[Not a 2077 fanfic; original setting; not a power fantasy]
Li Yu is a young man at the fringes of society. He graduated straight into unemployment and is saddled with an astronomical 500,000 yuan in student loans.
With the repayment deadline looming, a countdown to his organ auction is already ticking away inside the cheap chip implanted in his brain.
With nowhere else to turn, he accepts the "kind offer" of Uncle Wang, an old comrade of his father's, and joins Guangsha Group, one of the Ten Giants, as an honorable... security guard.
A monthly salary of 3,000 yuan, with 500,000 yuan in debt.
No matter how Li Yu does the math, he can't see himself paying it off in this lifetime.
The novel is currently about a third of the way through, probably, but I don't rule out the possibility that it will end quickly if my mind is exhausted. The following are some of my reflections and comments on my work. How should I put it? When I first started writing, I just wrote a story about a small character struggling to survive. As I progressed, I started to fill in all kinds of fantastic ideas. Cyberpunk is a compound word. Cyber describes life, while punk represents attitude, a representation of high-tech and low-life. Many friends know this from games, movies and other works, and of course I am the same. But there are some things that I think should remain unchanged, such as kindness, love, and the meaning of existence. As the number of readers increased, many people began to criticize the plot issues in Chapter 22. They bluntly said that the protagonist's behavior of saving innocent consciousness was poisonous and did not comply with the rules of cyber society. Indeed, I may not have thought thoroughly enough at the beginning. It is difficult to call it a good thing to risk my own life or even the lives of others for the sake of a nascent consciousness. Therefore, I modified the original text into an impulsive speech by the protagonist, and the specific execution was completed by Lao Wang, who was deeply tortured by his heart, and a hacker who flouted the rules, in order to achieve a balance between the context and the context. But if I ask myself, I don't think there is anything wrong with the character development of the protagonist. When you see a blank, scared soul that may disappear in front of you, don't you have any impulse to protect yourself? Even if you know that your idea will not be realized, you don't even bother to think about the possibility. Then all I can say is, just be happy. The original meaning of cybernetics is cybernetics. The company controls everything, and the bottom class is always the target of oppression. The story would be pointless if the main character were an insensitive, selfish person. A passive character who can only survive at the beginning gradually grows up and rewrites the sick social rules. This is a portrayal of the punk spirit, isn't it? This is not a cool article. The protagonist will not suddenly become overwhelming after a certain mutation, rewrite the order, and destroy the root causes of society's morbidity. I hope that every adventure and every growth of the character can be traced. I want readers to be able to follow my character on his adventures and see for themselves how he changes and becomes the person he is destined to become. Here are some spoilers: later stories may involve time loops, mythical realities, saving lovers, and... The protagonist's protective desire for Lin Yi is not purely kind, but a love that travels through time and space. With that said, thank you to all readers, whether you like this work or not, I will continue to work hard to create my own stories, hoping that it can bring a little happiness to your leisure time. Still the same sentence. If you like reading, I will continue writing.
Although I can't relate to the protagonist's way of thinking, the plot is reasonable purely based on the character. Although it's a bit uncomfortable to read a science fiction novel without seeing various product line iterations, but the author has worked very hard. There are many things that are not explained in the article. This technique can make the reader's experience closer to the protagonist, but this technique is difficult to write well. For details, you can refer to K. J. Parker's Scavenger Trilogy, which uses this narrative technique to piece together a complete world view ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
I read this book in one sitting, although there were many problems. Character behavior and personality often don't match up, and character choices sometimes lack sufficient logical support (for example, the protagonist is always very stubborn as a bottom, and then suddenly becomes crazy, with almost no growth process in between); although the subject matter is labeled as cyberpunk, when going to space in the middle, it becomes space science fiction, and the "dragon" setting feels a bit like a "sci-fi fairy tale" like swallowing the stars. The style is slightly fragmented, and the cyberpunk atmosphere is not stable. It is interesting in the beginning, but weakens a lot in the middle. But even so, the advantages are still outstanding: the plot has a tight rhythm; the characters have distinctive personalities, a bit JRPG It feels like "cadres of evil forces appear one by one" (I dream back to the feeling of playing "Trajectory" back then); the setting is also relatively full, and it seems that it has been well outlined. Although the character logic has some problems, the story development itself is still quite rigorous, and there are quite a few explosive points for old bookworms; the scene description is delicate, and the visual sense and sense of substitution are good; the Thousand Faces Technology of the Earth Chapter and other settings bring back the cyber flavor, and the descriptions of some daily applications in the future are also quite inspiring. Overall, the flaws do not hide the flaws, and it is still a very good-looking work. I look forward to the subsequent plot development [Thoughts].
