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Time travel and become Li Minyong, the second son of the Li family in "Funny Family". Faced with his wife Shin Ji's request for divorce, Li Minyong just wanted to say: "Please don't come back!"
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Integrated world view: "Funny Family", "High kick!" A world formed by the fusion of the three trilogy "Short Leg Counterattack" and "High Kick Penetrating the Roof".
Reader comments
This is the first fan novel about a funny family. I like Xu Minjing so much. Her smile is very beautiful [Sending my heart]
Great work. I have always wanted to read a work about a funny family. This book by the author is the most memorable and touching one I have ever read. It is so good and I love reading it.
It would be good to develop the plot around school and family based on the original plot. The insertion of the heroine's plot in the middle seems a bit abrupt. If you want to improve the original plot, it is recommended to complete it through short memories after the heroine moves in.
The original part I want to see is about the two levels of family and school (when I watched the drama, it was mainly funny plots on these two levels). I feel that the description of Soonjae Junha's family members can be fleshed out. I am worried that the current development of the plot will be too fast and the trilogy will be over in 200 chapters.
If possible, including the career line that the author wants to write about, like the stock trading part, let's increase the linkage with the characters of family or school.
I will continue to support the author, come on [Like]
ps: If you want to see more female protagonists, please accept Mr. Xu and Ms. Sleepy [laughing]
How should I put it? The number of words in this novel is too few, some plots are not very smooth, there are too many characters, and the author seems to be unable to arrange the pictures reasonably.
However, despite its faults, this novel is still very interesting. The lines given to Mad Dog Teacher are just like him. Keep up the good work, update more, and give him a five-star encouragement.
It's rare to write about a funny family, come on,
Out of 10 points, I would give it a 9 now. ✅The writing is good, especially the description of Hae Mi-related events/the analysis of Soon Jae's character are very close to the original work.
✅The plot is good, there is a lot of original content, there are many characters, and it integrates female characters from many works. But at present, there are relatively few stories about the daily life of a family, and most of them describe people's courageous entrepreneurship and daily social life. The story of Hae Mi and Min Yong is very interesting.
After reading the author's comments several times, I feel that the author has great ideas. I look forward to the follow-up daily life!
❌I'm not sure about the author's subsequent creative ideas. If it's a single female protagonist, Se Kyung, as in the introduction, then the male protagonist will be Kim Ji-won (multiple lines of detective reasoning and ambiguous relationship)/Minjing (teasing others and not clear about the house) /Shen Ji (who clearly broke the house and got divorced quickly but still gave the money to Shin Ji and took on the debt himself) has a feeling that she doesn't want to do anything but has become ambiguous and hasn't done anything well... I hope the emotional line will be clearer in the future.
❌The male protagonist's entrepreneurial line is a bit confusing, saying he has no money, but he has been starting a business for a long time and has achieved results, which also allowed Shijing to appear smoothly. Speaking of being rich, the male protagonist still lives in the attic, or when the attic is occupied by Shi Jing and he has no place to live, his first thought is to move back to the wedding house and share it with Teacher Xu... He also failed to buy a house to pay off the debt.
I hope the author can write well, I like it very much
I saw Chapter 8. The writing is perfect and the logic is online.
It is said that there is a thunder in Chapter 18, and there will be an inexplicable detective plot in the follow-up.
But in short, in the first 8 chapters alone, the author is definitely not a novice, and has become proficient in writing and rhythm. Is it unimaginable that this book has such low ratings and popularity? ? ?
Is there a portal for new books?
Up to the latest 97 chapters.
Chapter 18 Thunderstorm? ? The author uses the phone's tone to over-tell the plot, which is done occasionally and creatively. Extra points
24-28, 55-65 detective plot. 16 Chapters of subplots, well written, does not mean accepted. Officer Li is the only true god.
Choose one of the maximum poison points.
The title can be completely weird (the IP of the funny family is not very popular, and it is too straightforward), such as "Although the Korean drama is funny, it still wants to break through the universe: The Smecta of the Lee Family"
Come on, rare fan
It's rare for anyone to write this, please come on, author
The writing is quite beautiful. And there are very few of this kind of subject matter. The author is very attentive.
It's rare to write about a funny family
Very well written, come on come on come on come on come on come on come on
The character design is currently very consistent with the original work. I am optimistic about the author.
The writing is quite good and very in line with the taste. The ending would be perfect if it were a harem or an IF line.
Come on, author, don't be a eunuch.
You can also learn something about Korean society by reading the article, which is quite good [Like]
Very consistent with the original work
Not bad, but there are a lot of extra chapters
Keep writing, it's really rare to see this TV series
It's rare to see a novel about a funny family, especially now that it's almost 20 years old.
It's rare to find a good-looking book about a family
I think it's well written and I hope the author can stick with it.
Very good, I like it, I hope I can continue to finish it, I will earn gold coins to give you gifts
It's not as brainless as some books, and some of the author's own ideas look pretty good [like]
This is so awesome, finally a fanfic about a funny family. I have always loved watching funny families.
The writing is first-rate, the writing is warm and touching, and it looks very touching. It's just that the main plot is a bit messy, always interspersed with personal biographies, which makes it particularly distracting. Come on!
