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It is a very good Mingchao fanfic. It integrates the author's self-understanding on the basis of maintaining the original setting of The Drifter, which makes the wood more enlightened and allows readers to see the follow-up to the official ambiguous blank space in the game. It is a very good continuation of the second creation! [Laughing] The author updates 6-8 times a day, and he seems to have entered a state of flow where he doesn't know what the world is. The follow-up plot is not a pure novel, it is logically self-consistent. The divinity and humanity of the wanderer are constantly competing. The change of mentality in Frollo's pregnancy subplot is very real and touching. It can be called the ultimate iFTV. The author has his own ideas, extreme love and fandom that generates power for love. On a platform where traffic is paramount, it is very rare for an author to be committed to building a complete world view and a complete emotional network of characters. This five-star rating will not change. Keep up the good work, author!

I have finished reading the whole book. As a reader who wants to make up for Frollo's regret before reading fan fiction, this book has undoubtedly fulfilled my wish. After reading the whole article, this book is one of the best on this platform. However, as far as I am concerned, Phoebe and Di Yao have twice highlighted the divinity of Piaozi. I personally do not appreciate the kind of forced instillation of will, which makes these two characters and Piaozi themselves not equal in status, which in turn leads to the opposite. Phoebe has almost no characterization. I think it is a pity that the author really created Di Yao as a character with style in just a few chapters, but in the end he personally destroyed all the characterizations. It was too forceful and blunt. I think it is a pity for the two characters of Phoebe and Di Yao, especially Di Yao. The empress is just like a shell with her name. Other than that, the characterization of all the characters in this book is almost perfect, and it is worth reading.

After reading most of it, I found the content to be very ingenious, the writing style of the whole text to be exquisite but not overly pretentious, and the spring breeze and rain are very comfortable. Then, the part where the main plot is intertwined, especially Frollo, has a great grasp of the emotional conflicts of the characters, with a bit of intervention, not complicated, and very comfortable. Moreover, the author's daily writing is also very light and beautiful, which really fills in the daily interactions that are difficult to create in games, but that players love to see. This is what fan fiction is about! Come on, author! It doesn't matter if updates are slow, just don't give up! It would be better if there were more casual daily conversations between the drifters and everyone! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

It's a very good Mingchao article. I haven't seen it for a long time. I just want to ask the author if there will be any training with Fu Nuonuo later. I still want to read it.

High-scoring suggestions: 1. After eliminating the lamentation, unify the world with strength and savior reputation, divide p reasonably, and prevent injustice and pink. 2. Since players have different preferences for each character in the second game, it is best to be cautious and not just prefer to marry one. 3. Historically, there have been cases where male offspring snatched away their father's spouse. The protagonist has the freedom to be passionate. If their "freedom" is respected, some players may have negative associations with "associating with offspring who look like the protagonist and with female characters who are not related by blood." It is best not to include children, or only female offspring, to prevent negative associations from the setting. 4. Frollo distributed the candy too late, which is suitable for completing the physical book, not suitable for online serialization. Moreover, the settings such as the Black Coast Fleet and the early collection of the master's power are also second-generation cheats. There is no need to limit the protagonist's ability to redeem the character. As a result, Frollo and the protagonist reconciled near the end. 5. The main players of the second game are relatively young, and they don't like the sophistication of middle-aged people in real life. The protagonist's sophisticated handling of these things can save pen and ink, enhance the player's sense of substitution, and focus more on writing other aspects, such as what the female character did for the protagonist, specific events of cooperation between each other, and the interaction between Koletta and Xia Kong in another book can easily make readers laugh.

