The Villainous Heir: I Became the Sickly Heroine's Beloved

There are 50 chapters, this should be considered a masterpiece. The writing is smooth, without any coined words or bad jokes, and the reading experience is good; the plot is compact, and each chapter advances the plot in an orderly manner, without any trace of watering down. In terms of character creation, the characters of the female protagonists are basically established, which is pretty good. On the contrary, the image of the male protagonist is a bit flat and too calm. You can consider adding some inner drama and small descriptions. For example, after using special effects props to scare off the enemy, there is a small interaction with Leng Ruoxue, which can not only enrich the character, but also enhance understanding and promote the relationship between the two. In the end, it's a cliché, eat meat as soon as possible, write the heroine so well, eat it when it's done, don't tj [laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry]

I found that the author Yu Stops and Clears has been trying to write different types of novels, and this one feels similar to an ancient martial arts novel like "The Fighting Swordsman in the Snow". I wrote that the unsystematic setting makes the story more immersive, and it prefers the rhythm of traditional online novels. I can see that the author's plot direction of the entire story and the description of each character's personality are still very good. For example, the psychological reactions of the characters around the male protagonist to the male protagonist's verbal behavior directly transform the male protagonist. This setting is also quite interesting. It depends on whether the author wants to write this novel as a fast-food online novel, and also needs to polish it carefully to write an online novel with at least some highlights. All in all, I feel this book still has great potential. I hope the author can write well after the rain stops and the weather begins to clear. Support 👍.

It's so good. The male protagonist must not be out of character. The opening package is for the golden chapter. After reading it, I still want to start it. Everyone, come in together.

The protagonist is not timid at all, he just does it, and he will start to criticize whoever is upset, and he will never hide behind others. Moreover, one can increase one's cultivation level even while lying down. Come and take a look, everyone. You will definitely eat it. No, you won't suffer any loss.

The male protagonist's character conflict is a little bit toxic, but the plot is okay

Compared with the previous few books, the author of this book has obviously 'reduced' (laughing crookedly) and pays more attention to the quality of the work. The plot is tense and relaxed, and the characters focus more on the progression of relationships rather than going straight to the topic. The low score is probably because it is too different from your previous books, which dissatisfied some readers who have read your previous books. I hope you can stick with it and give you good reviews.

It's very, very beautiful. Both the emotional description and the main plot are very beautiful. The psychology of the heroine turning into a yandere is very well described. Moreover, it is a book with multiple heroines. I like it very much. Emotional description: 10 points Main story: 9 points Protagonist creation: 9 points Multiple heroine creation: 9 points

The most moving thing is the interpretation of the essence of "communication" in the book. Ghostwriting is not only the transmission of words, but also the bridge of emotional empathy and heart. The apologies that cannot be said in person, the unspeakable concerns, and the cautious blessings all flow into the most sincere expressions at the tip of the pen.

Although it can be seen that it has been manually repaired, the taste of the AI ​​pre-prepared dishes is still too strong, and I can't eat it after Chapter 70.

It's okay for a semi-imperial book, forget about the rest.