Game Launch: Aura Resurrection After the Blood Moon

The concept and the character design of the protagonist are quite good, but the writing style is not very good. The description of the environment is very awkward, the big scenes are not written well, and the small details are very vague. Often when I want to immerse myself in the plot, I am suddenly confused by some vague narration, just like a bowl of fragrant rice, and the sand is biting my teeth while eating, so the reading experience is average. But overall, the flaws are not outweighed by the flaws, the integration of cultivating immortals and the game is not abrupt, I like the character of the protagonist, and the female supporting characters are also outstanding. I hope the follow-up writing will be better and better, come on!

The writing is great. It captures the feeling of combining immortality with gaming (without making people feel fake), and the transfer of time is also great. There is no unreal feeling like the sudden increase in levels, but only one or two years have passed. It's amazing [Like]

The more I read the previous setting, the more it resembles the Immortal Cultivation version of Xun Ge. However, the early stages of Xun Ge are also more conventional, and it is only at the end of the writing that I start to become a god. I don't know if this article can find its own way, but I'm looking forward to it. More comments later

I don't think it's particularly attractive. Let me describe part of the reason. Leave a paw.

Very nice. I like this way of writing. Mao Dun is so realistic.

It's very interesting, I like the character of the main character very much.

The plot is smooth and not draggy, and the protagonist's character is also very good. Although it is a game about cultivating immortals, there is no roll value, which is more realistic. Give me a compliment! I like this heroine

It's good to read. The little girl is handled better than in the previous book, and the communication with the officials is also very good. I hope the plot and writing can be maintained or even improved. Good luck, author,

It's good-looking, and the heroine is cautious without affecting her revenge and self-improvement.

Looks good, but a little lacking

The angle is different. But the sense of participation is not good

The author's writing style is not very good, but the content is quite good.

It's very good-looking and I like it. Especially the heroine, who changes her face to hide everything she does and is relatively solitary, is my favorite. The subject matter is also good.

The heroine's character is very good and the concept is also very good. It's just that I haven't updated it for a long time, it's been 20 days

The subject matter is very good, but some parts are not very detailed, but it is acceptable. Hope more

The heroine is so handsome and the plot is quite interesting

I like to see a calm heroine who can beat her pussy without any fuss.

It's good-looking. You don't become invincible as soon as you are reborn. The heroine has been working hard to compete with the sky. The passion for cultivating immortality is written out. It is highly praised [heartfelt]

Very nice, I like this kind of rebirth