If You Are a Companion, You Will Be Ostracized. but Don't Cry When You Meet on the Battlefield!

(18) Purple, 43.75 Sense of immersion: 4, very good. Without Senju and Uchiha, would Konoha still be Konoha? Follow-up reading: 4, I saw chapter 48, so far it's pretty good. Writing style and imagination: 3, 3 Plug-in, background: 3, 3 Rhythm and plot: 4, 3, read it in one sitting Character, logic: 3, 3 Extra: Purple Three 5.25, Purple Four 4.5 Calculation: 8×1.5+6×1.25+19×0.75=33.75+9.75=43.5

Very good. Cloud Hidden Village is the most suitable place for Uchiha. They believe in self-discipline and ease of getting along with each other.

The author's previous book was originally thought to be the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read, but this one is actually pretty good too, at least Mikoto isn't second-hand [laughs]

It's a novel one among fanfictions. It's not against Konoha, nor can it let Konoha go. It kills when it's time to kill, and it's when it's time to trap it. People with different stances are enemies. This is good, the writing is also good, and the plot is quite enjoyable.

A very nice Naruto fan novel. The protagonist changed the fate of the Uchiha clan from being exterminated. A series of changes also occurred under the butterfly effect. But it basically conforms to the character design in the original work, and it's pretty good-looking. Reasonable explanations can also be given for changes in someone's personality, such as changes in the living environment since childhood, changes in education, changes in key nodes, such as the fate of Uchiha Shisui, Uchiha Obito, Kabuto, etc. The only thing that readers may mind is that there are many women in the protagonist, both because of their lustful nature [laughing and crying], and for reasons such as blood inheritance limits. However, I don't remember the voice of the one next to Senju Tsunade. What special physique does it have? Is this purely lustful? The protagonist is perfectly portrayed, with a good personality, a comic-male-level look, basically invincible martial arts, and all kinds of sweet words and little surprises. It would be strange if girls don't like it [laughing]. Male protagonist: You slander me, but I am doing it for the growth of the Uchiha clan!

Okay, the plot is relatively fresh, unlike most fanfics that stick to Konoha. The Konoha of the Third Generation period has long since decayed and is not worth remembering.

The original text of Chapter 97, if you are interested, you can read it. Five-star praise is given, don't let me get poisoned alone. Uchiha Yuzuru touched his chin. "Itachi... What do you think?" "Itachi?" Uchiha Mikoto murmured and nodded, "Uchiha Itachi... Is a very good name." Uzumaki Kushina also stood up and patted Uchiha Yuzuru on the shoulder: "Can't you tell, you have a talent for naming." Uchiha Yuzuru smiled and did not answer. Anyway, Mikoto has already been cut off by him, so she doesn't need a name anymore. He has already thought about it. Mikoto's next child will be called Sasuke, Kushina's child will be named Naruto, and if she marries Garaura in the future, her child will be called Gaara. Uchiha Sasuke, Uchiha Naruto, Uchiha Gaara... I don't even know how to choose a name, but I still use the original name, which is too poisonous.

So far, it's to my liking. I really like this kind of stronger protagonist. I definitely won't be able to do that in my real life. I feel aggrieved just reading a novel, so that won't work.

The writing is very good. The author gradually makes the deformed Naruto world conform to normal people's cognition. How can powerful ninjas surrender to ordinary daimyo? With strong national power, they should unify the ninja world. How can they keep making five major countries and several small countries? But it may be the relationship between Naruto and humanities. It feels that it is more suitable for the protagonist to rule Konoha first and then unify the ninja world. It may be more satisfying. However, this book breaks out of the Naruto framework and has its own ideas. It is still very good. I hope the author will work hard and update [Like]

After watching Tsunade Runs Away Uchihahiko, I seem to have lost my appetite, and I feel like there are no good fanfics for Tomato, although the ending is a bit hasty and unsatisfactory. This book is quite average. The main character is a little too good, and the gouge marks are a bit awkward. The character portrayal could actually be improved a bit to make it less blunt. For example, all the reasons for the family's relocation and the group's reactions are actually unreasonable. There is a lack of foreshadowing. The main character is overly forceful, which makes him feel more self-righteous. It's not too bad. After reading it for a few hours, it's okay. It may be due to my personal taste. Yan is also domineering, even more domineering than this. He is petty and vindictive, but it feels that the editing is more rounded and less abrupt. Of course, this is not to say that this book is not good. Overall, it is okay. Four stars encourage it. Great support, author. I look forward to further improvement in your writing skills and your next great work.

