[Reborn counterattack female protagonist VS poisonous tongue genius male protagonist]
Hua Ruoxi, a new disciple of Xuanqing Sect, no one knows that she has hidden memories of two lifetimes.
In her previous life, she was Hua Ruoxi, whom the Lingxu Sect had high hopes for, but she was betrayed by her beloved master and cherished junior brother. She had her sword bones cut out and her spiritual roots extracted just to make a wedding dress for the younger junior sister who was more talented. She died with hatred.
Opening her eyes again, time went back. She lost her innocence, participated in the sect's general election, and stepped into the Xuanqing Sect.
In this life, her goal is clear: practice to become stronger and take revenge on all betrayers.
But as soon as she started her journey of revenge, her painting style gradually went astray——
The master protected her behind him and scolded everyone: "Who dares to touch my disciples?"
The senior sister held her hand, her face full of pride: "My little Ruoxi is the most dazzling existence in the world of cultivation. If you don't accept it, come and argue!"
Several senior brothers doted on her to the heavens. Whenever someone was disrespectful to her, they drew their swords and said, "If you want to touch my junior sister, you must get through us first!"
What surprised her even more was that the young genius who had been in tit-for-tat with her frequently appeared next to her, and one time she blushed and asked, "Junior sister, are you... Interested in becoming a Taoist partner with me?"
Hua Ruoxi was stunned: How come the plot after rebirth was completely different from what she expected?
Reader comments
The writing is so messy. At the beginning, it is mentioned that the heroine and the hero are engaged, but in the introduction, the hero falls in love with the reborn heroine? ? ? What's the meaning? Does he know that is the heroine? Take a look first, this is a big thunder, I don't know what will happen next, I will change it after reading it
It's very messy, so messy. One second, the heroine is still in the black market at the foot of Zongmen Mountain. The next second, the camera switches to the heroine's best friend. This is nothing, it's just a transition. But the next chapter is followed by the heroine's second senior brother saying that he wants to find the heroine, fearing that the heroine will be in danger when she encounters an evil cultivator. Let me ask you, isn't she on the black market? The previous article didn't mention that the heroine was on a mission? ? ?
Later, a character suddenly appeared, saying that he knew the heroine, and a plot suddenly appeared. This character saved a girl. There is no hint at all in the previous text, and the plot and characters that suddenly appear are really difficult to understand. Am I reading some heavenly book? ? ?
Don't use flashbacks indiscriminately! ! ! You can at least let the heroine go out to receive this task in the early stage, so that it won't feel awkward when you see it later.
It looks good, and the story is attractive. At least it makes people want to read more.
The writing is so messy. At the beginning, it is mentioned that the heroine and the hero are engaged, but in the introduction, the hero falls in love with the reborn heroine? ? ? What's the meaning? Does he know that is the heroine? Take a look first, this is a big thunder, I don't know what will happen next, I will change it after reading it It's very messy, so messy. One second, the heroine is still in the black market at the foot of Zongmen Mountain. The next second, the camera switches to the heroine's best friend. This is nothing, it's just a transition. But the next chapter is followed by the heroine's second senior brother saying that he wants to find the heroine, fearing that the heroine will be in danger when she encounters an evil cultivator. Let me ask you, isn't she on the black market? The previous article didn't mention that the heroine was on a mission? ? ? Later, a character suddenly appeared, saying that he knew the heroine, and a plot suddenly appeared. This character saved a girl. There is no hint at all in the previous text, and the plot and characters that suddenly appear are really difficult to understand. Am I reading some heavenly book? ? ? Don't use flashbacks indiscriminately! ! ! You can at least let the heroine go out to receive this task in the early stage, so that it won't feel awkward when you see it later.
It looks good, and the story is attractive. At least it makes people want to read more.
When will the names be unified?