At the Beginning, I Handed over to the World of Cultivating Immortals. the Country Asked Me to Become an Immortal First.

I wrote what I wanted to write, and I wrote it better than I did. If the personality of the protagonist is more distinct, and the portrait of the country is more three-dimensional, it will be super beautiful. Of course, there are currently no poison points. Let me sum it up to save everyone the quarrel. In this novel, the sheep placenta and the basic plate both seem to have feelings. They have different concepts and different perspectives on things. What you see is ignorance, but what he sees is unity and struggle. You can criticize or support it. After all, this is just a novel, a Tomato novel [awkward laugh]

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This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in the Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good.

I came to Tomato just to read this kind of book. No wonder others have achieved good results. The title tells the story of a cool plot with a sense of anticipation, imagination, and passion. I have only read three chapters, and my imagination, emotions, and logic are all mobilized. Although the details may not be so rigorous, it is indeed interesting. The theme is clear, the text is clear, and the imagination is interesting. It's not particularly brainless. There is no brainless villain in the third chapter, just logic substitution. Cool. Although I rarely indulge in national sentiments when I grow up, who has never been the same?

The writing is quite good. I have read so many novels that I can't comment on it. I feel that the author's writing skills are still good and there is room for improvement. When I read "There are gaps in the world and human beings, and when I see Qingyang now, I will know that there are gaps in the cage." I feel that a huge and incomparable world view is about to unfold. Come on author, this is the first time I have read this subject of yours. It is very interesting. This is my first time giving a five-star + review. Come on, the author, write well, eight chapters a day, don't be disrespectful. [Thinking][Laughing evilly] I saw a one-star negative review that was discussed by many people. I thought about it and decided to comment, saying that looking at the name is betraying the feelings of the country. Many plots do not make sense. For example, if you are almost discovered for the first time, you should keep silent to prevent the immortal cultivators from finding Blue Star. How should I put it? I am not very educated. But I can also tell the quality of writing. I don't sell melons, but I can eat melons. I know whether melons are sweet or not. The author's writing skills do have room for improvement. It must be very complicated to outline a novel at the beginning, and the author is not a great writer. Of course, I wish him to become one soon. We can discuss and comment on toxic points, and the author will definitely learn from experience slowly. Mainly because I think some of the comments are too unpleasant. I think the theme of this novel is very good, at least I haven't read it before. I came in this afternoon, and I haven't quit except for cooking. When I read "There is a gap in the world, there is a gap in the cage." It really feels like a grand world view is unfolding. Alas, I'm running out of words. Anyway, I think it's pretty good. I was fascinated by it and immersed in it. I thought it was a bit poisonous and the writing was poor. Don't say it too harshly. If you read the Tao Te Ching, you'd be picky after reading a tomato. It's okay to criticize, but don't insult or belittle.

Above the grain and grass, below the fairy grass. The plot is smooth and does not overwhelm the protagonist. There is no cliche plot. Overall, it is quite good. The points deducted are mainly on the reality side. It is a bit deliberately exaggerated, and it does not express the intelligence and character of a top boss. It lacks seriousness, but it is a small problem and the flaws cannot be concealed.

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It's a good read. It's the first time I've seen this kind of novel that's submitted to the world of immortality. The key point is that the writing is okay. It's not too brainless or anything like that. There are some minor flaws, but very few. It's acceptable. It's not a big one as of the latest chapter. I read the latest chapter of what I saw yesterday and read it today [top post] [please update]

If a person is struggling to survive in the world of immortality, if he has an entire country behind him, he has the most solid logistics - he can not only communicate with each other and exchange materials, but also rely on the top power of the mortal world: It is supported by cutting-edge technologies such as quantum computers and controllable nuclear fusion, as well as think tanks among mortals. Through humanistic analysis, portraiture, and psychological analysis, various situations in the world of immortality are realistically dismantled, and the most practical reference for argumentation is provided. This unique advantage of "mundane technology + think tank" is the core highlight of the novel. The preparation for this part is still shallow at present, but when it is gradually unfolded in the future, it will definitely become a highlight of the work.