The golden finger that increases the prosperity of the protagonist's family and then gets the treasure chest reward is quite satisfactory. I don't know if the author has played Crusader Kings under P Entertainment. The player controls a certain person in a family, generally the head of the family, who can consume family prestige to unlock family inheritance that can be effective for the entire family. For example, it can increase combat power or attributes, or even improve fertility. After intermarriage with others, there is a higher chance of obtaining high-quality genetic traits. It is said to be a game of bloodline selection in the Middle Ages, with genes soaring. It would be great if the protagonist's golden finger in this book had this function. For example, through the reputation gained by family members completing tasks, or the cohesion between family members, you can unlock inheritance buffs that are effective for the entire family. For example, by enhancing appearance, enhancing cultivation talent, and enhancing fertility, after intermarrying with other blood families, the bloodline of both parties can be inherited more easily.

I finished reading Chapter 1/48 in one go. The protagonist really led the whole family to escape from Konoha, and it didn't miss the plot at all. Now he has begun to lead the Uchiha clan to counterattack Konoha. It's just that the protagonist's harem is a bit small, only two! Aren't there still many Uzumakis scattered in the ninja world? We should bring them back. There are also ninja clans like the Blood Successor Kaikai scattered in various places. Read Chapter 54

It's a very interesting novel. Everyone knows that Naruto's enemy is the Daidomu clan, so unification is a must. The author can make up for all Naruto's regrets. Strong people like White Fang are good at defeating the Daidoki. Of course, Daidoki is still early in the morning. Madara, Rokudo, and Daidoki are all the big villains in the first part. They must be defeated or destroyed. It depends on the author's will.

The overall quality of this harem novel is quite good. The author has restored the setting of the original work to a very high degree. Whether it is the complex ninjutsu system or the cool pupil skills, it has perfectly reproduced the charm of the original Naruto work. This must be highly praised. As a reader with a bit of a collecting habit, it is not too appetizing to see the design that combines the power of multiple bloodlines in the work. This setting greatly satisfies my desire to collect. I especially hope that the follow-up plot can arrange more highlight moments related to eye skills, especially the performance of Susanoo. If Susanoo can take the Kusanagi sword spiritual weapons such as the Juken Sword and the Eight-foot Mirror, the battle scenes will definitely be more shocking. In addition, I am very satisfied with the pace of recruiting girls. The progress is already very fast, and we have already recruited 11 female protagonists, including Uchiha Mikoto, Uzumaki Kushina, Garuru, Sara, Konan, Yekura, Tsunade, Shizune, Yakushi Nonou, Nohara Rin, and Yuhi Kurenai. I look forward to unlocking more characters in the future.

The most enjoyable revenge story I've ever seen is Naruto's Revenge, although it's not as exciting a revenge as I thought. But compared to other novels of the same kind, it is quite enjoyable. Other novels that just kill people all the time are not that satisfying at all.

I don't know the reason for the low rating, maybe it has something to do with the original work. This fanfic is considered excellent in my opinion. The only flaw is that the dialogue with the woman is a bit awkward. It can be seen that the author is Xiao Chunan. The rest is pretty good and enjoyable. Currently, it seems to be second only to the fanfic I read before. I forgot what it was called. Anyway, the protagonist's plug-in is the sword or move from Death God. At that time, Naruto hadn't finished yet, so there weren't so many twists and turns. This book's description of various characters broke my understanding of Naruto. After thinking about it, it seemed quite reasonable. After all, I only saw Sen Ming beating Pain in Naruto and not watching it!

