Holding the Ten Thousand Souls Banner, I Was Kicked into the Comic Book World

I've read Chapter 25, and it's okay. Earlier, I thought that the protagonist would only be strict with Biqigu and be submissive to women. The group behind them kicked their noses and faces, but the protagonist suppressed them with a backhand. Very good! Although the feedback from the people on the other side was not very strong, it was still okay. [Eat melon]

Give some thoughts on your own writing, and also list some demining points. This book is the product of my "self-rescue from book shortage". I thought that I couldn't find a book that I could read, so I simply started writing it myself and wrote a story about a powerful immortal cultivator who went to explore the world. I sent him to see those familiar scenery and characters, which brought some new possibilities. This is why some people say that in my first few chapters, the protagonist is like the grandfather in the ring. I originally wanted to write the feeling of a unit drama, but the focus of the narrative deviated in the early stages... This is indeed a problem of my lack of writing skills and experience, and I am sincerely sorry. Many thanks also to early readers for their corrections! I have slightly modified the relevant content. If there are still deficiencies, please point them out again. Thank you very much! I believe that all readers are like me, hoping to see a strong, logical, and characterful protagonist tell his own story in the comic book world, and to meet and get to know characters who are full of charm and realistically fit the personality, bringing some new feelings and connections, rather than simply repeating old stories. So most of the future plots will not be old stories. This is my first time to create seriously. From thinking that I would write on a standalone computer to receiving some follow-up updates, comments and even rewards, this experience is extremely novel and warm, which gives me great motivation. Thank you! Finally, as a new writer who loves to read novels, I know that there are still many shortcomings, and I hope you can bear with me. It would be an honor for me to receive your corrections, and I will make modifications at any time based on your feedback. Gale Jade would like to thank everyone! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Demining again: 1. There are multiple female protagonists, and the emotional line is long and slow-burning. 2. Plot style, don't pursue brainless slap-in-the-face pretense. Pay attention to story logic and character design. 3. Narrative perspective, micro-group portrait. The protagonist is the core, but sometimes the perspective of the supporting character is described for the sake of rhythm or plot. 4. The protagonist is powerful but "chaotic and kind". People who are not saints do not take everything lightly and have their own principles, emotions and shortcomings. He is a monk, not a model god. 5. World setting, daily comprehensive comics in the early stage, and a more grand and diverse world view will be gradually unlocked and integrated in the later stage. 6. The setting of supporting characters. The characters in the original world have a relatively reasonable acceptance of paranormal phenomena and avoid the typical reaction of "kneeling and licking in an instant". Even if a cosmic person/future person/person from another world/a person with super powers appears and really shows his power, he will not immediately obey his orders. I hope these instructions can help you understand this book better, and I look forward to meeting you in the story! Finally, thank you all again for your every reading and support. This is my biggest motivation to continue creating! [Salute]

I know that these novels about cultivating immortals are very controversial. This is a novel. Every day, the protagonist is required to be perfect. As a strong character, the protagonist's shortcomings are all used to promote the plot. He still has a god-like temperament, which is unbelievable. This book is definitely intertwined with various types of plots. It has been a long time since the update was slow. Two updates a day can bring the plot up to date.

Ask the heroine if she has Yukino

It felt pretty good to see the end

Cool article, okay, nothing major wrong with it

Not bad, very good.

The idea is very good, the plot is also interesting, the characters are good, but not many people watch it, and the popularity is a bit low. Come on, it's one of the best among comprehensive comics.

Just flush the nuclear sewage and let the Japanese government dump it into the sacred toilet. It deserves five stars.

Okay, just the magic toilet that turns into a toilet is a masterpiece

After watching this, I really like this kind of protagonist who is both benevolent and powerful, so I gave it as a gift [laughing]

I've read Chapter 69 so far, which is okay.

It's not bad. If you don't have any books to read, you can read this and look for new books. Except that I personally like fast-paced books and the slow pace of this book doesn't seem as enjoyable as the fast-paced ones. There's no problem.

This kind of setting is very good, but the feeling is not written in the whole process [face covering]