Not bad, Shuangwen is delicious. 😋And Chenli Jiujiu. Tiandao: Son, do you want a wife or not? As soon as you ask me, I will give you an almighty wife. Ever since Senior Brother Ye was prompted by Jian Lao, he has been running towards Junior Brother's head and never looked back. This is love. Why don't they count as a pair of fateful mandarin ducks. 😃 All in all, it is a high-quality book that scores from 8 to 9 points. The world view is handled quite well. The protagonist's biggest golden finger is our family. There will be regrettable lifespan theory. The character setting is quite interesting. Watchable types. Next, the mother-in-law could not accept the speech and rowed away. ———————— Mr. Jian: Ye Chenfeng, you are so selfish. You only think about your junior brother. (Not The simple and straight old man Jianxiu was defeated by his younger brother, a straight rural boy who was bound by his brain. Jian Lao: (Laughs angrily.) Is that what I meant when I said that? Damn it, now it's really us who are the boss. After all, we are really the people of the upper world, these country bumpkins who came from thousands of remote worlds. ! (

This book is okay, the direction is clear, there is no brainless pretense, and there is no unnecessary word count. The plot setting is reasonable, and there are some templates that appear to be the protagonists of other novels, which is quite interesting.

At present, the main line is clear, the thoughts are not confused, and there is no brainless rush to do these things well. Now, it should be 8 points. The side job of weapon refining is a good choice. With the backing of a powerful industrial country, you can start pasting and copying as long as you make one item [laughter]

Yes, the quality is very good at the moment, and you can read it. As long as you don't go crazy and perform stably, you can basically get above 8.5. The combat power setting is not bad, there is no pressure, just play it steadily, don't just make a high-power protagonist to fight from the beginning. Many books fail in this aspect. I will continue to watch it in the future. Come on.

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's love for Diao Chan Q with Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered in the battle, but Xue Baochai was really too Stronger, if it weren't for Noshou's outer ring + Noxian decapitation Taiwan, this wave of M4 six times strafing will kill you. But I am more concerned about Zhuge What Liang Tu said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain is "Young men are all "Proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", showing Zhuge Liang's attitude toward the monkey He was indignant when he was beaten to death with three sticks. All in all, the plot of this book has Interesting, clear system, and many foreshadowings. Fighting scenes are like being there The setting and character descriptions are also spot on!

It's a top-notch novel. It's rare for me to write a good review on Tomato. You can check out my personal details. Although this novel is very likely to end with the ascension, if the author can really write about the fairy world, where ascension is just a digger, and continue to use the current framework to write a grand scene of country versus fairy, this novel will definitely become a god.

This book is very good! First of all, the setting is attractive. For example, modern technology is used to develop immortality, and the whole country is supported by traveling through the world of immortality. These settings give people a bright feeling. Furthermore, the environment in which the protagonist grew up is not like a large sect like other novels, but appears in an extremely dangerous "devil's cave". His own qualifications also belong to the bottom five spiritual roots. When reading, it gives people a sense of reality and an immersive feeling, like playing a development game. There is also this book The plot is very well arranged, such as refining a giant armor, breaking through the strange phenomenon of the jade pendant when building a foundation, and the protagonist finding himself in the lair of monsters. These plots can arouse people's interest and desire to explore. Finally, the author's writing is good, and there are many sentences that left a deep impression on me, such as the sentence "The world is in chaos. When I see the green soil, I will know that there is a gap in the cage." When I saw this sentence, I was thinking that I was really good at writing it, and then I suddenly wanted to continue reading. However, I felt that the author's writing style still has room for improvement. I don't know how to improve specifically, but I just have this feeling. Finally, let me summarize that this book is excellent in terms of plot setting and writing style. I personally feel that the score is at least 9.3, And I think this book has great potential. I hope the author will not let me down.

I read it in one go, more than 200 chapters, and I didn't find any bad points. It seems quite enjoyable. It is no longer a boring plot. Both individuals and the country have been greatly improved. As long as the following is not bloody or poisonous, it is a good book.

Delicious, extremely shocking delicious😋😋, it is a blessing for scholars, and straight men can keep screaming. It is very beautiful and well-written. Boys see menstruation, and girls get nervous when they see it. This is the nemesis of depression and a bottle of vegetative state. It writes about the longing for the widow and the feeling of being unable to love the five-guarantee households in the village. Summary: What a great book. The author's big book is not a book, it is the roses in the church bells during the Renaissance, the lights at night, the haystacks in the fields, the red camellia blooming at the end of winter, the sunset outside the classroom, and the best midsummer. My fateful Aphrodite, the spring water on the banks of the Seine is not as good as you, and the rose of Bulgaria is not as good as you. You are a divine gift. You are the person God gave to me and saved me, so that my soul can be baptized and sublimated. You are a beam of light in my dim sublimation. You illuminate my dark life. You fill my black and white world with colors and give me a new life. Seeing you makes me feel like I'm in a fairyland.