It's okay, and the poison points are okay. The protagonist is currently just on the side of the road, with little growth. I'll wait for the author to gradually strengthen it later. In order to highlight the passion of close combat, the power of technological weapons is a bit harsh, and I can also add some combat links. There are just a few people, so just write slowly.
It is a book with very clear distinctions between good and bad, but the 6 points must be someone who deliberately gave it a low score. Specifically, the author should have constructed a complete world view, so there is a sense of immersion, and the writing style should be good and can be expressed clearly. The bad points are also clear. The author seems to lack experience in dealing with key nodes. In fact, the awakening of the infant-like underlying consciousness is a great point of conflict. To save or not to save, saving represents the human nature that has not been extinguished, and not saving represents protecting oneself. Both parties are right, but there is a conflict, so what should be done? The image of the protagonist can be quickly established here. The author wrote a bit too fast here, which I personally think is a pity. But it does not affect the quality of the current book. It is very good. Good luck to the author.
It is completely in line with my understanding of online literature. The plot is coherent and the protagonist's growth is not abrupt. Science fiction and cyberpunk complement each other, and there are some episodes from macro to micro. Even if the online text needs to be very long, it would be good to publish a shorter physical book.
After reading Chapter 51, the protagonist has an obvious problem, that is, he cannot communicate. (Perhaps there will be a plot to educate the heroine in the follow-up?) Of course, as a God's perspective, the reader may not understand the protagonist's "hesitation" Maybe it's because he has no experience, or maybe he's avoiding responsibility. Anyway, the communication between him and the heroine is very difficult, and he hides it. This reminds me of a series of tragedies caused by insufficient communication. Just like some of the unhelpful events in some TV series and anime. Both are caused by poor communication. The heroine has no knowledge and is actually just a "baby" with simple cognition. Normally, a large part of the meaning of her life is "facing the protagonist". Of course this is a way to advance the plot, but every time I see the plot being advanced in this way, I feel uncomfortable. Why? It aggravates reading fatigue too much - as an old bookworm, I know the prerequisites of many plots at a glance, and I can't settle down because I read online articles. I feel an instinctive disgust for this kind of plot that is bound to "fall". But reason tells me that this novel may really be worth reading, as long as the protagonist becomes more and more "smarter," more and more "mature," and more and more "sophisticated."
The biggest advantage of this article is that it is very new and never sticks to one territory. The rhythm is very tight. The disadvantage is that it is too information-based. Everyone knows the identity of the protagonist. He is in contact with the boss every day. The identity is too high. Not having a combat power system is a bit of a failure
The subject matter is very good, and the writing is also very good. It is not like other books with the same theme that always eat books or water stories. The three views of the protagonist are very similar to mine. There is no more than the heart, and the character is not deliberately created to be decisive. However, there are some descriptions of weapons such as prosthetics, biochemical transformation, battleships, and auxiliary technology in the later period. The social background is set to be the top ten companies, but there is no feeling of dealing with the top ten companies. Although the setting of the top ten companies is to rule the society, it lacks the feeling of ruling influence.
Very excellent work, the best of its kind I have seen in 2 months It's getting bad. The author wrote that it's high.