The writing is very good, I like it very much. The plot combines some activities with meanings that anyone who has played it can understand. The character description combines some popular second-generation descriptions. The protagonist is not a street kid and has a clear goal. The force and intelligence are also in line with the original work. The official plot is used to fill in the imperfections, and the spicy aspect is impeccable. Looking forward to the next plot. [Praise]

Frollo and the ending Although this is a large part of Frollo's charm But I still don't like tragedy My own opinion is: Isn't it just to make up for regrets by reading fan fiction? I feel that unless your writing is very good, it's best not to do it, and don't respect the plot of the game. If you are already doing fan fiction, do you still care about it? The original plot is already censorious enough, and the fandom is going to do something like this again To be honest, apart from pure Dao Ziwen, he It's annoying for others to do this. But the author's writing is okay If you can accept Flohe's, you can take a look. Ignore Frollo, it's a good Mingchao ML fanfic Don't be picky, I feel like there are a little few people writing about Mingchao fandom. The author has his own ideas, and the heroine has her own emotional line If you want to read pure and refreshing articles, you can go. Floro The author said that it will be later and the two will no longer be separated. I feel that the author wrote it very well. You can think of it as a secondary processing of Ming Shioyuan's plot, and some original works. The ending of Frollo. To be honest, Frollo's plot is the only time I cried. Mijia four-piece suit and Kuro two-piece suit. I didn't cry during the plot. Frollo is the only time I cried. To be honest, I hate the ending of Frollo.

If you miss it, you may never see us again. People, you have to wait until you lose it to understand what is most important. Feelings are invisible and can be easily changed, which is a very troublesome thing.

Not bad, very good, almost no occ. The plot adaptation is also reasonable, but I personally have questions about the outline (mainly because I am afraid that the author will be backstabbed and lead to the end of the novel. I have seen many backstabbing stories in Mingchao novels that are cut off or have hasty endings). The outline of "Feng Yun" can be changed, because there are still many things in Jinzhou in "Mingchao" that need to be filled in. Some Raging Wave remnants like Shuo Lei's Phosphorus, Impermanent Vulture, etc. Can be improved by (War Cry-style operation or awakening into a riot period). You can also use this plot to improve the plots of Yangyang, Tao Qi, Little Taoist, and Xiao Xi Wang. That is to write some original companion star (can be multi-person) missions, which can not only prevent backstabbing, but also expand the harem, and also improve the world view to prevent no stories to be written. For example, Jin Xi asked Sanhua to take the protagonist for a walk, and met a wanderer (remember there is a named wanderer in Li Naxi Tower) and King Xiaoxi. Then the three of them discovered that these wanderers used something to cause the impermanent vultures to riot, and the three of them worked together to solve the problem. It turns out that the boss of the Rangers was controlled by Zhan Mingshi. After being forced into Jinshu City, he became the red big brother and caused destruction... And other stories. Try not to have original characters, especially big ones. The Dragon Lord is too big, and I'm really afraid that the author will end it hastily after being stabbed in the back. It's really not possible, and one version and one update will do. Too few Mingchao articles have written to this point, so don't stop! Another problem is that the current protagonist still doesn't know enough about the plot, right? Can you add a setting and decide not to combine with a person from another world, but to understand all his memories and combine them, otherwise the plot will not be unpredictable [Chigua]

The emotional description is quite delicate, direct yet vague and implicit. All scene language is love language. He is good at carving out characters and plots through details and environment rather than a series of pale vernacular words. This is exactly what fans need, and what most MC fans lack. All in all, it is full of potential and worth watching.

Very good, I hope the author will work harder. Personally, I have a habit of half-reading books (or saving chapters? That is, when updating, I jump directly to the latest chapter and click on the update, occasionally send some gifts, and then go back to the previous chapters to save them). I hope I don't keep it to death [sending heartfelt wishes]

Oh my God, this is what I've always wanted to see [Adoration] The divinity behind Piaozi is too heavy, and the interaction with the heroine also feels sluggish and not so pure. The Piaozi in the front is so good. The Piaozi written in the front is in line with my imagination.