💯Good reviews, it combines patriotism and cultivation of immortality, the plot is ups and downs, and the picture is very strong. Sometimes it combines some jokes and is humorous, and some parts are very burning. "I have no regrets in this life and I will be a flower grower in the next life."...

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This novel makes an interesting attempt at the cross-border integration of technology and immortality. The author constructs a unique worldview in which science and metaphysics coexist, injecting freshness into the subject of immortality. The core charm of the work lies in the use of rational thinking to reconstruct the traditional system of cultivating immortals. The protagonist contacts his motherland, Daxia, to solve cultivation problems through a unique "technical flow" method. This novel perspective brings a different reading experience. While maintaining the core charm of the fairy tale, the story also brings enough innovation and suspense through technological elements. The novel has a smooth rhythm and an imaginative setting. Although some details may not stand up to in-depth study, the overall creativity deserves recognition. For readers who are looking for a breakthrough in subject matter and like novel settings, this is a work that can bring good reading pleasure.

The whole thing can be seen. The settings in the real world are relatively naive and confusing. The timeline is set in 2099, but except for AI, the rest of the settings are obviously 25 years, or even less than 25 years. For example, the "5.5G" network was still used in 2099, but the first phase of the 6G experiment was actually successful a week ago. There are also settings for foreign countries. Basically, foreign leaders are all fat-bellied fools, while domestic leaders are all wise and powerful. However, until 2099, Laos and China are still the second largest in the world. The sense of fragmentation is very strong. The words and sentences are not very particular and often used incorrectly (for example, when a master says to his apprentice on his own territory, "You have to do your work first, I'll take my leave"). The images of countries and characters are very simple and not three-dimensional enough. The overall pacing is okay, the plot progresses relatively smoothly, and the excitement is obvious. In general, just look at the setting, not the characters and lines. There is a shortage of books to read.

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!

Although the writing style is not very good, it is a very enjoyable book that suits my taste! Disadvantages: The author does not know how to write fighting scenes, so be careful if you like watching fighting scenes. Please be respectful and don't leave negative comments at will. I really need the author's writing to bring me happiness (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )[almost crying] To be honest, I often have daydreams like this [shy], and the author's writing is more beautiful than my dreams. I'm so happy to read it! I also often read and listen to books at the same time, which is very enjoyable. When I listened to some books before, the authors always used various onomatopoeias to describe the text. The whole text was like bang bang bang bang bang bang boom ah ah. It was really painful for me to hear that kind of poetry when listening to books. In my opinion, the author himself should be quite happy writing it~ There is no lag in the plot, the logic is very smooth, and I can feel that the author takes his work seriously. In the comment area, you can see some people who like to preach to the author and question the author's wisdom. They say this is impossible and that is wrong. For example, how could it be possible to report to the National Security Bureau only an hour after calling the police? How could it take only half a day to do the state's work? It would take at least several days! How can it be possible to still use Sand Eagle in 2099? It's impossible to still use Sand Eagle in 2099! Why do parents still need to take care of their children in 2099? They must be using robot nannies! There are also some who scold the male protagonist because the country treats him well, and then there are some who scold the male protagonist because he trusts the country. I wonder if those people will say in the review section that our good reviews are fake and paid by the author. The last time I gave a good review of an article on the entertainment industry, it was a bit magical. I was asking for help. I was helpless and would not discuss the merits of those complicated things. I hope the author can ignore those critical people. They are not your audience. People like me are good readers! Author, please update carefully, work hard to update, and never stop updating! ! ! I look forward to the day when Comrade Lu Li becomes the most powerful man and leads the compatriots of the motherland to rule the earth, dominate the world of immortality, and travel around the world of immortality~ I sincerely hope that the author can update 20,000 words per day. I accidentally tied it. It's so uncomfortable [I almost cried]. Teacher, I'm hungry, I'm hungry (๑ १д१)

This novel is simply amazing! The most exciting thing is Lu Bu drawing the sword for Diao Chan and fighting Sun Wukong head-on for hundreds of rounds. Xue Baochai's combat power is outrageous. If Nuoshou hadn't thrown out the outer ring and connected it to the Noxian guillotine, White Mask would have been blamed here after being shot by the M4 six-power scope. The passage that impressed me the most was when Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Danking is proud, don't show off in front of the national football team!" It perfectly describes his anger after being severely hit by the monkeys' three sticks, and his pity for Junior Wa. Fortunately, before he died, he used his ultimate Isolated Q and captured Wa's mother. Overall, the story is interesting, with complete settings and plenty of foreshadowing. The fighting scenes are full of impact and have a strong sense of immersion, and the character creation of each character is particularly vivid!

