One Piece: the King of the World and His Army of Beauties

It is very real, and there are not many behaviors that other time travelers take for granted. Belongs to respecting the fate of others. Although he has a double standard, he admits that he is a double standard. This is the reality. There are really few people who can betray their own class. This is taken for granted. In fact, it's basically three days of heat. On the first day I was a superman, and on the second day I was a citizen of the motherland. On the third day, I don't eat beef

The rhythm is very good. He is the kind of Tianlong I need. He knows what he wants and has power. His strength is slowly and steadily improving. Okay, it's really to my liking. Your writing style is very good. Even if you don't write about the Celestial Dragons, it's still good to write a story about gods and heroes. The main theme is leisurely enjoyment, collecting beauties, and cultivating them, hehe (ºº )

I like this setting very much. It's interesting. The protagonist also has a brain. Usopp's mother, even that long-nosed woman will be accepted. This is too poisonous. Have you never seen a woman?

It's not toxic at the moment, but the author has never dared to destroy the original plot and has always wanted to keep it as it is.

Did the author cut the world government too hard? According to what the author wrote before, at least the Four Emperors, the Revolutionary Army, the Navy, and a special race can fight against the World Government. Now the Revolutionary Army alone is enough, which is still not fully developed. You wrote in Chapter 26 that at least so many people can fight against the world government, but now the world government is just like this?

But the previous ones were relatively dull. They were basically about developing a supporting female character in One Piece. What was more interesting was the plot of Shanks being chased by a group of Celestial Dragons to become a pirate. The protagonist is a true double standard, but he admits that he has double standards and is not pretentious, which is rare.

Full marks! He has his own understanding of the power system and social logic of the pirate world, and he does not follow the fixed template plot in writing. Therefore, although reading refreshing articles does not require brainpower, the author's own social experience and life insights will make the work more comfortable. Water comes and goes and it becomes a nanny article [awkward laugh]

I think it's pretty good First of all, the protagonist has planned the "main plot" from the beginning. And then execute it unswervingly The purpose is clear, the killing is decisive, and there is no distinction between good guys and villains. "The Holy Mother's heart is overflowing", "Kneeling and licking the protagonist group", etc. There are two best things about it. The Tianlong people start the game by maintaining the necessary appearance on the surface and being themselves in private. Then just accept the one you like. Even if you can't get along, just tie it up. The melon is not sweet, it just quenches your thirst. The main thing is respect, but don't care. The disadvantage is that the progress is too fast. If I write 500 chapters, I will probably be almost finished.

You have to keep working hard and add more of your own content. Don't always write about things in the original work that most people know. Write more about the development of the protagonist. There are currently 55 chapters. I've finished reading them. Most of them are things that are already in the original work. To be honest, it's just a rewrite of the previous plot. Add more of your own content. How can Oda write a fan like that? Otherwise, it would be no different from watching the original work.

It is a rare daily article in One Piece. The author is also very good at finding troubles and causing troubles at every turn. He has done many big jobs. One time he played the pirate game, a Celestial Dragon died. This place has bad reviews. The protagonist is awake and knows those people who can be his subordinates. Perona and the others seemed to be of age, and they were still like children. There is also the flaw that the protagonist has no children. When I think about it, I feel that it is not a big or small poison. It is okay to leave it alone after the child is born. There are also marriages and other things. No matter how I approach this aspect, it seems inappropriate. There is also a small problem with the timeline. It is before Ace goes to sea. How long it will be until Ace goes to sea is also a question. Sabo normally went to sea a few months before Ace, and Luffy went to sea less than three years after Ace. The problem is that Saab has already gone to sea, and there is no news of Ace going to sea. Also, the protagonist forgot to abduct Maginot and Uta and just go about the daily life normally. The finale is nothing more than Luffy defeating Im and the protagonist just picking up the leak. Thinking about the ending is actually meaningless. It is better to go through the daily story normally, and then do things, such as taking Blackbeard's Darkness Fruit and using the flesh of the cow, horse, and alpaca fruit to make a fake Darkness Fruit for Blackbeard to eat. Then the protagonist travels back to the past once, or to a parallel world, and fights the Valley of Gods once, and Qiao Yibuyi once. After the plot started, the world became excited, and all the random speculations were published in the newspapers. "Big Mom Kaido returns to Luffy's command", "Blackbeard is just a pawn", "The Straw Hats start the bond of the Ten Gods", "Aoji is Brooke's son", "Crocodar is Luffy's mother", "Vivi's mother is Garp's illegitimate daughter", "Marco is a member of Joeyboy's crew", "Loki joins the Straw Hats", "Usopp will inherit Big Bear's Meatball Fruit".

I feel good now, nothing bad. The protagonist is also quite strong, and it can be considered a good pirate novel in the Celestial Dragon that I read. If you are short of books, you can read them. I hope the author will update it soon. There are a few chapters.

[Please update] It's very beautiful. I personally feel that Ginny should have fallen long ago. Basically no one can control the life of the Celestial Dragons. If the gap is too big, it will be unbearable. [Learned] If men are good at women...

