The Untold History of the Three Kingdoms: I Stole Lu Bu Away to Be My Husband

It's obviously a novice's work and has flaws that can be ignored but the problems still need to be pointed out. First of all, the plot connection and twists are not smooth enough, and are a bit stiff, which is understandable and harmless. It is a bit subtle to read, but the pace is a bit fast, so it won't take long to write. Furthermore, the issue of timeline is understandable considering the overhead effeminacy and so on. Finally, regarding the problem of the characters, I feel that they are a bit too group-like and there is no focus on characterization, but this may be because the style is too narrative. It reads a bit like reading a comic. Yes, it has a feeling of the Three Kingdoms, which is a bit of a bonus for me, but group characters are difficult to grasp. Overall, it's a very good book for a newcomer. It's a bit refreshing considering the current market situation. If I rate it strictly on a 10-point scale, it's 7.3 In my case. What I say is not a criticism. I'm just pointing out the bad things that can be corrected. This way, I can more easily express the author's true inner world. So, come on. You can also think more carefully about the introduction to make it more attractive @Di Xiaoling sir

It's okay, relatively good. The ancients were very superstitious. After the protagonist made the Han three times, the Han people in this world will only use the name of "Han" to rebel in the future. No matter what they are, the Later Han, the New Han, the Ming Han, or the Tang Han. In short, they can't live without the Han.

There is an indescribable strange feeling [Thinking] Maybe I am not used to reading this kind of writing. This kind of writing seems to be called narrative writing, which is probably what it is. I am not used to it, but I think it is generally good. I give it four stars! [Understood]

A masterpiece, a rare masterpiece, and a "Dong Zhuo" perspective that has never been written before. Facing the coalition forces, I knew it could be written like this, but how to integrate it with correct values ​​​​but this book did it. There are many thought-provoking words in the book. I am looking forward to the follow-up, but... The path of the Nianghua Three Kingdoms has been blocked by heaven. I don't know how long this book will last. I hope the author can establish a book group early to plan in advance.

The author's writing is good and it is very comfortable to read. Although some of the time and gender of the characters have been changed, the logic is not consistent and it does not affect the character creation. Overall, it is good and can be watched.

Not my buddy. What happened? Why was it removed from the shelves? [What]

Is there still a chance to re-list @Di Xiaoling @digxiaoling Please, I must put it on the shelves again [crying]

It's okay, but the protagonist is too kind. This is a novel. If it were more realistic, the protagonist would die. If the enemy would take advantage of the protagonist's shortcomings, the protagonist might be stolen.

What a great book, why has it been removed from the shelves? [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

But why did I die after not reading a few chapters [face covering] Did I write my real name again?