You Shunned Me as a Teammate, So Don’t Cry When We Meet on the Battlefield!

(18) Purple, 43.75 Sense of immersion: 4, very good. Without Senju and Uchiha, would Konoha still be Konoha? Follow-up reading: 4, I saw chapter 48, so far it's pretty good. Writing style and imagination: 3, 3 Plug-in, background: 3, 3 Rhythm and plot: 4, 3, read it in one sitting Character, logic: 3, 3 Extra: Purple Three 5.25, Purple Four 4.5 Calculation: 8×1.5+6×1.25+19×0.75=33.75+9.75=43.5

Very good. Cloud Hidden Village is the most suitable place for Uchiha. They believe in self-discipline and ease of getting along with each other.

The author's previous book was originally thought to be the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read, but this one is actually pretty good too, at least Mikoto isn't second-hand [laughs]

It's a novel one among fanfictions. It's not against Konoha, nor can it let Konoha go. It kills when it's time to kill, and it's when it's time to trap it. People with different stances are enemies. This is good, the writing is also good, and the plot is quite enjoyable.

A very nice Naruto fan novel. The protagonist changed the fate of the Uchiha clan from being exterminated. A series of changes also occurred under the butterfly effect. But it basically conforms to the character design in the original work, and it's pretty good-looking. Reasonable explanations can also be given for changes in someone's personality, such as changes in the living environment since childhood, changes in education, changes in key nodes, such as the fate of Uchiha Shisui, Uchiha Obito, Kabuto, etc. The only thing that readers may mind is that there are many women in the protagonist, both because of their lustful nature [laughing and crying], and for reasons such as blood inheritance limits. However, I don't remember the voice of the one next to Senju Tsunade. What special physique does it have? Is this purely lustful? The protagonist is perfectly portrayed, with a good personality, a comic-male-level look, basically invincible martial arts, and all kinds of sweet words and little surprises. It would be strange if girls don't like it [laughing]. Male protagonist: You slander me, but I am doing it for the growth of the Uchiha clan!

Okay, the plot is relatively fresh, unlike most fanfics that stick to Konoha. The Konoha of the Third Generation period has long since decayed and is not worth remembering.

The original text of Chapter 97, if you are interested, you can read it. Five-star praise is given, don't let me get poisoned alone. Uchiha Yuzuru touched his chin. "Itachi... What do you think?" "Itachi?" Uchiha Mikoto murmured and nodded, "Uchiha Itachi... Is a very good name." Uzumaki Kushina also stood up and patted Uchiha Yuzuru on the shoulder: "Can't you tell, you have a talent for naming." Uchiha Yuzuru smiled and did not answer. Anyway, Mikoto has already been cut off by him, so she doesn't need a name anymore. He has already thought about it. Mikoto's next child will be called Sasuke, Kushina's child will be named Naruto, and if she marries Garaura in the future, her child will be called Gaara. Uchiha Sasuke, Uchiha Naruto, Uchiha Gaara... I don't even know how to choose a name, but I still use the original name, which is too poisonous.

So far, it's to my liking. I really like this kind of stronger protagonist. I definitely won't be able to do that in my real life. I feel aggrieved just reading a novel, so that won't work.

The writing is very good. The author gradually makes the deformed Naruto world conform to normal people's cognition. How can powerful ninjas surrender to ordinary daimyo? With strong national power, they should unify the ninja world. How can they keep making five major countries and several small countries? But it may be the relationship between Naruto and humanities. It feels that it is more suitable for the protagonist to rule Konoha first and then unify the ninja world. It may be more satisfying. However, this book breaks out of the Naruto framework and has its own ideas. It is still very good. I hope the author will work hard and update [Like]

After watching Tsunade Runs Away Uchihahiko, I seem to have lost my appetite, and I feel like there are no good fanfics for Tomato, although the ending is a bit hasty and unsatisfactory. This book is quite average. The main character is a little too good, and the gouge marks are a bit awkward. The character portrayal could actually be improved a bit to make it less blunt. For example, all the reasons for the family's relocation and the group's reactions are actually unreasonable. There is a lack of foreshadowing. The main character is overly forceful, which makes him feel more self-righteous. It's not too bad. After reading it for a few hours, it's okay. It may be due to my personal taste. Yan is also domineering, even more domineering than this. He is petty and vindictive, but it feels that the editing is more rounded and less abrupt. Of course, this is not to say that this book is not good. Overall, it is okay. Four stars encourage it. Great support, author. I look forward to further improvement in your writing skills and your next great work.