It can be seen that the version when the author started creating was probably version 2.5. Therefore, the author relied on his own understanding and guesswork for some of the early foreshadowing in the game. People who are into the plot may feel a little uncomfortable after reading this. And since the progress follows version updates, it is inevitable that the early plot understanding will be difficult. Other than that, this is an excellent fanfic. The way Piao Patriarch awakens the player's memory is reasonable and not obtrusive. After awakening the memory, his character is not OOC, and he is still the Piao Zi in the game. The descriptions of other characters are also very similar to those in the game, which will be very comfortable for fundamentalists. Eating meat is quick, and you have to eat it in the third chapter. The method is also reasonable. It is equivalent to unfolding the blank parts of the original game in a way that is consistent with the character and what we players want. It looks extremely comfortable. It is daily and warm, and the main plot also fits the original work. What's more important is that the protagonist is Piaozi, so the description of the emotional lines with other characters will be much smoother, such as Chun, Shougan and Changli. The other characters are okay. Piaozi's position is not irreplaceable, but the setting of these three is Piao's single pusher. In other fandoms, unless it is the kind of simulator that goes back to the past to preemptively interact with them, any other reason for the three people to change their hearts is OOC.

The writing is very consistent with the character, and compared to the unknown future plot of the game itself, it is relatively beautiful (although I have played a lot of double combat and am now resistant to knives, I still hope that Ming Chao will have a relatively better ending)

He can perfectly integrate his own writing and ink on the original plot, without violating the drifter's firm heart, and perfectly integrate the "player" and the drifter. It can be said that the author has put a lot of effort into this book, which can give players the secondary plot they want, and can also return to the original plot route. In short, this is definitely a high-quality fanfic, and it deserves to be rated as high as it is. Moreover, due to the lack of plot in the current version of Mingchao, the author can still create the world view and the story behind the text. It is rare to find a fanfic with these features. Come on, the author is great

This is the best Mingchao fanfic I have ever read so far. First of all, A Piao's people are well established. They have both absolute rationality and calm divinity, as well as rich emotional humanity. Let him face the screams calmly while taking care of the hearts of the girls. Secondly, the article is not mindless. The protagonist group will also encounter various setbacks, but this ups and downs of the plot has a sense of tension that cannot be ignored, and is more worth recalling. Also, the writing is good, which is a bonus. [Laughing]

This book is very well done and very creative. I rarely have the motivation to finish a novel quickly. I read it slowly 80% of the time, but this one attracted me so much that I finished it in three days. It didn't disappoint me. The plot is very innovative. Except for Frollo, the emotional line is particularly good. The others are neither good nor bad. They are average. Some of them are very sloppy. However, the flaws are not concealed. The plot of this book completely meets my high expectations. I recommend it.

I actually want to see the big card

Looks good, give me some hard training [angry]

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Objectively speaking, the rating of this book is low, but the author's ideas are very good. This not only respects the original work but also ensures the novelty of the second creation. The most important thing is that Piaozi is well portrayed. I have read many Mingchao second creations and most of the protagonists think in perspective. This protagonist is very close to the protagonist of the game. Different from the protagonist of the game, this protagonist makes up for the regret that the game does not respond to those female characters. It is truly a masterpiece.

Children, I have a big guarantee again [Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical]

People reading this book are not only Mingchao players, but also Beng 3, Genshin Impact, Beng Tie and even other players. It can be seen that a normal person can play multiple games at the same time.

It's pretty good, especially the latest part about Phoebe. I'm looking forward to Brother Niao Chuang's appearance [thoughts] The following paragraph of daily writing is really boring.

This is currently the best book on Mingchao's emotional drama in Tomato. The characters' emotions are natural and not copied mechanically. It basically restores the characters in the game plot.

Finished spreading flowers, thank you for accompanying me! The writing is very good, and it is also a high mountain in Mingchao fan literature. IFTV is well-deserved. At least in my opinion, it can be compared with the strongest resonance and Tongtiandai. I am looking forward to the new book! Ming tide reciprocates, civilization is unyielding

The writing is very good, but I just hope that the author will not copy the original plot in some chapters (Frollo and A Piao have read the script. Their reactions and actions cannot be the same as the original plot.

Author, come on, it looks good, I love reading it.

Come on, keep it up

I feel great, no more pain [got it]