Dragon Tribe: Swallow the Bronze and Fire King's Authority at the Beginning

It looks good. I like the shrimps, they are sweet. I like Xiami, I want more Xiami plots

To be fair, it's not bad. The emotional line is okay, but the writing style is... Average, at least not very good. There's no big problem with the plot, it's just... Is it too fast? Just in the first ten chapters, I killed a few dragon kings. Also, the author likes to use parentheses, and puts some psychological descriptions in the parentheses. This is a personal writing habit, and it is not a big problem, although it looks awkward to me... It might be better if the "he wants" in front of some parentheses is deleted, right? When I see "xx think", I feel like I am reading a student's composition... Well, the number of words in a single chapter is uneven, ranging from 1,100 to 3,000. Is the change a bit too big? Finally, the author should write better as he writes, and don't have too few words. I like Natsumi and Eriki the most [smile]!

I'm not reading fan fiction, I'm just reading a new novel (I've given up on connecting with the original novel, and now I'm just reading a book with a similar setting [face covering])

This is the first book I have read that has the highest starting point under the original power structure of the Dragon Clan. I only read the first one and found it quite interesting.

This is a book that should have been finished long ago, but the author has to write about the content of the heavens in the future. It is a pity for such a good fan.

It's quite interesting and looks very comfortable.

Not bad, as the author said, there are a lot of emotional scenes. I picked out the ones other than the emotional scenes and looked at them. The setting is pretty good.

It's pretty good, the emotional scenes are well written, the logic is smooth, the protagonist's abilities and the plot are well balanced, and the heroine's previous plots are also good.

This year! As long as the shit isn't too poisonous, it's good! And don't stop updating! What else do you need for a free bicycle!

The emotional scene with Xia Mi was described quite well. The plot content is average, and some places are the same as those run by AI. Write more sweet daily life Come on

Good luck to the author!

Nice. Very nice/

It looks good, it would be better if you write more daily posts [Love] The only thing I don't like is the other time-travelers.

It's really good. At least in my opinion, it's really good. There's nothing poisonous about it. It's really sweet.

Not bad, I feel Not as bad as the comment section says

The emotional scene is really good, very sweet Come on! ! ! !

Very awesome.

Please support me, author.

It's very well written, keep it up

It's too white. Come on, author. There are more or less traces of AI. During the conversation with Xia Mi, the three words "huge", "sour" and "touching" appeared repeatedly.

Good, good, good, good

Yes, that's great too

I love watching it. It has many female protagonists, right?

If your score is lowered, you can pursue it with confidence. Very nice, very beautiful, come on!

On the one hand, the protagonist is very comfortable with decision-making; On the other hand, there is the protagonist's youthfulness towards feelings. The contradiction between the combination of the two can only be said to be okay.

It's okay, but how can it directly become a sky-covering one?

No matter what, Miss Xia Mi is the best in the world [sending my heart] [crying]

The emotional line is good. I just saw Shani's part and it's still very good.

So far it's okay, but I feel like the combat power has increased a bit too fast. I feel like the author didn't intend to write too much

It's very interesting to read, the author's writing is good