Chiqingxianmen

It's very well written. It's a masterpiece among the leaders in Tomato. The only problem is that Qi Ye should not be written to death. It would be better to kill someone else. You have portrayed Qi Ye very well in the past, but you wrote him to death just after moving here. The readers can't accept it, and it doesn't feel too sad. I suggest that only a few dozen chapters have been changed.

The plot is reasonable, the progress is moderate, it is not a brainless novel, the foreshadowing and opportunities are well arranged, the wording and narrative method are unconventional and fascinating. It is one of my goals to update every day. Unfortunately, it shows that the update is discontinued today.

Join the mortal flow that feels good! The plot looks good so far! It depends on the rules of integration or not later! The old demon king Mazi of Han has two of the top ten laws, but the author still arranges one for the protagonist.

Not bad, you can watch it

The writing of this book is quite reasonable. It is better than the ordinary time travel and monster-fighting upgrades, as well as those with masters and powerful golden fingers. However, the updates are too slow. Most of these slow updates will end up being unfinished.

The path of power development is very good. There are no major disadvantages, but the data is relatively weak. I look forward to subsequent updates.

The type of Cultivation Leader's Path looks good so far. It's rare to see this style here. There is no need for Nangong Yun to die

Really nice. Support it.

The writing can still be read

Beautiful, no need to say more

Good-looking, good-looking, I love watching it

It's okay, no big shortcomings

The writing is quite good.

Good looking, speed up the update

The protagonist has the resources of the entire sect, so hurry up and improve your cultivation. I'm afraid you won't have anyone to stop updating later.

If the leader's strength wants to improve a little faster, he can't keep pushing the level; he can't go too far beyond his level. Come on💪

I think it's okay, I hope I can keep writing (Idiot's dream)

It has the flavor of Zhangmen Road, not bad, not bad

The beginning is very good, I hope the author doesn't finish it badly

Come on, author, the writing is very good, although the data is not very good at the beginning, it seems that there is only one push after reaching one million words.

Good book, it is indeed the same as Zhang Menglu, but it is a good imitation [Like]

It's very interesting, the story is not cliche, the pace is slow, and the description is very good

Good looking, one of the few sects

The writing is more logical and worth reading.

I like it very much. It feels like the kind of immortality I imagined. It is not just a simple novel. The plot is smooth and the characters are very complete! Recommend! ! !

It's wonderfully written, not a brainless piece of writing.

The writing style is sophisticated and has the feeling of watching the master's path back in the day.

Although I borrowed a lot from it, it was still quite comfortable to read.

Very beautiful, perfectly in line with my fantasies about this genre of writing. Highly recommended.

Clear and logical. Delicate description. Recommend