The Sixteenth Freeze-Frame

It can indeed be read in less than half an hour, but there are some details that need to be scrutinized. It would probably take an hour to sort them all out. Sweet at first and cruel at the end, the male protagonist went from being indifferent at the beginning (for a reason!) To becoming affectionate later on, and he couldn't escape the healing that the female protagonist brought to him. A very sad couple, unable to love each other peacefully due to fate. There are some minor flaws, but for a short story, the white space is done well and is innocuous. All in all, it's still a pretty good novel. For the sake of the newcomer, I give it five stars~

It's pretty good, I finished it in about twenty minutes. For a new author, it is great that such a short story can carry so much foreshadowing and details. The characters of the male and female protagonists are also well created, and the final ending is quite touching, so I won't spoil it. Come on, author! 😆

Thank you everyone, I will continue to work hard. Give it a five-star rating, don't let your children suffer 😳

Touching, highly recommended! I read the 20,000 words in one go, the writing is better than Xiaobai's, and the ending is a bit unexpected. Support the author! It's great for a newbie to write like this 👍👍