I Dated a Sweet, Yandere, but Fierce Girlfriend

The male protagonist gave me the impression that "people with high skills are bold", but he is indeed a high-skilled person, and it feels like he is being traced on the Internet, and is peeling off the cocoon. But now in terms of content (10.1), The interaction between the two seems to have decreased, maybe because the time between them has been longer. I don't know if the author will write about the daily interaction between the two later, or just follow the main line that can be seen so far... Because before reading it, I thought there would be more daily interaction between the two, but in the end there was not that much. It was more like two desperadoes, relying on each other and walking hard. The update around 9.30 Is supplementing the organizational settings of the world. It feels like there are people outside the people and mountains outside the mountains. If you can't stop the car, I will believe you if you say that the gray causal line is made by the Trisolarans using pasta mixed with No. 12 Concrete (just a joke). As for cause and effect, I think it's easy to explain things by focusing on what I say, but it's still difficult to really convince us. For example, cool movies are easy to write, but how many of them can really make people happy?

There is innovation in the content, but the psychological portrayal is a bit unnatural. You can write more specific psychological changes and each thought, and use these to replace unnecessary repeated emphasis. Content written with oneself in mind can avoid flat characters. At the same time, five stars provide encouragement

It looks good. I love watching it. Try something sweet and don't tense up the whole time.

The writing is good and the writing is very exciting now. A good book [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Why is no one watching? It's excellent among tomatoes.

Come on, author💪, your writing is pretty good.

It feels super strong and feels good to me. Why doesn't anyone read such a beautiful book?

The subject matter of this article is very good, and the change of the male protagonist's mood is also perfect. The author will try his best to update it.

More or less, even though I can do it, I just need to make it clear.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I don't know if it's because I was bitten by a dog today, but the vague feeling of imminent death resonated with the protagonist, and it felt very real [face covering]

It's very interesting. The new book doesn't have much data, so it may not look like much, but the writing is actually quite good. Wait, wait, wait, this change is a bit big, it feels like the book before and after is no longer the same.

It's pretty good. I hope I can continue writing.

Although I can't understand it, it looks pretty good

Personally, I feel that the early pace is a bit fast, and I don't know what will happen next. Hope it doesn't fall into the trap. The content is very exciting and feels good.

Looking forward to my first hand, author, come on

After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that the background is explained too quickly and a lot of things are listed at once. I think it needs to be a step-by-step process.

A very good book

Come on, come on, well written [Love]

A different world of raising ghosts

Looks good, come on, don't mess up

Okay, ok, ok

Looks good but I can't understand it The protagonist's personality is too exaggerated

There are so many exclamation points, which are surprising. Also, the mouth is very strong.

I didn't understand the front part, but the back part is really good.

The pacing is not good, but the overall story is still good, and the character description is also good. Come on, author!

Not bad, let's see what happens next. Come on, author.

Nice new book

A very novel BOSS battle: install the system on the BOSS

The development of the climax is a bit delayed, but overall it is still very good. The low rating is not due to the author. The rating of the book is the comprehensive rating of the platform.