I, Ye Fan, have awakened.
The last time I woke up was probably during the Great Qin dynasty. It was so boring that I went back to sleep for another ten thousand years.
The world is still just as dull. Its strongest fighter couldn't hold a candle to the dog I used to keep watch back in the day.
I was planning to sleep for another ten or twenty thousand years, but then a drugged saintess stumbled into my cave.
I saved her on a whim and took her in as my disciple to stave off boredom.
But who could have guessed that this aloof, otherworldly saintess acts around me as if she's always plotting how to win her master's heart?
Help! My disciple only wants to flirt with me. What should I do? Please answer quickly, this is urgent!
It's quite interesting, and the plot is very coherent, but it always feels a bit strange. The author could change the settings of the female protagonist and the male protagonist. The male protagonist sleeps for ten thousand years, and he must have been a very strong existence tens of thousands of years ago. It is impossible for the male protagonist not to be interested in a woman tens of thousands of years ago. After all, it is impossible to covet a woman as soon as he wakes up. My personal opinion is that the female protagonist can be changed to the male protagonist. A former partner died for some reason and then reincarnated. However, the heroine has no memory of her reincarnation, but Ye Fan knew it was her as soon as he saw Su Lingxi, so he accepted her as his disciple. After all, Ye Fan couldn't have been so strong from birth, otherwise it would really feel awkward. A master who has practiced for tens of thousands of years and a disciple who has practiced for less than a hundred years are a bit weird. Personal opinion, overall it's very good to read, the whole book is short and the writing is very interesting 👍
The story is overall good, and I finished it in one day. I like this kind of fast-paced book, unlike some books that take a long time to write once you enter the secret realm, which makes it uncomfortable to read. However, there was too little emotional interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, and the female protagonist's sense of presence and participation was not very strong in the later stages. The male protagonist was either yawning or picking his ears [something]. The last part of the battle using laws is very innovative. The lot of quotation marks feels like the college entrance examination essay I wrote [stunned], but there is no cool description of the battle in the whole text. Most of the battles are silent, which is a bit unsympathetic. I hope the author will continue to work hard!
It is indeed a rare good book. It is rare for me to read it in one sitting. It is just too short and I still have more to say.
Yes, it's very good-looking. The male protagonist is very protective and dedicated.
Very beautiful, even five stars are missing.
There will be more of this in the future
Super invincible and beautiful
This book is okay, it sounds good
Writing well so far
Good writing and good plot