There are very few book reviews, and most of those sacred books with a score of 9.5 Or above are difficult to read. However, this book is particularly suitable for one's appetite. Putting aside patriotism, the author's writing style is better than many works. Some novels are so enjoyable that after a hundred or so pages, they have to be read back and forth, so that most works can't be read after seeing more than 100 pages, and it's like chewing wax. Although it is not like those older writers, the writing style is coherent and smooth, but the flaws are not concealed, and it is blessed by patriotism. Moreover, I also saw that the previous chapters talked about the grandness of the world, but it is still a bit of a matryoshka worldview. I hope I can continue to improve and maintain it! After a few months, the book I have been reading for several months is still as beautiful as ever.

Come and ask for a role for yourself [shy] Name: Wu Shaolan Gender: Female Features: stunning appearance Personality: Strategic, passionate, pure-hearted, extremely xenophobic, super fun-loving person, he wants the whole life more than the final victory Spiritual Root: Water Spiritual Root Qualifications: Above average qualifications Comprehension: Excellent A native of the world of immortality, he has keen intuition and is good at playing with people's hearts. He has great fun > cultivation > life. He has an extremely weak sense of morality and is afraid of chaos in the world. He looks down on races other than humans. He is keen on playing tricks on everyone and even puts himself in the game. He can give in to everything for fun and is willing to sacrifice his life for the sake of the whole life.

I've finished reading it. It's good. I don't have CP for the time being. I'm just a little frustrated. The main character's spiritual roots are very poor and it's very difficult to cultivate immortality. However, his father and sister are very talented = =If it's difficult, let's make it difficult together. People on the front line are forced to endure hardship because of poor talent, and people in the rear are lucky because God rewards them. I don't like the feeling. However, the writing in other places is very good. There is no ambiguity with other women or anything, but some things said by the national analysis team are like nonsense. I suspect that a little AI is used. Overall, it is very interesting and updated very quickly. Not bad. By the way, the protagonist is a good match for the destined child who has an old grandfather.

It's quite interesting. Technological cultivation is also quite exciting. It's just a little awkward sometimes, but that's okay. I just like to watch awkward things [laughing and crying]. It's worth watching. I don't know if there is a female protagonist. It's good if there isn't one now. Please update it quickly. It's not enough. I think the author should focus on Lu Li's cultivation in this world as the main line. If he wants to write about how the spiritual energy recovery changes Blue Star, it will easily collapse. But if the main line is about cultivating immortals, it will be easy to write. With the aid of technology, it should be very interesting. It feels too anxious to skip the five-year period. It is too anxious to write about how to change Blue Star. Just write about how Lu Li becomes an immortal. Blue Star can be used as a golden finger.

Divine book! It is truly a sacred book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is the fourth son of the Tang family. The rebirth of a great masterpiece, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins" lost some of its literary grace! "Dou Po" lost some connotation! "Zhu Xian" lost some emotions in front of it! "Shading the Sky" lost three points of imagination in front of it! "Buddha" lost half of the layout in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online literature! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo's old village, Poet Immortal, Poet Sage, Sansu Jiaxuan; since Qin Emperor Han Wu, Tang Zong Song Zu, Cheng Ji Sihan, to Gautama Buddha, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle Who wouldn't be in awe after reading this?! This book by the author is truly the work of a man of heaven! His literary talent is brilliant, his diction is exquisite, and his legacy is The style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties, is profound! I will see this in my lifetime. Books are truly a blessing for three lifetimes! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: Such a masterpiece, if the day What's the point of my life if we never meet again? What's the point of my life?! Fortunately! I made a prompt decision and put it on my bookshelf! Only then can my restless heart find peace for a moment. However! If these masterpieces are covered with dust and cannot be seen by the world, wouldn't it be considered violent? What a waste of natural resources and wasted effort of the author?! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice the small self to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to the world for everyone to appreciate! This book must be reviewed again and again. Nine days in the sky, let the whole world know! Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are the proof: Is this book refreshing enough? One is not enough! Across the rivers and lakes, rivers and lakes serve as evidence: Is this book enjoyable? 1 No Enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not enough speed! Not enough content! Not enough at all!