From the Start, I Hand Over the Immortal Cultivation World, and the Nation Tells Me to Become an Immortal First

We are recruiting, and the benefits are good. Time travel, rebirth, and delivery system are included. Due to the excessive number of new small worlds, there is a serious shortage of time travellers, so time travelers are now being recruited, regardless of gender, old or young, on a first come, first served basis. Click 👍 and you will get the system. (Try it, it's free anyway)

I wrote what I wanted to write, and I wrote it better than I did. If the personality of the protagonist is more distinct, and the portrait of the country is more three-dimensional, it will be super beautiful. Of course, there are currently no poison points. Let me sum it up to save everyone the quarrel. In this novel, the sheep placenta and the basic plate both seem to have feelings. They have different concepts and different perspectives on things. What you see is ignorance, but what he sees is unity and struggle. You can criticize or support it. After all, this is just a novel, a Tomato novel [awkward laugh]

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in the Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good.

I came to Tomato just to read this kind of book. No wonder others have achieved good results. The title tells the story of a cool plot with a sense of anticipation, imagination, and passion. I have only read three chapters, and my imagination, emotions, and logic are all mobilized. Although the details may not be so rigorous, it is indeed interesting. The theme is clear, the text is clear, and the imagination is interesting. It's not particularly brainless. There is no brainless villain in the third chapter, just logic substitution. Cool. Although I rarely indulge in national sentiments when I grow up, who has never been the same?

The writing is quite good. I have read so many novels that I can't comment on it. I feel that the author's writing skills are still good and there is room for improvement. When I read "There are gaps in the world and human beings, and when I see Qingyang now, I will know that there are gaps in the cage." I feel that a huge and incomparable world view is about to unfold. Come on author, this is the first time I have read this subject of yours. It is very interesting. This is my first time giving a five-star + review. Come on, the author, write well, eight chapters a day, don't be disrespectful. 🤔😏 I saw a one-star negative review that was discussed by many people. I thought about it and decided to comment, saying that looking at the name is betraying the feelings of the country. Many plots do not make sense. For example, if you are almost discovered for the first time, you should keep silent to prevent the immortal cultivators from finding Blue Star. How should I put it? I am not very educated. But I can also tell the quality of writing. I don't sell melons, but I can eat melons. I know whether melons are sweet or not. The author's writing skills do have room for improvement. It must be very complicated to outline a novel at the beginning, and the author is not a great writer. Of course, I wish him to become one soon. We can discuss and comment on toxic points, and the author will definitely learn from experience slowly. Mainly because I think some of the comments are too unpleasant. I think the theme of this novel is very good, at least I haven't read it before. I came in this afternoon, and I haven't quit except for cooking. When I read "There is a gap in the world, there is a gap in the cage." It really feels like a grand world view is unfolding. Alas, I'm running out of words. Anyway, I think it's pretty good. I was fascinated by it and immersed in it. I thought it was a bit poisonous and the writing was poor. Don't say it too harshly. If you read the Tao Te Ching, you'd be picky after reading a tomato. It's okay to criticize, but don't insult or belittle.

Above the grain and grass, below the fairy grass. The plot is smooth and does not overwhelm the protagonist. There is no cliche plot. Overall, it is quite good. The points deducted are mainly on the reality side. It is a bit deliberately exaggerated, and it does not express the intelligence and character of a top boss. It lacks seriousness, but it is a small problem and the flaws cannot be concealed.

Not bad, Shuangwen is delicious. 😋And Chenli Jiujiu. Tiandao: Son, do you want a wife or not? As soon as you ask me, I will give you an almighty wife. Ever since Senior Brother Ye was prompted by Jian Lao, he has been running towards Junior Brother's head and never looked back. This is love. Why don't they count as a pair of fateful mandarin ducks. 😃 All in all, it is a high-quality book that scores from 8 to 9 points. The world view is handled quite well. The protagonist's biggest golden finger is our family. There will be regrettable lifespan theory. The character setting is quite interesting. Watchable types. Next, the mother-in-law could not accept the speech and rowed away. Mr. Jian: Ye Chenfeng, you are so selfish. You only think about your junior brother. (No The simple and straight old man Jianxiu was defeated by his younger brother, a straight rural boy who was bound by his brain. Jian Lao: (laughs angrily.) Is that what I meant by what I said back then? Damn it, now it's really us who are the boss. After all, we are the people in the upper world, these country bumpkins who came from thousands of remote worlds. ! (

The MM at the hotel's front desk is friendly, serious and responsible! The room was very nice to enter, and the key point was that it was clean! The bed is 1.8 Inches tall and the quilt is very comfortable and soft to sleep on. The WIFI is also very powerful and watching videos is smooth. This environment gave me a good night's sleep. It is a recommended hotel. This trip was worth it! The room is tidy and has a great sense of design! The room is very clean, has no odor, and is well ventilated. The bath towels are individually packaged and very clean. The hotel does not require check-out and check-out, which saves a lot of time. It is very convenient. There is also a free parking space. The security access control is also very good. I feel very safe and practical. The room is equipped with disposable toothpaste and toothbrush, which is very convenient. The room windows The light is very bright, the wireless and TV are also very easy to use, the decoration of the room is simple, modern and comfortable, the lobby is very bright, the Internet is really better than other hotels, the front desk is very welcoming, the room is very clean, the sheets are white, there are many TV stations, and there are packaged bath towels, the wireless network is fast, the parking is convenient, and there are plenty of parking spaces.

It's a good read. It's the first time I've seen this kind of novel that's submitted to the world of immortality. The key point is that the writing is okay. It's not too brainless or anything like that. There are some minor flaws, but very few. It's acceptable. It's not a big one as of the latest chapter. I read the latest chapter of what I saw yesterday and read it today [top post] [please update]

If a person is struggling to survive in the world of immortality, if he has an entire country behind him, he has the most solid logistics - he can not only communicate with each other and exchange materials, but also rely on the top power of the mortal world: It is supported by cutting-edge technologies such as quantum computers and controllable nuclear fusion, as well as think tanks among mortals. Through humanistic analysis, portraiture, and psychological analysis, various situations in the world of immortality are realistically dismantled, and the most practical reference for argumentation is provided. This unique advantage of "mundane technology + think tank" is the core highlight of the novel. The preparation for this part is still shallow at present, but when it is gradually unfolded in the future, it will definitely become a highlight of the work.