Beast-Controlling Immortal Clan: from Orion to Ten Thousand Beasts Immortal Lord

It's good and looks good, it's really good. It feels like it can meet the starting point review standards. It's rare to see it here in Tomato. I hope to persist and also hope to activate my subjective initiative with more unconstrained and whimsical ideas. The author remembers to highlight the theme of beast control and also highlight the reasonable use and cooperation of the main family and the beast control. It seems that the pace is quite fast along the way. You can try to add some daily life of the beast control and the clan members, so that when the beast control dies, it will be more emotional. Otherwise, it will be dead and there will be no emotion.

This book feels really good. It hasn't been updated for several days. It's uncomfortable. There are a lot of low scores in the comment area. When I saw the latest one, I felt that the author was deliberately weakening the impact of heaven-level Taoism on the realm of Qi training. Heaven-level Taoism only began to exert its power when reaching the foundation-building realm. The latest one was quite enjoyable. In the longevity realm, except for the suppression of the big realm, it is basically a little invincible. The subject matter is also good. I don't understand why other people gave such low scores. It gets better after reading it.

The writing is not bad. I think the reason why this book is not popular is that the daily routine is written in too much detail. It should be cut down a little, otherwise it will always be a battle of wits and courage during the Qi training period. Moreover, this kind of battle of wits and courage is a bit invincible for the protagonist group. The people around the protagonist group should be more aggressive, so that the plot will be more intense.

The writing is very good, but it's not like the traditional Cultivation of Immortality, but has a bit of a Cthulhu flavor, so some readers may not be able to adapt to it if they have the Cultivation of Immortality tag. The last thing is that I don't understand why the Qi refining period is so powerful. How to describe the subsequent realm?

At present, there are some minor problems, but it does not affect reading. It is already much better than many of Tomato's immortality articles. I will give it five stars depending on the future development.

The blessed land of Hundred Beasts Mountain appeared suddenly without explaining it, and the plot jumped. There are not many big poisonous spots, but small poisonous spots are everywhere

It took me a long time to save less than 40 pictures. It was a bit painful, but then again, if you go slower, at least you write it carefully and not just a piece of writing.

Looks good, really good. The setting is interesting, except for the first few dozen transitions that are a bit abrupt. So far, it's a good book

If you like watching the group of characters fight wits, feel free to enter. If you like watching the protagonist kill everyone, I suggest you don't watch it.

Clear writing and complete content

Very well written!

I just like novels like this.

The settings are very good The setting is very good, the score shouldn't be so low, no matter what, it should be 8.5

Not bad, a ration book that you can read

The writing and logic are good, but it's more of a group portrait. The protagonist's family has had several foundations in the past ten years, but it's not really a lot of suppression.

The world view is very grand, and the rhythm is relatively good. Maybe it's because I just started to rate it, but the score is not high. It's really good to watch.

The writing is really good. I stayed up late to finish it. The writing is very good. Come on!

As beautiful as Lingyuan Fairy Road

I feel like I wrote it very well. Cheers, author [laughs]

To be honest, this kind of fairy cultivator and beast-controlling family is better looking than those little white novels. Why is the score so low?

The writing is good. It would be great if I could have a deeper interaction and connection with the beast masters. It is more like a novel about beast masters and immortal cultivators.