[Face covering] This is a real practice! I read it in 25 years, 100 chapters at the end of June 26, come on! If you don't cut it, you are a good comrade✊
This is the first fan novel about a funny family. I like Xu Minjing so much. Her smile is very beautiful [Sending my heart]
Great work. I have always wanted to read a work about a funny family. This book by the author is the most memorable and touching one I have ever read. It is so good and I love reading it. It would be good to develop the plot around school and family based on the original plot. The insertion of the heroine's plot in the middle seems a bit abrupt. If you want to improve the original plot, it is recommended to complete it through short memories after the heroine moves in. The original part I want to see is about the two levels of family and school (when I watched the drama, it was mainly funny plots on these two levels). I feel that the description of Soonjae Junha's family members can be fleshed out. I am worried that the current development of the plot will be too fast and the trilogy will be over in 200 chapters. If possible, including the career line that the author wants to write about, like the stock trading part, let's increase the linkage with the characters of family or school. I will continue to support the author, come on [Like] ps: If you want to see more female protagonists, please accept Mr. Xu and Ms. Sleepy [laughing]
How should I put it? The number of words in this novel is too few, some plots are not very smooth, there are too many characters, and the author seems to be unable to arrange the pictures reasonably. However, despite its faults, this novel is still very interesting. The lines given to Mad Dog Teacher are just like him. Keep up the good work, update more, and give him a five-star encouragement.
It's rare to write about a funny family, come on,
Out of 10 points, I would give it a 9 now. ✅The writing is good, especially the description of Hae Mi-related events/the analysis of Soon Jae's character are very close to the original work. ✅The plot is good, there is a lot of original content, there are many characters, and it integrates female characters from many works. But at present, there are relatively few stories about the daily life of a family, and most of them describe people's courageous entrepreneurship and daily social life. The story of Hae Mi and Min Yong is very interesting. After reading the author's comments several times, I feel that the author has great ideas. I look forward to the follow-up daily life! ❌I'm not sure about the author's subsequent creative ideas. If it's a single female protagonist, Se Kyung, as in the introduction, then the male protagonist will be Kim Ji-won (multiple lines of detective reasoning and ambiguous relationship)/Minjing (teasing others and not clear about the house) /Shen Ji (who clearly broke the house and got divorced quickly but still gave the money to Shin Ji and took on the debt himself) has a feeling that she doesn't want to do anything but has become ambiguous and hasn't done anything well... I hope the emotional line will be clearer in the future. ❌The male protagonist's entrepreneurial line is a bit confusing, saying he has no money, but he has been starting a business for a long time and has achieved results, which also allowed Shijing to appear smoothly. Speaking of being rich, the male protagonist still lives in the attic, or when the attic is occupied by Shi Jing and he has no place to live, his first thought is to move back to the wedding house and share it with Teacher Xu... He also failed to buy a house to pay off the debt.
I hope the author can write well, I like it very much
I saw Chapter 8. The writing is perfect and the logic is online. It is said that there is a thunder in Chapter 18, and there will be an inexplicable detective plot in the follow-up. But in short, in the first 8 chapters alone, the author is definitely not a novice, and has become proficient in writing and rhythm. Is it unimaginable that this book has such low ratings and popularity? ? ? Is there a portal for new books? Up to the latest 97 chapters. Chapter 18 Thunderstorm? ? The author uses the phone's tone to over-tell the plot, which is done occasionally and creatively. Extra points 24-28, 55-65 detective plot. 16 Chapters of subplots, well written, does not mean accepted. Officer Li is the only true god. Choose one of the maximum poison points. The title can be completely weird (the IP of the funny family is not very popular, and it is too straightforward), such as "Although the Korean drama is funny, it still wants to break through the universe: The Smecta of the Lee Family"
Come on, rare fan
It's rare for anyone to write this, please come on, author
The writing is quite beautiful. And there are very few of this kind of subject matter. The author is very attentive.
It's rare to write about a funny family
Very well written, come on come on come on come on come on come on come on
The character design is currently very consistent with the original work. I am optimistic about the author.
The writing is quite good and very in line with the taste. The ending would be perfect if it were a harem or an IF line.
Come on, author, don't be a eunuch.
You can also learn something about Korean society by reading the article, which is quite good [Like]
Very consistent with the original work
Not bad, but there are a lot of extra chapters
Keep writing, it's really rare to see this TV series
It's rare to see a novel about a funny family, especially now that it's almost 20 years old.
It's rare to find a good-looking book about a family
I think it's well written and I hope the author can stick with it.
Very good, I like it, I hope I can continue to finish it, I will earn gold coins to give you gifts
It's not as brainless as some books, and some of the author's own ideas look pretty good [like]
This is so awesome, finally a fanfic about a funny family. I have always loved watching funny families.
The writing is first-rate, the writing is warm and touching, and it looks very touching. It's just that the main plot is a bit messy, always interspersed with personal biographies, which makes it particularly distracting. Come on!
[Face covering] This is a real practice! I read it in 25 years, 100 chapters at the end of June 26, come on! If you don't cut it, you are a good comrade✊