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The author's writing is so good [laughs] Congratulations on adding another excellent book to the girls' small class book section🥳

The setting is clear and the emotions are okay. The main thing is that after Wada Xiaoban's main plot and love, there is a parallel world. Tian Xiaoban's lover (protagonist) dies to pave the way for the Shura field later. The protagonist's ambition is not bad. If you don't watch it carefully, it is easy to feel separated (you can't recognize the main world and the parallel world), but it actually does not affect the viewing experience (mainly because this series is very small, and it is rarely written so well)

I have just read nine chapters, and I can only say that the writing is pretty good. Although the author's early plot went by a bit fast, resulting in some details not being dealt with properly, but with so many chapters, the pace is relatively brisk, and the character of the protagonist is described in detail. The protagonist is a gentle person, not a particularly kind or evil person, a calm and gentle person, maybe a little troublesome? Generally speaking, it's pretty good. I hope the author will keep up the good work and update 100,000 copies as soon as possible.

Oh, my dear author, I think I need to remind you that we need an if line story. Maybe 23 can be added to the main line. I think I will look forward to the Shura Field in the future. Believe me, it will be very interesting. ——Your dear readers What a pity [crying]

A very good author will organize some settings into a chapter. Currently, some small swords and some heart-warming plots are also very good, and the swords are just right, but there is a bit of incompleteness in the swords. The chapters are separated and the reading is incomplete. The current 23 should not be better. It is a book with great potential. I just re-watched Extra 23 and it seems a bit connected.

It's quite interesting and the characters are logical.

I wonder if it's a single heroine? Can you give me some candy?

The author writes very well, even though the topic is a bit niche, but the writing is really nothing to say. It is better than some authors from Qidian. It is not a simple sexual transformation but has its own setting. Moreover, it has more than 50 chapters and 220,000 words, paying tribute to the legendary code word king.

You have to read your own book

Okay, multiple heroines?

I have to give this five stars.

Good, good, good

Not enough, not enough.

[Cool] It's interesting, the most powerful Pretty Cure doesn't write about light beauty? StarCraft is very good. If the protagonist has the conditions to become stronger, it is better to become stronger first.

This is so beautiful, there's no other way to say it, it's really good

It's okay, but you can add a "self-introduction" when the character appears. For example, Dr. Zhiwu's appearance is quite abrupt. You can add a self-introduction to connect it and make it more consistent with the original work.

The fuck is super, super, super good, I must write it down.

I personally like it very much, so is there Long Huiqiao in the back of Interstellar?

Yes, but in fact, the small class with a bad ending can use X Superman to find a way to turn it into a good ending.

It looks good and tastes good. Where is the author?

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

How long do you plan to write this book? [Cry]

Really good, I like it

Actually, I didn't want to watch it at first, but then it became really delicious.

It's a pity that I have to start over with another one

There are really not many books in ban10.

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha ok

It must be finished!

It's beautiful, but the emotional line feels a bit too fast.

Although I know only a little about some of the things in this book, and have even never heard of some, I find it very interesting.