[Follow the boat + devil fruit + weak in the early stage + don't know the plot + basically follow the original + slight complaints + no female protagonist]
You start out doing odd jobs, and then follow the hot-blooded idiot protagonist to sail all the way and collect companions, but everyone seems to be suffering from some serious illness.
In the early stage, when encountering enemies, I almost pushed them all the way and followed behind to gain experience, but why did I keep fighting to the death later on?
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Two years later, since you don't talk about science, I'm going to show you what magic science is.
[The plot of the original work will not be described in detail later. Readers need to have some understanding of the original work, but those who can read One Piece fan fiction will generally have no problem]
Reader comments
The writing is pretty good, and the protagonist is very distinctive. Arrita started working as a handyman, and now has a small garden. The improvement in strength is obvious and has a clear trajectory. In addition, the character of the protagonist is also very vivid, such as the usual chatting and fighting methods, and the wisdom shown off at critical moments. All in all, this protagonist has a strong sense of being alive.
In fact, I have always been curious, how can they change the ship if they have the ability of pig's feet? Originally, it was said that the keel was broken, and the keel is equivalent to the foundation. If you want to repair it, you have to demolish all the houses above it, which is equivalent to building a new house. But with the ability of pig's feet, it is really possible to directly repair the foundation without demolishing the house. How about changing the butterfly effect directly? The material money for the Wanli Sunshine was originally caused by Franky stealing the Straw Hats' gold. It is better to set it this time as the Straw Hats getting more gold on the empty island. Therefore, the Sonny is bigger and more powerful than the original one, and can directly fit the Merlin inside. In fact, it is good to have two ships, because judging from the plot after the New World, the Straw Hats actually divided their troops many times. When the troops were divided, the Straw Hats often needed to find a temporary ship or borrow another ship. With two ships, there is no need to worry about the appearance rate of the Merlin. And after that, Franky can also make some modifications to the Merlin, which is not the main force.
It looks good, but I keep thinking that if the protagonist has the ability to make a knife for Zoro, then Zoro will not be able to get Yukizai and Onei Tetsu, and the Sonny will not be damaged, so there is no need to replace the Wanli Sunshine. The Sonny is too small to sail on the Grand Line.
I've become a bastard [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly] It's the Meili number
Keep up the writing, it's pretty good, especially Gaya Island, which is very unpleasant. Whether there are any changes in the early stage is okay. It mainly depends on whether there are any changes in the war on top and two years later. Otherwise, it will really be the same as watching the original work.
Let me give myself a good review first, but not too much.
It's good to watch, but the main role is a bit lacking.
It's not bad, but I've watched more than half of it. Except for mentioning it once at the beginning, his golden finger has been useless since then [Thoughts]
The writing is pretty good, and the protagonist is very distinctive. Arrita started working as a handyman, and now has a small garden. The improvement in strength is obvious and has a clear trajectory. In addition, the character of the protagonist is also very vivid, such as the usual chatting and fighting methods, and the wisdom shown off at critical moments. All in all, this protagonist has a strong sense of being alive. In fact, I have always been curious, how can they change the ship if they have the ability of pig's feet? Originally, it was said that the keel was broken, and the keel is equivalent to the foundation. If you want to repair it, you have to demolish all the houses above it, which is equivalent to building a new house. But with the ability of pig's feet, it is really possible to directly repair the foundation without demolishing the house. How about changing the butterfly effect directly? The material money for the Wanli Sunshine was originally caused by Franky stealing the Straw Hats' gold. It is better to set it this time as the Straw Hats getting more gold on the empty island. Therefore, the Sonny is bigger and more powerful than the original one, and can directly fit the Merlin inside. In fact, it is good to have two ships, because judging from the plot after the New World, the Straw Hats actually divided their troops many times. When the troops were divided, the Straw Hats often needed to find a temporary ship or borrow another ship. With two ships, there is no need to worry about the appearance rate of the Merlin. And after that, Franky can also make some modifications to the Merlin, which is not the main force.
It looks good, but I keep thinking that if the protagonist has the ability to make a knife for Zoro, then Zoro will not be able to get Yukizai and Onei Tetsu, and the Sonny will not be damaged, so there is no need to replace the Wanli Sunshine. The Sonny is too small to sail on the Grand Line. I've become a bastard [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly] It's the Meili number
Keep up the writing, it's pretty good, especially Gaya Island, which is very unpleasant. Whether there are any changes in the early stage is okay. It mainly depends on whether there are any changes in the war on top and two years later. Otherwise, it will really be the same as watching the original work.
Let me give myself a good review first, but not too much.
It's good to watch, but the main role is a bit lacking.
It's not bad, but I've watched more than half of it. Except for mentioning it once at the beginning, his golden finger has been useless since then [Thoughts]