It's okay. It doesn't stress the battle power all the way. It's just that there are some loopholes in the plot, such as the Kusanagi sword and the Crow clone that suddenly appeared, and then the battle power fell a little bit later (it's so bad that an Uchiha can reach the movie level, and the family entries given are too outrageous). Overall, it is a good and refreshing book. If you think about it carefully, it still has the ability to suppress the battle, or it strengthens other characters too much. Minato was able to resist the troubles of the Nine-Tails Chakra and still learned to fly the Thunder God, which is an epic level of enhancement.

In terms of details, the author's writing is not very good, but from a simple perspective, it is still good. The pace is not draggy, and there is no one thing that drags on for dozens of chapters like other cool novels. Let's see how it develops in the future. [Thinking] [Thinking] Add a bookshelf first, and wait for more time to read.

Not bad, but the name given to the child is a bit unacceptable. Will the child with Kushina also have a yellow hair?

Not bad. The harem story and Ninjutsu Eye Technique are all well received by the original work. The multi-blooded version has good reviews (I have a bit of a collecting habit, so I like it). I hope that the multi-eye art and Susanoo can bring the Kusanagi sword spiritual weapon (Ten Fist Sword, Eight-foot Sword) Mirror), take it, collect many girls, eat quickly, have eaten 11 (Uchiha Mikoto, Uzumaki Kushina, Garuru, Sara, Konan, Hayakura, Tsunade, Shizune, Yakushi Nonou, Nohara Rin, Yuyang Kurenai).

I finished reading it all night last night. I don't think there are any big problems. Overall, it meets the rating of 8.9 Or above. The protagonist has finished pretending everything he can pretend and fighting everything he can fight. There are just a lot of jokes, but it's okay. It didn't say that if these jokes were removed, he couldn't write it. Come quickly and get some big brothers to top up some money for him. Only two chapters a day.

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It looked pretty good at the beginning, I'll take a look at it later

Write that the clouds are hidden. I have always felt that Kumogakure is much better than Konoha, but it is a pity that there are too few written about them. Although I dislike anti-Konoha novels, Konoha is indeed very rubbish towards its own people. Writing about Yunyin is a good review

Overall, the plot is mediocre, not too poisonous, but also not very good. Some of the plot is a bit too idealistic. If you like to read cool stories, you can read it. If you don't like grabbing the CP of the original work, remember to avoid lightning. If you like to watch the plot from top to bottom, it is recommended. There is another new book on the same subject which is quite good, called "The Conspiracy to Resist Konoha" or something like that.

It's very annoying to treat Shino. I haven't read Naruto for a long time. I searched for several books and read this one. It's very good to read. It's very good to keep reading. Finally, it's not a Naruto story about conspiracy in Konoha to the end. The various methods are very good and it won't be boring in the end. Five Stars presents the top five books on Naruto.

"It's better to hear a hundred pairs of socks than to see a person wearing them." The gift is light but the affection is heavy. It means you gave me a sock. Although this sock is light and fluffy, the smell contained in it is very strong. It is better to obey orders than to be respectful, which means if you give me a sock, I will accept it respectfully and then obey your orders.

It seems that the setting of giving birth to children will make you stronger is just to create a harem for the protagonist hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I just wanted to see how many girls the protagonist has left [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

I think this book is very good. I also read the author's previous book. Everything else is good. The wife (Mikoto) makes me speechless. Mikoto is so perfect and makes the protagonist look like a villain. You write it like this and it makes me a little sick. This book is very good. I am a childhood sweetheart and have a child. I hope the author writes more about the daily life of the protagonist and the children of the protagonist and their interactions. The ninja world is tired of killing every day, right?

It's a pretty good fanfic. I didn't fight with Konoha. I just stopped playing and ran away with my family [face covering]. After watching more than half of it, I felt a bit boring, so I skipped to the finale. The finale was pretty good, complete and beautiful.