[Dual Male Leads] [Interstellar] Not a power couple, so please skip if that's not your thing. Bai Yu Huan was a master of puppetry in the cultivation world. After a failed attempt to refine a puppet, he accidentally transmigrates to the interstellar era and finds himself inhabiting the body of a despised F-rank good-for-nothing. Stranded on a remote trash planet, he struggles to survive, relying on his powerful spiritual sense and puppet techniques to craft tiny puppets from scrap.
A turning point arrives when he is forced aboard a transport ship bound for a space station, only for it to come under attack by astral beasts. In the crisis, his extraordinary composure and skill catch the attention of Ling Shuo, an admiral in the Federation's Seventh Fleet. Under the pretense of “investigating,” the icy admiral takes Bai Yu Huan under his wing, drawing him step by step from a menial logistics hand to a technical apprentice as he probes the secrets Bai Yu Huan is hiding.
Treading carefully, Bai Yu Huan keeps up the good-for-nothing act while secretly using interstellar materials to create stronger puppets. Then, during a crisis, he controls the remains of an astral beast to craft the “Bedrock” puppet beast, revealing its astonishing power to the world and igniting Ling Shuo's interest for good.
As Bai Yu Huan and Ling Shuo go from wariness and suspicion to fighting side by side, a powerful attraction quietly grows between them through one crisis and contest after another. Ling Shuo's absolute control and quiet protection, along with Bai Yu Huan's restrained brilliance and extraordinary talent, weave a passionate tale of power, trust, and love amid the vast interstellar expanse and the turbulent currents of competing forces.
The previous one probably showed the big guy going into the sea trying to pretend to be a small fish, but he was attracted by another big fish. The constant testing was super exciting. Xiaobai always acts softly, then reveals his flaws and is discovered, and finally conceals his incredible strength. I feel so happy to see it. There aren't a lot of professional terms in it, but a lot of them are advanced vocabulary, which is very immersive and the writing is so good that it's hard to say 😋👍
For me, this book is still very interesting. In the early stage, the emotional implantation seemed euphemistic but it gave people a slightly stiff feeling. I could add more details to describe or add some emotional lines. For me, the character settings are good, and there is no such thing as the puppet master that others say. The feeling of becoming weak after coming to the interstellar and it is not my original body. There will definitely be a gap between my original body and my original body. The description of the battle is very good, but I can think more carefully on the basis of the original. I can do more characterization in the character environment and other aspects to reduce some unnecessary plots and Jumping in details leads to factors such as too fast pace and disconnected plot. This error is inevitable in basic compositions, articles and literary works. Moreover, I think the characters are very charming, the writing is good but it needs to be adjusted, the storyline is interesting, the language is vivid, and the frequency of updates is high. , I also like this young couple very much. I will continue to follow up and give support and comments in the future. I hope the author can make progress after reading it. I look forward to seeing your work on the shelves. Be happy every day and don't feel pressure. Stick to your love for writing. Come on ୧(๑•̀ɜ•́๑)૭✧ is great
Kuawen is an ancient and unique literary form that expresses praise vividly through refined language and clever rhetoric. Whether it is praising the beauty of nature or praising the virtues of characters, praise can always convey the deepest emotions in the most concise words. It does not pursue gorgeous rhetoric, but focuses on the creation of artistic conception, allowing readers to feel the author's sincerity and enthusiasm in a few words. The beauty of praise lies in its purity and directness, like a breeze blowing through the heart, leaving endless aftertaste.
Yes, yes. In fact, the plot is very enjoyable. However, the protagonist's sugar-producing rate is indeed not very high, but it is consistent with the setting of the plot. The author's writing style is sometimes divine and sometimes normal. It is still worthy of encouragement! I was busy in the middle, so I didn't read it. I just finished it now and found out that the ending is over. I feel that the author is quite pure in love. The protagonist didn't even get to see each other very much. They all held hands and hugged each other. However, I am a pure love for the brain. I thought it was very interesting. I really liked the author's big words: "I want to be by your side, not only in this life, but also in the next life." Oops, this is simply a gift from God. Come on. I haven't had much desire to read books recently, but this setting is quite attractive to me because it's relatively novel. Because I haven't read Tomato's articles for a long time. This should be the first full-length novel I have read in four or five months. Yes, the plot is very well written, well, this is worthy of praise. This five-star is my support for you. The disadvantage is that your plot is often repetitive. In fact, there is no need to emphasize that the chime stone is a solid protection. You can change some words, but it's actually a bit tiring to keep repeating them. These are some of my opinions. The author can make some corrections based on my reference. I am not a very strong person, but I just talk about it from a reader's perspective. I wish the author this article can be a hit! I don't know how the two protagonists fell in love. Anyway, the emotional bond may have been forced by you. This three-star follow-up review is my suggestion to you. The emotional lines of the characters must be clear. What happened to falling in love without saying a word? You may want to talk about their love in this corner of life. Hey, this is a novel. Click on the center. The emotional lines of the characters are not foreshadowing. Point them out. When you write the psychological description of the characters, you must highlight them and write them very well in the later stage. As for the character setting, I will say it again here. Maybe the author just doesn't want to It makes his sharp edge too obvious, but also wants to create some dark emotional lines, so the protagonist misses a few points. The contradiction is here. With this kind of writing, I may not understand what the author means, but after reading those critical reviews, I really have no choice. But there is one thing I can say. I felt quite frustrated in the first half of it. , The first half may have some flaws, but the author's outline is still very good. I really like this. But when it comes to coming to a strange world, I think I still avoid the edge, so I think pretending to be weak may be part of the reason. But in this weak part, the author obviously wrote a lot of pitfalls () I'm just giving advice not to criticize me. The author has to accept our criticism when he writes, but I really don't like comments that criticize characters. I'm sorry, I may criticize those who criticize characters. Although you are right, the author doesn't stop talking without criticizing you. If there are problems, we must actively correct them and make ourselves better!
As for this book, it focuses on the plot, not the emotional line, nor the so-called love at first sight or anything. Anyway, he is more attracted to me, but it is a pity that he was not seen by me when it was finished, nor when I was free, but during this eight-day holiday 😢
It's very good-looking. You'll know after reading it that the author's expressive ability is very strong and the battle scenes are also very detailed. It's very enjoyable. It has the feeling of a man's favorite novel. It's super good-looking. You won't lose money if you invest in it. The author updates it steadily every day.
Federal General Ling Su and puppet master Bai Yuhuan fell in love from the temptation when they first met, and worked together to fight against powerful enemies. It's so sweet! 💕💕💕 Double strength! 🥰🥰[Admiration]
Double strong, delicious, except that the little couple is not sweet, everything is fine
I like it so much. I like it so much. It's my favorite duo (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ.
The wretched development in the early stage is not played in the later stage. It is exciting!!!