This book is not bad. It can be regarded as a normal view of ordinary people who travel to the world of pirates. It is really the nine-year compulsory education that helps the protagonist to be kind. This book has many shortcomings, but it also has advantages. The disadvantage is that it has some poisonous points but can be ignored without thinking. The advantage is that it is large and full! There is a saying that this book can kill time and at the same time, it is barely boring and can be read. Isn't the novel just for killing time? When you get tired of watching videos, just watch videos. When you get tired of watching videos, just read novels. That's it [eating melon]

Very good looking Pirate King. The protagonist transforms into a Celestial Dragon. It is written with great care and is much more beautiful than the pirate novels written without thinking. He knows how to hide his clumsiness and comes with his own system cards. You can gain talents by defeating the card characters by drawing them. [Love] Come and read and you will know, see the effect in the first three chapters It was pretty cool to dress up as the pirate Wen Tianlong. After reading dozens of chapters, I went out with my men to fish for people, and then I brought a few little girls and beautiful "slaves" back to train and cultivate relationships. There is a card drawing system to improve my strength and defeat the card characters. Already included: Mandy, Kerra, Robin and her mother, the mermaid with a new head, the ghost fruit Perona... Very healthy and slowly improving [love]

It's pretty good. Except for the cruel aspect of taking in children, the rest is pretty good. Who doesn't want to be a Dragon Man? I don't understand why I want to overthrow someone who has traveled through time and become a dragon.

It's a pretty good one among pirate novels. The protagonist secretly accumulates strength and works in a low-key manner behind the scenes. It's very to my liking! Those who give low marks should be the type of people who just see the protagonist having a harem or screwing over the original characters and then give a bad review.

The author's writing is okay. The protagonist's brain circuit is relatively normal and he won't do anything embarrassing. The plot seems to be relatively comfortable among Tomatoes.

Ada (mermaid) Stella (Superman-type Gate Fruit) Perona Nico Robin (Superman-Flower Fruit) Sweet Mandy (Princess of a non-franchised country of the Kingdom of Wobbondin) (Natural Department·Frozen Fruit) Kerra (natural type·shining fruit) Nicole Olvia Scarlet Kozuki Hiyori Tianyueshi (Superman type·Time Fruit) Boya Hancock Marigold Ginny Khalifa alpha

It's not particularly good, but it's better than most pirate books. The combat power of the navy and the government is too weak. A naval admiral would actually lose to Jinbe + a person with the Encourage Fruit ability and a group of minions. There is also a big poisonous point. I don't want to ruin the plot because I'm afraid it will affect Luffy's combat power. Some people may like this point, but it will definitely turn away a large number of people.

It's a very good Tianlong humanities. For me, the only flaw is that at the beginning, it was based on the plot and wanted to benefit from it, but then turned around and planned to destroy the revolutionary army. Generally speaking, recruiting women to dismantle CPs is fine, but for many important NPCs to go offline like this, it is equivalent to cutting off a lot of expected plot lines.

Yes, as far as I'm concerned, there's nothing poisonous about it. Daily life is a bit much, I hope to see more exciting content in the future. Come on. [Learned]

IQ Online, this book is currently the best among all the Draco series.

Good looking, very good looking Tianlong Humanities I hope to get a better devil fruit It's better to get a Western dragon fantasy beast species

Why does the protagonist hit Im? There is no conflict of interest between Im and the protagonist, right? The identity of being a Celestial Dragon should bring benefits to the protagonist.

It's okay. There are too many daily routines in the front, so I might find it boring. I think it's a pity that Rayleigh is obsessed with the protagonist group. The two generals (Kizaru has not been promoted to general at this time) and Eniro Lafayette paddled all night. Damn, this is too dedicated.

It is very compatible with the character of modern people who become Celestial Dragons. They will not deliberately do evil, but they will not be soft-hearted and pretend to be great warriors. However, the combat power of the maids was a bit low. After training for so long, only two of them were close to the general's combat power, and the rest were just a bunch of vases.

There's nothing poisonous about it, but there are 1,000 Hamlets for 1,000 readers, and everyone's tolerance is different. Anyway, I think it's okay, but it may be that I've eaten too much and my resistance is relatively high [laughter]

Invincible casual flow, I quite like this kind, just relax and write more about daily life with the heroines, but One Piece is not suitable for this genre. Pirates may feel more passionate, such as the two books of Lao Ma, but unfortunately one is discontinued and the other is gone. Naruto may be suitable for this casual flow, just add a little bit of fighting to show the combat power. One Piece still needs to fight more, as long as it is not mind-numbing.

It's very good. It's my first time reading a Pirates fanfic, and this one is really good. After reading this book, I feel that it is a bit boring to read other pirate fandoms with huge differences, but the updates are a bit slow. I recommend the author to work hard!

It's a story about how many girls come together, it's pretty good, the protagonist is very sober and the way she does things is acceptable. It's not bad to cultivate your own women using the hooks given by the system. I just wonder why I need to eat a vampire fruit to add an obvious weakness to myself when I can rely on the various domineering qualities and swordsmanship given by the system to be infinitely superimposed to become stronger? If the protagonist has no system and cannot become infinitely stronger, eating a devil fruit will make sense. Reading the comments, a lot of people said that giving devil fruit powers to their women is a poisonous thing, and I can't understand it.