's wrong with that? So far, the content of the novel is pretty good and worth reading.

It's okay, but it's a bit weird to be in the modern corpse.

I read more than 70 pictures of the latest chapter. I feel like this theme is very good and unique.

Very good subject matter and well written. Also, the elves assigned to them by the protagonist are first released to listen to themselves, and then follow them. Not brainless

It's okay, the plot and writing need to be improved

It seems that there are relatively few people writing this type of question. Come on, author!

Beautiful, love watching. Recommend others to watch. I have read it, others cannot help but read it.

The subject matter is good. The last time I saw this subject matter was a few years ago. Now there seem to be only two books on this kind of Poké Ball to recover weird tomatoes. This one is well written and has no major problems.

It's really exciting. I've never read a Pokémon novel like this before. It's very interesting. Keep it up.

Great, the content is very novel and a great combination [Like]

Very novel subject matter, come on

Big cheers for the author!

Something, novel

It's not bad. The protagonist can control all the Poké Ball elves sent by him, and there's nothing wrong with them. And those people can also help him with things. Otherwise, he'd be busy all by himself. It's quite tiring to live.

It feels good, why is the rating not high?

Author, you must remember, in this world, only routines can retain people's hearts,,,

It's really ok, except that the girl is a bit poisonous, everything else is ok

Come on, author, the new theme is okay [laughing]

The subject matter is very novel. It's ok. I support you, the author.

The subject matter is very good. Come on, don't let the quality drop and update more often.

I think the writing is quite good and has new ideas. Come on, author, and please update more.

It's okay, you can still take a look, come on

The intimacy level has been reduced, let's play with a ball.

A very good novel

It's so beautiful, I love watching it, I'm obsessed with it [blowing kiss][sending heart]

Very worth having